reposting

ohmy , i knew there was trouble when there is a sentinel posting :o

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Tailtong a dit :

reposting

it's a bit confusing. the nose is a bit too big :x

I am trying this again. No harsh comments about these drawings please.




Tilted. I know.



I know you cant see that diamond well in that picture. ^^ It's so small...

Micefamilies a dit :

I am trying this again. No harsh comments about these drawings please.
Tilted. I know.


I know you cant see that diamond well in that picture. ^^ It's so small...

The faces are kind of tilted/sideways, is that intentional?

Satash a dit :

The faces are kind of tilted/sideways, is that intentional?

I guess thats just how I draw it... o_o

halp pls.

Thefourthone a dit :

halp pls.

First of all, thats an amazing picture. But i noticed somethings.

1) the chin , it is not even with the sides, if it was loking aother way, that would be alright.
2) I've noticed alot of spots, that werent filled in correct. Like on the bottom of your scarf there is alot of places, where the shading rather, went out of line, or werent colored in completely.

other then that. It is amazing. I hope i explained it right :P

i know its big
help with anatomy pls, redline pls
and also shading :D
dont critique the lineart because
preserve opacity> random stuff to add

Buggzie a dit :

First of all, thats an amazing picture. But i noticed somethings.

1) the chin , it is not even with the sides, if it was loking aother way, that would be alright.
2) I've noticed alot of spots, that werent filled in correct. Like on the bottom of your scarf there is alot of places, where the shading rather, went out of line, or werent colored in completely.

other then that. It is amazing. I hope i explained it right :P

i don't really understand the first part of the critique
but the second, most of that was intentional and others were hard to see because of the glare from the sun. but yh. not gonan lie, i really did rush that part lmao. and thanks for the compliment ^_^

Mantlestar a dit :

i know its big
help with anatomy pls, redline pls
and also shading :D
dont critique the lineart because
preserve opacity> random stuff to add

on one hand the fingers are fine but the other hand they are pointy ;; don't hate me, i love your art :x

No harsh crits please.

Kayleekitti a dit :

No harsh crits please.

The blush marks should be where the cheeks are, not RIGHT under the eyes. Maybe but the blushing lower a bit?

Um...Not rlly much to critique

Kayleekitti a dit :

No harsh crits please.

First off,what's with the floppy collar,and also the way you shade.You should not leave blanks in your shading.It will make it look like darker colours are slapped on it's body.The cat should have a more upright body,instead of a hunched back.Also,what's with the dots right below the eyes?What are they?The cat's lighting cheeck lines should not be touching the brown parts,but this part is just my opinion.Oh,also the ears are not about the same size.You should adjust it.

Please learn how anatomy works. Every time I see a piece of art by you your characters are basically spineless. They move every which way and if a human actually moved that way it would be because they were paralyzed or seriously injured.

- One eye is larger than the other.
- The paws are oddly sized, one is smaller than the other three.
- No inside of the ear?
- Cats have whiskers
- Cats also have mouths. Apply this line and the one above to whatever the lines below the nose aren't.

Haruhitastic a dit :

Please learn how anatomy works. Every time I see a piece of art by you your characters are basically spineless. They move every which way and if a human actually moved that way it would be because they were paralyzed or seriously injured.

- One eye is larger than the other.
- The paws are oddly sized, one is smaller than the other three.
- No inside of the ear?
- Cats have whiskers
- Cats also have mouths. Apply this line and the one above to whatever the lines below the nose aren't.

though how much i do agree on you, but thats really kind of rude...
and i dont see how you are kinda helping the artist abit.
Not all artist learn by anatomy, give them time. maybe years.
.
and i just wanna add on to some more points o3o" for you Kayleekitti!
you dont have to follow these, you can just stock them in your brain library for future ^_^.
also i cant really draw cats but ima just suggest stuff on like... colors and stuff like that.
As i understand for really young artist they dont really Care about anatomy or lighting and stuff, because what you guys are doing is giving out your crativity but does not understand on like er... you know... i mean i have been there! so i understand, lets start!

Anatomy:
1. as much as i dont wanna talk about anatomy, but the head makes the body looks big. scrolling through pictures about cat anatomy can help abit on how they look ^_^"

2. The legs looks abit boneless .. n-no harshing or anything.. but my opinion. and i can understand because its back leg is being blocked by the wall. but if you actually remove the wall, the backleg is ... not really where it should be oo"...
to kinda fix the backleg problem, do the sketch 1st \o. dont add the wall 1st and just sketch out the cat. background and stuff can be added later.

Coloring and Shading:
1. You have to know where is light going at,
like.. all pictures have to have one, as you go on you would understand this \o\. But for now for now i can give a tip for you: When doing your sketch, make an arrow pointing and.. any direction. The arrow you drew is going to be the light source. i will explain how it will help.
1a. This comes to shading! yay. i dont know how to express my thoughts through commenting so here is a sketch on shading.


i think thats all i have to say (i do have some more really o3o"" but idk how to express it so D:)
overall, it is cute and nice but can be improved o/

any critiques?