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Bethdacat
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http://i.imgur.com/cvKi7u5.png
Please critique <3
Satash
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Bethdacat a dit :
Please critique &lt;3

Did. . . You use air brush?
What program did you use?

That tail is really big and the hair looks too off for your style.
Bethdacat
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Satash a dit :
Did. . . You use air brush?
What program did you use?

That tail is really big and the hair looks too off for your style.

I use paint for the coloring and background.
I use GIMP for the air brush, which is light and shade and extras, like the title.

It's my style, I liek really big tails e-e That's a rainbow dash hair.

I made this for my tribe make, Ninapie.
Marylovesshe
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hi hello how about some criticizm?

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/186/4/7/hhhnnggg_by_uglyirbis-d6c2h83.png
Musiukas
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Katsatuma a dit :
I can't think of any critques for these pictures...they're brilliant :)

oh damn, thanks ^^
Darklonewolf
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Marylovesshe a dit :
hi hello how about some criticizm?

The first thing I noticed was that one ear was very pointy, while the other one was round. And one the right ear some of the ear color got on the fur.
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Marylovesshe a dit :
hi hello how about some criticizm?

i think the colors went.... off the lines? how do i say that? in tagalog it is lampas
Mantlestar
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Kamikitteh a dit :
(another one)
critique? :&lt;

haha, this is so late

http://i.imgur.com/WhWCAeH.png
this is my 1st time critique-ing
i just red lined based on your style so you can just be kewl about it and be unique :')
Fierying
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Bethdacat a dit :
It's my style, I liek really big tails e-e

when coming to critques, dont say it is your style alright? is their opinion.
o3o..
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http://i.imgur.com/6uDZZ7F.png
I'll leave this here if someone wants to critique it kkkk xD
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http://i.imgur.com/DmzyLS5.png
Leaving it here, I hope someone can help me.
Nekoava
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It looks pretty good. :3 Though I think you should work on the hair- and paws. ^^
Beargirlfriend
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http://i.imgur.com/YrM6BB9.png
I used ms paint here.

I have sai too but dont use much
Graciekinz
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i tried ;;


http://i.imgur.com/hvI8oFp.png
sorry if too much! don't hate meeeeee ;; and nice shading put some shading on the left mouse face ^-^

and sorry for my bad handwriting
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http://i.imgur.com/wY7Vc2O.png
Something is bothering me about this picture. I need some criticism *-*!
Graciekinz
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i think the earing is soo long and feet too small and the right arm is too chubby small body long tail ;;

dont hate me i love ur arts D:
Wafflecookie
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Graciekinz a dit :
i think the earing is soo long and feet too small and the right arm is too chubby small body long tail ;;

dont hate me i love ur arts D:

I didn't care much about the earing :/
The arms and feet were bugging me a lot Dx!
I understand your criticism ^-^
Sadly though... it's too late to fix those mistakes ;;'
Mishkatave
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Graciekinz a dit :
critique? i need help on shading

I try to critique

http://i.imgur.com/YhwaKIl.png
Thefourthone
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Wafflecookie a dit :
Something is bothering me about this picture. I need some criticism *-*!

the body should be bigger, imo. it looks wayyy too small/thin
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Thefourthone a dit :
the body should be bigger, imo. it looks wayyy too small/thin

LOL... I just noticed that. That's gonna annoy me now.....
Must... redo... but... other requests.... ;A;''

EDIT:
Does this look any better?

http://i.imgur.com/mnADMKn.png
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