Some anatomy criticism?

Fierying a dit :

~perfect critique~

Oh my gosh, thank you very much, your critique is very constructive and advanced, overpaint looks really better, thanks again <33

Marylovesshe a dit :

Some anatomy criticism maybe??

first thing i noticed, apart from fierying's critic is the hand..
one has 4 fingers and the other has 3
the fingers are also sharp at one hand, while the other is round(?)
don't mind the second one if the fingers are digging into the cheese

Hello, this isn't the first time I came here...so...
I would want someone that is "pro in kawaii" I wan't help for giving this drawing a +Kawaii way.
I prefer that the guy/girl that helps meh draw on it...for I have a better way to see. :3
Thanks.

critics?


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Mishkatave a dit :

Anatomy only huh~
HEHHHHHHHHH TOOTHLESS X3... heh im not really good in dragon anatomy but i would want to try
:I my anatomy can be wrong and stuff ;_;" im not like the perfect of perfect, im still learning.:

Toothless has very different anatomy from other dragons to be honest. i mean because Toothless is unique but it DOES not mean it has no anatomy of a dragon
so... ima start my crit (I HOPE I ARENT get ban for spamming crits :c welp) i dont hate you, and hopefully you dont hate me for my opinions.

Number 1: Photo reference
I suggest you to have loads of Toothless pictures, fanart or not, just get some, and just observe them.
I SUSPECT you have only taken one, which was a side view of toothless.
Thats not good enough, even if you did see it. Is like a crime work. One proof does not mean its the answer. you need many
So get different views of the object and study it.
As you study you can have a rough idea how long, thick thin, fat it is, its details, how it moves or flies

Number 2: Sketch it out!
Sketching helps, it can be a "waste of time" but its a useful way to picture how it WOULD look.

Number 3: Direction
I can tell Toothless is flying to the left.. but his face makes him look like flying towards us.
You have to question yourself : Where would he be facing?
draw a direction arrow to note yourself.

Number 4: The tail
If you look at the references, you would notice his tail are quite big o3o"

Number 5: Wings
You need to have some good observation and tutorials for this. Let me explain abit.
Wings.. for a start.. has to be big, so the creature would be able to fly,
another way is like birds, they are light, thats why that can fly, but idk about dragons..
But go up to wing tutorials, they will teach different parts of the wing andd can help you to understand why they are made like that.
All i can say is that make the wing bigger alright? :I

I cant think of much to say since you asked for only the Anatomy of something that is not.. offical.
I mean there are Dragon anatomy, i can tell abit more, but Toothless dont really have much of the same.. anatomy.
I mean toothless is a creation, not like a cat and you make it on your own but like an alien.. YEA!

So... i would try to apply what i have said myself and sketch an example to help you

Fierying a dit :

~perfect critique~

oh thank you so much I really need help because I have no drawing experience
otherwise I'm not good at drawing dragons

Mishkatave a dit :

oh thank you so much I really need help because I have no drawing experience
otherwise I'm not good at drawing dragons

I've just realise i was abit harsh there!
IM not saying you have to do it or anything, is up to you alright OAO""
also dont get stressed, it takes time to improve ;3;" i am still learning! ;3;""
sorry if you got abit offended!!

Fierying a dit :

I've just realise i was abit harsh there!
IM not saying you have to do it or anything, is up to you alright OAO""
also dont get stressed, it takes time to improve ;3;" i am still learning! ;3;""
sorry if you got abit offended!!

no problem I'm not at all ;_;

so it better?

http://x-italy-fan-x.deviantart.com/art/Practice-379716550
This is a painting I did, I would like some criticism on it ;u;
e: anyone??

i delet'd the last one.I dont think it needed because it was just a try at MS paint.
this is my test style and it needs improvement
my hand is shaky hard to draw on comp too cant afford tablet e-e
Poor coloring too sorry ._________.

Critic please ^^!

e: Just a sketch ;D - anything to add/do is perfect ♥

Immagetcheez a dit :

Critic please ^^!

well it is amazing.. O-o i just think the tail is too long i dont know :l you should be able the see the other part of the wings i guess on the left side of the mouse

Graciekinz a dit :

well it is amazing.. O-o i just think the tail is too long i dont know :l you should be able the see the other part of the wings i guess on the left side of the mouse

Ah yes they are there (see top of fingers) will make it more visible. Thank tho!

oh i'm sorry i didn't see that .. it's great whatssoever just add a ground lol so it dosen't float ^-^

good luck

Immagetcheez a dit :

Critic please ^^!

e: Just a sketch ;D - anything to add/do is perfect ♥

no ears?
finger lengths are uneven(might be from the angle and crap though)
the wing in the back should be lowered or more to the right(from the mouse's pov)
the left leg on the mouse also looks very high up.

instead of the feather just laying freely on the hand, it should be grasped otherwise it'd fly away
because as seen from the hair, the wind seems pretty strong

Thefourthone a dit :

no ears?
finger lengths are uneven(might be from the angle and crap though)
the wing in the back should be lowered or more to the right(from the mouse's pov)
the left leg on the mouse also looks very high up.

instead of the feather just laying freely on the hand, it should be grasped otherwise it'd fly away
because as seen from the hair, the wind seems pretty strong

what i was about to say but accidently clicked on a diff thread and lost all my content T_T
anyways pretty much what he said here ^_^~
But would like to add on:
Her belly is too small ^_^ it makes her chest looks big
the tail is .. "deformed"
and the eyes... i cant.. identify which is the eye actually ^^" you might want to consider
DONT take it as i hate you, that is REALLY fantastic! i LOVED it ,it just have some ... stuff that i dont agree to it ;;
.. no further a do, let me do a ROUGH red sketch on the "mistakes"

critique please~