Kamikitteh a dit :

critique please~

Will try.

First, the ears are upside down. Why?
Add more detail to the feet and hands.
The start of the tail is way thinner than the rest, make it the same size at the start of the tail at the body.
The right eye seems strange, the white part at the bottom is a bit off. Outline the rest of the eye to make it look better. If it's your style, don't listen to my last critique..

Swirlfire a dit :

Will try.

First, the ears are upside down. Why?
Add more detail to the feet and hands.
The start of the tail is way thinner than the rest, make it the same size at the start of the tail at the body.
The right eye seems strange, the white part at the bottom is a bit off. Outline the rest of the eye to make it look better. If it's your style, don't listen to my last critique..

what white part? (curious)

Kamikitteh a dit :

what white part? (curious)

The shine.

(another one)
critique? :<

http://imgur.com/nQFkceI.jpg

I need major critique ;_;

Done using MS piant :) You can see it's kind of.......pixelated? I can't find the word :3

Katsatuma a dit :

Done using MS piant :) You can see it's kind of.......pixelated? I can't find the word :3

it looks really shaky but that's MS paint for you
maybe you could try to draw a little slower

if someone could help, that'd be wonderful :3

this is a drawthis again meme thing i did


have i improved?

Soakitup a dit :

it looks really shaky but that's MS paint for you
maybe you could try to draw a little slower

I do draw while playing TFM. It's on the side of the screen XD. I don't have stuff like Gimp or photoshop. :(
BTW, shaky is the word I WAS looking for C: lol

this+this one


thanks ^^
(sorry I cant post as img here, its too large)

critique? i need help on shading

Anayag a dit :

this is a drawthis again meme thing i did

have i improved?

In some ways. You forgot her eyelashes and eyebrows. :P

Graciekinz a dit :

critique? i need help on shading

while I can't tell you how shading works, I will say this (which I refrained on your thread). It's cute, I like it, but he lines are SOOOO thick...and where's the nose and whiskers?

i hate putting nose and whiskers :c when i try it makes it look worse!

Oh gosh... I hope I'm not ghost-bumping or however it's said...

Would like some crtq on this-

Graciekinz a dit :

i hate putting nose and whiskers :c when i try it makes it look worse!

whiskers i understand (because i keep forgetting to add them) but nose is important.
i used not to draw nose too, but after awhile you will see it looks weird without a nose.. and its.. abit.. sad for the mouse to have no nose.. like it cannot smell.
o3o take it slow, over time, if you feel comfortable, try adding the nose on o3o

Musiukas a dit :

this+this one


thanks ^^
(sorry I cant post as img here, its too large)

I can't think of any critques for these pictures...they're brilliant :)

Kamikitteh a dit :

(another one)
critique? :&lt;

why didnt anyone cruitique? :c

Katsatuma a dit :

I can't think of any critques for these pictures...they're brilliant :)

This place is for critiques so please refrain from posting if you don't have anything to say except praises.

Kamikitteh a dit :

why didnt anyone cruitique? :c

Can you list some artists you would like to draw like? Sometimes it's best to have an idol to start off with.
It seems likyou're trying to have a cute/anime like style?

Kamikitteh a dit :

why didnt anyone cruitique? :c

I'd like to critque, but on this computer it has a blocking system which blocks all things inappropriate ;-; (that's for the fact that it blocks stuff like websites with movies and deviantart and imgur).
However, if you want me to critique, use Photobucket. For some reaso, it accepts that :D