Fierying a dit :

though how much i do agree on you, but thats really kind of rude...
and i dont see how you are kinda helping the artist abit.
Not all artist learn by anatomy, give them time. maybe years.

If you don't like how I critique then please speak with me about it in game or on CFM, don't make it public as it derails threads. If what I said was "rude" then I assume you've never been to an art school because the critiques they give there are twenty times harsher.
Nobody else who had critiqued the work had even mentioned the anatomy which I have noticed has been an issue for quite some time, and I don't even draw.
So yeah, tl;dr: if you have an issue with me take it up with me in private. Don't make a big deal out of it in public. Thank you.

Youngness a dit :

The first one: The arms are longer than the entire body of the mouse. Picture that on a human... that'd look weird, no? Also, the tail ornament sinking into the fur of the mouse looks just odd.
The second one is nicer; I'll let someone else judge it who has more proper drawing skill.

Froggymypet a dit :

any critiques?

Why does the tail ornament hang on by a string? On the edge of the tail at that? Look at how it hangs on the mouse's tail in reality. It's not on the edge. The rest of the art is differently styled compared to the mouse and it pops out just way too much @-@

Crit has hard has you like.

idk what i'm doin i need help

Finnys a dit :

idk what i'm doin i need help

help ? that's amazing ;;

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm i think the hat on the right should be on top of the fur.. on the head

Graciekinz a dit :

help ? that's amazing ;;

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm i think the hat on the right should be on top of the fur.. on the head

yea probably it's kind of just sitting on the top isn't it that's weird

Finnys a dit :

idk what i'm doin i need help

I'm not much of a pro critquer here, but I think the feet are too triangular. The ears on the right mouse are a bit too down than the left mouse's ears. But everything else is fine.

Juliasaysmeh a dit :

I'm not much of a pro critquer here, but I think the feet are too triangular. The ears on the right mouse are a bit too down the the left mouse's ears. But everything else is fine.

thank u

Finnys a dit :

thank u

i think u should stop drawing

Soakitup a dit :

i think u should stop drawing

no go on

Alikha a dit :

no go on

yes

I'm posting this again. Please HELP me. NO HARSH CRITS



Tilted. I know.


I know you cant see that diamond well in that picture. ^^ It's so small...

Old picture, but can somebody help?

Iwuvcheesed a dit :

Old picture, but can somebody help?

the first thing that i noticed is that it looks like you saved it as a jpeg file over and over again
(bad quality)

also what is that that comes out to the left
an arm
a tail

i think it's supposed to be a tail
it's pretty long, actually. you should shorten that a bit. or just make it not show up in the picture at all.

Finnys a dit :

idk what i'm doin i need help

huge ears
and floating arm on the left mouse's left arm
right mouse's right foot is overlapping the leg
cute art though

Iwuvcheesed a dit :

Old picture, but can somebody help?

it's missing a ear

Criticque? First avatar xD

Karusayshi a dit :

Criticque? First avatar xD

Cute ^^.

Hmm, the bowtie should be a little further up so it looks like it's on her neck, not chest. That's the first thing I noticed. The feet should be a flat on the ground, too, not facing forward :p. As for her paws, well she has no arms or shoulders.
The tail could be thinner and the bow on the tail looks like it's floating and not attached. Just wrap a little string around the tail and it would look fine to me.
The hair is is fine except one thing; instead of black lines, you could try to make the lines the next colour. If that makes sense. Like the black line in between red and orange could just be red, for example. It'd look more natual.
One ear is a bit bigger than the other and flower is directly on one ear. You could try to move it more to the left, closer to her eye. Oh, and she has no nose :c!

critique?

Buggzie a dit :

critique?

I really, really think that's freakin' adorable.

Anyways, onto my critque. First, the colouring is kind of... everywhere. Some lines intersect when they shouldn't, shading is out of the line art, and some colours mix with others. I'm not sure if that was intentional, though.
The scarf seems to be floating around her neck. The rest of it seems a little to small, but it's fine. Oh, and the neck itself seems kinda long.
Her right arm is kind of skinny, don't you think? Compared to the other one, anyway. You decide what you wanna do without that :p.
Lastly, she doesn't... have a nose.

Nezumini a dit :

I really, really think that's freakin' adorable.

Anyways, onto my critque. First, the colouring is kind of... everywhere. Some lines intersect when they shouldn't, shading is out of the line art, and some colours mix with others. I'm not sure if that was intentional, though.
The scarf seems to be floating around her neck. The rest of it seems a little to small, but it's fine. Oh, and the neck itself seems kinda long.
Her right arm is kind of skinny, don't you think? Compared to the other one, anyway. You decide what you wanna do without that :p.
Lastly, she doesn't... have a nose.

Lol thanks c: and bout the coloring..i just started getting lazy XDD but thanks for the tips c: im gonna try fixing it :D but not now.. lazyness has taken over me T_T