Trapped |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1520137500000
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Oh no. Someone's going to die... |
Cookie_kitten « Consul » 1520202540000
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Chapter 8, FINAL CHAPTER! Akira As soon as the bell rings, I run towards a structure and duck behind it, barely dodging an anvil that the mouse created. I look around. I didn't see any of my teammates. Where are they? Another anvil flies towards we, and I quickly stop it only inches from my face. I am not throwing away my shot. I fling it back at her, but she dodges it. I run around the arena, dodging and blocking anvils that come towards me. I don't see anyone. I can't do this forever.. I duck behind another structure, and wait there. Nothing happens. I slowly peek out from my spot. The mouse was creating something with the anvils. She created this ball of anvils. A few minutes later, she threw the ball at the wall. As soon as it hit the wall, dozens of anvils that were going insane flew out, causing them to go crazy everywhere. I struggled to stop the anvils around me. A few hit me badly, giving me bad bruises. I looked around to see the mouse creating a shelter made of anvils. I tried moving the shelter and breaking it. I made it collapse on top of her, startling her. When I did that, the anvils stopped going crazy and dropped to the floor. So she must be controlling them... The mouse quickly pushed me onto the floor. I struggled to break free as she created a small anvil in her hand to try to hit me with. "When you die, tell your buddies Einean sent ya." she said. I shut my eyes tightly, when her grip loosened. I opened my eyes to see Cargill slowly become visible and throw Einean off of me. "Wha--" I started. Cargill pushed her to the ground. "Now!" he yelled. Dark appeared from his shadow form and held her down. Austin seemingly created some wind to help push her down. Jareth also help keep her down. "Akira! Get an anvil or something!" Cargill shouted. I quickly picked up an anvil. Pushing her down with my powers, I looked at her. I closed my eyes and slammed the anvil in her face. She stopped struggling. I sighed. It was over. The mouse in the middle opened the glass case he was in and walked to us. "Congratulations." he started. "You've won the battle. Choose 3 mice to take with you to freedom." I looked at my team. We knew who to pick. We walked to me and Eve's room. The announcer mouse unlocked the door and let Eve come out. Then we walked to Rebecca's room. We let her out. I looked at my team. "We can pick one more person." I told them. We decided to let another scared, confused mouse come with us. After we were ready, the announcer mouse said, "Come with me." We followed him into a hallway. At the end was a door. He pushed it open. A breeze of fresh air hit us. We looked out at the outside world we hadn't seen in so long. I smiled. We were free. We could live our lives. I took my first steps out the door and into freedom. why Two young mice sitting in their living room listened to the end of their mother's story. "...and that's how me and your father met." she finished. She looked at Dark with a smug look, him being a bit embarrassed that she had told.... SOME parts. The little mice cheered after the story. One of the young mice said, "That was a great story mom!" she started. "Now, can you tell us how babies are made???" roll credits |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1520210280000
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My extra writing (Beacause I want to) Random cleaning mouse walks into the room and starts picking up dead mice. "Wow. Everyones dead." "Yes. And I'm mad at you." A strange, deep, creaking voice answers. "Who are you?!" The cleaning mouse shouts, shaking in fear. "The Anvil God." A barrage of anvils fly at the mouse, who barely dodges. All he saw was the anvil god levitate a small, limp white and brown mouse into the air, and in a explosion of anvils, both were gone... Good story Cookie! Dernière modification le 1520219100000 |
Maskedjoker « Censeur » 1520216520000
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OH MY GOD XDD When Akari loved Dark the entire time Haha! And never children. Loved the story!!! |
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Nice story!! what happens after the credits? I wanna know |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1520287140000
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I'm going to miss this story, too. :( Can we get an afterwards chapter? Maybe they get together every once in a while, or to see how the others are coping with their freedom totally not thinking of Eve,Cargill, and Austin E: and the others, too, of course. Did Jareth and Dark ever become friends, friendly, or at least sparring partners? Dernière modification le 1520287260000 |