[Fanfiction] Lost blade |
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pageget yesh - cannot wait!!!! more puns waht |
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Aw, pageget... I trusted youuuuu. Dx lol yes Tsunami's POV |
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Hmm actually I might start with Cliff because you know... he's confuse with love. He doesn't understand why it's in tennis. E: ok now who's POV? o.O |
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Squeakishly a dit : Oh yeah. True-- tennis wow. |
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Squeakishly a dit : Mr. Mustache |
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Splashclaweh a dit : Well it's a little late now I'm about ready to post 3rd chapter. |
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Squeakishly a dit : :D YAY |
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Chapter 3 Cliff's POV I looked up to see a girl who was dressed in all blue,"Hello Tsunami! Please don't destroy me, I'm just a little cliff" I said to her."Oh I wouldn't dream of it darling!" She said very sweetly. I tilted my head in confusion. Tsunami all of a sudden said to me "Do you believe in love at first sight, or do you need me to walk by again?" My eyes almost popped out of my head, I realised now she had a crush on me. So I played the innocent role "I don't understand love, Is it something you do in tennis or? I asked. "Ugh! You just don't get it do you?" She said storming off. "No,no I really don't understand" I said quietly. Rayne's POV We had been sitting backstage all day. It was seriously getting very boring. I saw an orange mouse and a girl dressed in all blue arguing, So I walked over there to see what was up. The orange mouse looked defeated once she walked away. "What happened?" I asked him, sounding much more nosy than intended. He looked up at me, for I was taller than him and he said "I don't know, why are you so tall?" "I have high heels on, duh" I answered. "Oh" He blankly said. "That girl had a crush on me and,... I don't want a girlfriend." He all of a sudden admitted to me. "Oh, I see" I told him. I felt bad for the kid because he seemed to feel very bad. All of a sudden, Just in time, Torio walked up to us with his mouth full and said "What are you two social butterflies doing?" Allthough it sounded like "Wblat are yu twvo foblo bufferbies doing?" I rolled my eyes. "Why do you care Torio?" I asked him back. Torio always wants to provoke people, and of course it worked on Cliff. "I would shut that big mouth of yours if I were-" I Held my hand over Cliff's mouth. "Let's not start any fights, guys." "Yeah!" Torio added. I glared at him. "You too, donut face." Tsunami's POV I ran outside and curled up into a ball. I felt a teardrop roll down my face. Why was Cliff so stupid? I asked myself. He frustrated me and made my first night horrible! I will never speak to him again. All of a sudden while I was sobbing a man walked out of the shadows. He held out his hand for me to grab. I just stared up at it. "Hello, miss. I'm Tristan" The tall man said. I just shook my head. "I don't like touching older men!" I pouted. "I'm not going to hurt you." I could tell by the look on his face he didn't mean for it to sound like that. I just laughed at him and stood up on my own. I brushed off my skirt. Tears still glistened in my eyes, although I was smiling. Tristan wiped them away for me "Hey! When did I say you could touch me?" I shouted at him. "Sorry" He mumbled. We walked until we reached backstage again. Words: 535 |
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TORIO'S DONUT FACE. I HAVE TO LAUGH AT THIS. also Tsunami don't cry. You just might flood the entire land/cliff! TRISTAN. IS AN OLD MOUSE. HE HAS GRAY HAIR AND STILL LOOKS SEXY. |
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Noobforevah a dit : My Chapters are so cheesey omg. You got post 111 vvv |
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Noobforevah a dit : These puns. Iltsm. and yes. Tristan will be forever sexy. He's sexy for all eternity. BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA - oh yay |
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Beautyiscool a dit : oh you lucky 111h post HMHMHM he'll be sexy, even his corpse. and no chedda. your chaps aren't cheesy at all. they taste like salsa. I can make really bad puns on this fanfic. (claps) just yes. vv you meant very funny or punny. I think I get your jokeee |
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Squeakishly a dit : very punny! I like this story, good luck with the rest of your chapters o/ If only it was posted on 11:11 koob kart. If only! |
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Littlechedda a dit : Haha, Thank you very much! e: HRMMM Want to be flooded with a new chap om, I'm jus tin huge writing mood I don't even know why. |
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Squeakishly a dit : well make the chap longert his time if you're just goiing to continue flooding us with chaps LOL wait tsunami wave of chapters. I DID IT. |
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yayayyayay chapters are awesome k |
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Mm I need to make chap wit susan's Character in it. Ok. I need to get to work right now. Ah only one more POV and I'm done with chapter 4 |
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Pssssst, Mr. Mustache |
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ONE MORE POV? ILY. also here have this. ![]() vv do it. also next post is a pageget. |
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i need to draw some fanart |