Hetaliagal a dit :

yeah, the arms are a bit uneven, like you said. they also look a bit too long.
the pupils are facing different directions if you look closely. the head looks a bit too small and there's multiple spots where you've coloured outside the lines. oh, and there needs to be shading in numerous places. (under the dress, hair, some on the face, ect)

but, i do happen to like how the hair looks. oh, and your hands are done really well.

ah thank you for including everything big and small so i know what to do when i draw next time
i like sticking with flat coloring because.. well. i'm lazy ;;

thank you. i like drawing hair most as well. :3

heh, no problem.

Chibi girl

Vivihi a dit :

Chibi girl

Hope this makes sense! I love the eyes, and good luck! ^^

Immagetcheez a dit :

Hope this makes sense! I love the eyes, and good luck! ^^

I understand a little. Yes I had trouble with the face, and the body, and the hair ends. I was watching a toturial while drawing this. FIRST time drawing a chibi.

I need major help..
E: And black box. This never works for me.

I agree. It never works for me either.

have a redline. linking becuase it's huge.
http://i.imgur.com/9X0SaOF.jpg
sorry about my extremely messy handwriting.
other than anatomy mistakes, you need to add shading and details to your drawings (unless you want it to be one of those drawings that has lots of colour and detail but no shading). there's a lot of shading/lighting tutorials on dA and probably even some that show you where to put details in clothing. books are highly recommended as well.

Nicolenixu a dit :

Hi! Well.. Here you go:
Please don't hate me, if I critiqued so much (wait, it isn't so much.. What ever -.-)! :(

omg thanks that helped a lot :D

are we all psoting traditional art now? :3


ignore that weird hand on the left chibi

I'm new to drawing, painting, etc..
But I think this is pretty good (For my work, at least)
Some Constructive criticism would be nice though so I can get better ^^;

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And thanks, Emily ^^
I'm new at this, so I haven't done much shading at all, I'm bad at dynamics, etc.. Thank you for the help ^^

^ That looks nice! Especially for a new artist xD
Althought some of it looks uneven.
The ears should be worked on abit more.



Made it with DA Muro :c

Im new to drawing! :D Its fun .
Heres one of mine.
Some Constructive criticism would be nice though so I can get better

E : Yeah i knew about the feet .
E : The ears should be bigger I agree.
E : I forgot the tail T_T

Snoweywhitep a dit :

^ That looks nice! Especially for a new artist xD
Althought some of it looks uneven.
The ears should be worked on abit more.

Thank you ^^ yours looks nice too
The feet are different sizes though. Other than that it looks so cool ^^
My friend yelled at me for using the circle tool, because apparently it's cheating if you use it (Even though aren't you suppose to use what they give you? ^^;.)
You're really good, expecially if you're new to it :D

Snoweywhitep a dit :

*insertpicturehere

The ears should be bigger and the feet should be more...mousely?
Unless it's supposed to look kind of humanlike. ._.

Snoweywhitep a dit :

^ That looks nice! Especially for a new artist xD
Althought some of it looks uneven.
The ears should be worked on abit more.


Made it with DA Muro :c

Im new to drawing! :D Its fun .
Heres one of mine.
Some Constructive criticism would be nice though so I can get better

E : Yeah i knew about the feet .
E : The ears should be bigger I agree.
E : I forgot the tail T_T

well, i guess the mouse could be a bit skinnier. mice aren't normally /that/ big around. he also needs a nose. the colouring should've been put in a layer underneath of the lineart. oh, and the mouse needs shoulders and elbows, not just hands coming straight out from the body. the bow needs to be placed up higher and the feet need to be facing towards the person who's looking at it, instead of just jutting out to the side. that was a bad explanation, but if you stand up with your left foot facing left and your right foot facing right, it wouldn't be a very comfortable position, now would it?

Hi, finished this not so long ago. I had a hard time debating whether to show the top view of the mouse in the cube or not. Cube perspectives... it would be lovely if someone were to clear this up. Front view was the intention, so didn't know whether to include top view... hue. Anyways, I was experimenting w/ brushes/pens, so any recommendations for pens/brushes would be lovely.

ART- DeviantART

A little help here please

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Graciekinz a dit :

A little help here please

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it looks kinda blurry

;; sorry can u still see it though.

it was a critique