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Kiwibug
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is it too late to join the story?
if it is, i apologize

Name: Bubble
Which Chapter you want to be in: Any chapter.
Description: i have no ideas for one :c
Picture:
http://i.imgur.com/kRzsLEu.png
included personality because why not: Shy, insecure, doesn't like to strike up conversations, will only speak if comfortable.
Choobots
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#102
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Woah awesome
Bengalstar
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Haruhitastic a dit :
Another blood curdling was heard
blood curdling what

otherwise it sounds good o/

thank you for telling be able this typo o/
shall fix

and yes ty
Choobots a dit :
Woah awesome

thanks choo! :3
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shall add request above ^^
added ~
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I MIGHT get rid of the BR server chapter due to time
Maybe at the second series I shall add something like that
Imaewsome
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Y so Juicey!?!??!?!?

.u.
Bengalstar
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Imaewsome a dit :
Y so Juicey!?!??!?!?

.u.

because I made teh story
Moneypaws
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#106
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Planning to write the next chapter soon
Imaewsome
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#107
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Bumppp
Jsilv
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#108
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looks cutie
Marliaaa
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bump.... THIS IS GOING DOWN :( BAD SO SO BAD
Bengalstar
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Jsilv a dit :
looks cutie

awww thanks silvy qt :^)
Imaewsome a dit :
Bumppp

Marliaaa a dit :
bump.... THIS IS GOING DOWN :( BAD SO SO BAD

ty both for these awesome bumps c:
Imaewsome
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Bengalstar a dit :
awww thanks silvy qt :^)

ty both for these awesome bumps c:

Your welcomeee c:
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#112
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Hey, have my box full of bumps :)
Bengalstar
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Iwuvcheesed a dit :
Hey, have my box full of bumps :)

ty for bumps
idek when I'll have free time e.e
Imaewsome
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I've been searching and search for this thread just to bump it n.n
Bengalstar
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Imaewsome a dit :
I've been searching and search for this thread just to bump it n.n

ah, thanks ^^
here is the next chapter :3
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The Mysterious ID server

Chapter 7

Joel painfully opened his eyes, the blood stinged his eyes. To surprise, the cat had vanished. He carefully lifted up his foot, wondering if he could walk. He slowly got up, but then trembled and fell.
"How can I get back to Linxus and the others now?" Joel said to himself, angry as it seemed. He pounded his fists in anger, why had he done such stupid of a thing? With nothing much to do, he sat there and waited for someone to come. As a couple of minutes passed, he searched for a nice place to relax before the Team got here. The sharp-edged stones cut his paws and knees. In pain, he slowly layed down on a small foot print from a mouse. The idea struck his head, was the spotted mouse still here?
He could hear small whispers in the darkness.
"Oh where could have my pocket gone?" sighed a mysterious voice. Joel wondered if this was the spotted mouse. He heard the voice again, this time louder.
"Oh where could have my pocket gone?"
Joel tried to feel out where his belt was, to his surprise- it was gone. Maybe this mouse had found his belt? He was about to ask when the room was silent, but he was interrupted by another strange mouse- this time with a different voice.
"Quiet!" silenced the mouse, "I can hear another person moving!"
"But where could my pocket have gone?" cried the other mouse.
"Just be quiet!" yelled the strict mouse in anger.
Joel halted right where he was, he could notice two strange shadows. One of a mouse, and the other of a-.. cat?
"We've been caught, run!" scrambled the other mouse. The two shadows had suddenly faded in fright. Joel stood there, wondering if anyone would find him.
Another voice, this time it was calm. The mouse cautiously tossed a familiar looking belt in front of him, making hardly any sound. Joel slowly crawled his way to grab his belt, when all of the sudden the mouse quickly turned on and waved a modern flash light.
"Hmm.. new to the community?" asked the mouse. To his surprise, it had been the same mouse at the scene of the skeletal cat. Blinded by the light, he grabbed and hooked his belt onto his waist.
"Uh.." Joel paused. "May I ask who you are?"
"I am Xiaojiemei, a CFM Mod." replied Xiao in a friendly voice. Joel relaxed, knowing that she wasn't one of those strict mods. "And you are?" she added.
"I am Joel, a member of the Anti-hack Brigade." replied Joel. Xiaojiemei had know known what the fancy belts were for.
The ground rumbled, hard enough for Xiaojiemei and Joel to feel it.
"It's coming-" Xiao whispered in shock, "..again."
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Imaewsome
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Bengalstar a dit :
ah, thanks ^^
here is the next chapter :3
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The Mysterious ID server

Chapter 7

Joel painfully opened his eyes, the blood stinged his eyes. To surprise, the cat had vanished. He carefully lifted up his foot, wondering if he could walk. He slowly got up, but then trembled and fell.
"How can I get back to Linxus and the others now?" Joel said to himself, angry as it seemed. He pounded his fists in anger, why had he done such stupid of a thing? With nothing much to do, he sat there and waited for someone to come. As a couple of minutes passed, he searched for a nice place to relax before the Team got here. The sharp-edged stones cut his paws and knees. In pain, he slowly layed down on a small foot print from a mouse. The idea struck his head, was the spotted mouse still here?
He could hear small whispers in the darkness.
"Oh where could have my pocket gone?" sighed a mysterious voice. Joel wondered if this was the spotted mouse. He heard the voice again, this time louder.
"Oh where could have my pocket gone?"
Joel tried to feel out where his belt was, to his surprise- it was gone. Maybe this mouse had found his belt? He was about to ask when the room was silent, but he was interrupted by another strange mouse- this time with a different voice.
"Quiet!" silenced the mouse, "I can hear another person moving!"
"But where could my pocket have gone?" cried the other mouse.
"Just be quiet!" yelled the strict mouse in anger.
Joel halted right where he was, he could notice two strange shadows. One of a mouse, and the other of a-.. cat?
"We've been caught, run!" scrambled the other mouse. The two shadows had suddenly faded in fright. Joel stood there, wondering if anyone would find him.
Another voice, this time it was calm. The mouse cautiously tossed a familiar looking belt in front of him, making hardly any sound. Joel slowly crawled his way to grab his belt, when all of the sudden the mouse quickly turned on and waved a modern flash light.
"Hmm.. new to the community?" asked the mouse. To his surprise, it had been the same mouse at the scene of the skeletal cat. Blinded by the light, he grabbed and hooked his belt onto his waist.
"Uh.." Joel paused. "May I ask who you are?"
"I am Xiaojiemei, a CFM Mod." replied Xiao in a friendly voice. Joel relaxed, knowing that she wasn't one of those strict mods. "And you are?" she added.
"I am Joel, a member of the Anti-hack Brigade." replied Joel. Xiaojiemei had know known what the fancy belts were for.
The ground rumbled, hard enough for Xiaojiemei and Joel to feel it.
"It's coming-" Xiao whispered in shock, "..again."
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PLEASE TELL ME IF YOU FIND ANY TYPOS, THANKS!

I saw this and I was like

*Long big gasp*

*Pounds Fist On Table*

"OOOHH MY GODDD"
Bengalstar
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Imaewsome a dit :
I saw this and I was like

*Long big gasp*

*Pounds Fist On Table*

"OOOHH MY GODDD"

^^
shall write next chapter soon
Kiokosama
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Ack! I'm behind on reading them!!
Brb, reading *-*
Bengalstar
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Kiokosama a dit :
Ack! I'm behind on reading them!!
Brb, reading *-*

I didn't write many chapters so..
lel
Susanlwu
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bump!!!
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