Kamikitteh a dit :

critique please~

I try to critique

Critique?

Vivihi a dit :

Critique?

Again try

Mishkatave a dit :

Again try

stoppppp

Satash a dit :

stoppppp

stop what

where's the nose also :o and sorry if some aprts are suppose to be like that

Well the hair style I want it to be like that, and the bangs on the side, thats how I want to do it. But thanks for the critique!

I dont want to add a nose, cuz it looks better that way

Mishkatave a dit :

Again try

Thanks! But the only thing Im concerned about is the nose. I think the girl looks better without the nose tbh

Satash a dit :

stoppppp

YOU STAPPPPPP

Murderous Mouse

Skellies a dit :

Murderous Mouse

I hope it helps c:

Ps: sorry for my sloppy hand writting and stuff Q^Q

Edit : The yellow is how i fixed it.

SHH DONT SAY ANYTHING ABOUT THE HORRIBLE BG K xD
PSHXNMWIJXN I deleted this one in imgur by accident,But new one down there so cx

i srsly think thats adorable ^^ i think u just need to outline it... a little darker thats it

If your talking about the flowers.. I fixed it? Cx


Kay not really,I just lightened the coloring inside since its kinda hard to change the outlines D:

i think it looks nice nows c: but i noticed the bottom has a little ruff outline.. its not smooth but other then that ITS PERFECTOOOOOO CX

Mishkatave a dit :

YOU STAPPPPPP

i think he does not want you to critque because you are just basically tracing on it, we dont see any difference, we see no comments how to improve.
you have to understandcritquing is to help the artist to improve, not tracing over anyhow .
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and to be honest to some of the current critiques i see, they arent really explainative.
We want to see more mistakes and learn them and put them in the future.
we need explainations why it is like this, not just saying like "this is too small, change it" <;-- Why?
this is just my thoughts alright? NOT SAYING YOU GUYS ARE BAD, nope nope ;; no hard feelings! but thats really what i think about it

Yus yus yus, I need some good criticism!(Please? ; u ;)
Before I finish this picture, I want to make sure at least some of the anatomy is right ;A;...
Big picture, sorry ;;'
It's a sketch so cannon balls may be deformed and the ground could be a bit slanted, but the mouse's legs are just not working out for me Dx!
Thankchus for whoever critics this ; w ;!

Fierying a dit :

i think he does not want you to critque because you are just basically tracing on it, we dont see any difference, we see no comments how to improve.
you have to understandcritquing is to help the artist to improve, not tracing over anyhow .
.
and to be honest to some of the current critiques i see, they arent really explainative.
We want to see more mistakes and learn them and put them in the future.
we need explainations why it is like this, not just saying like "this is too small, change it" &amp;lt;;-- Why?
this is just my thoughts alright? NOT SAYING YOU GUYS ARE BAD, nope nope ;; no hard feelings! but thats really what i think about it

Thank you Fierying for explaining to Mishkatave even if I'm rude.

But I have to wonder if my own redlines when I used to do them were even helpful?

ehehehehe


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NOPE I FAIL AT BACKGRAOUNDS

and need help w/shading

gimp confused me so i used mypaint

Vivihi a dit :

Critique?

well, there are some problems
the eyes aren't on the right spot,
the right foot (on the girl's perspective) is too turned
and also, try adding fat on the legs and arms (but not too much :P)
and oh, try sketching the body first, then the clothes and hair
(you can do it traditionally then scan, then trace it and color it on any art program you have. EXCEPT PAINT. Any program that supports layes are fine :D)
~

Susanlwu a dit :

ehehehehe

and

NOPE I FAIL AT BACKGRAOUNDS

and need help w/shading

gimp confused me so i used mypaint

uhh
on the first pic, the mice has minor problems.
The naked mouse (aka the *souris, or that's what i would like to think of it) has it's fur on it's right. o_o
The panda mouse is so steady that it looks like he/she isn't aware that he/she is even standing on another mouse AND tilted on a dangerous angle

oh and if you need help shading, just use the blur tool (does mypaint have a blur tool?)
Your shading looks fine (except for the parts w/ shadow)
~
i think this isnt a good critique, i hope you understand it >_< (my first language isn't english, sorry)

Vivihi a dit :

Well the hair style I want it to be like that, and the bangs on the side, thats how I want to do it. But thanks for the critique!

I dont want to add a nose, cuz it looks better that way

Thanks! But the only thing Im concerned about is the nose. I think the girl looks better without the nose tbh

Maybe a tiny nose would look nice, like a little rounded half-circle type nose? Just a suggestion.