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Marliaaa a dit :

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Susanlwu a dit :

bump!!!

ty both for the bumps ^-^

bumping for next chapter
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The Mysterious ID server

Chapter 8

I quickly tied on my belt and searched for my walkie talkie. The footsteps grew louder and louder each second until they finally stopped. Xiaojiemei stood as still as a rock, aching to look back. The only thing that Xiaojiemei could hear was Joel's heart beating fast with worry. Xiaojiemei slowly turned around. I covered my eyes in fear of what would happen next.

"D-don't move.." Xiaojiemei whispered, her breath taken away. She stood in shock as she stared straight to the skeletal cat's eyes. The room lights barely lit up the cavern, but you could still see large close-up objects- and sight wasn't our best sense anyways. The skeleton evily glared at Xiajiemei, slightly purring at the sight of her fear. It slowly walked towards us with a keen look on it's face.

Xiaojiemei immediately turned back, crying in pain. Joel quickly hugged her, trying to cheer her up. He knew that the cat would show no mercy, but that doesn't mean it'd be the end of their lives. Joel was just about to run when Xiajiemei bursted up in excitement

"Quickly, write something on this wall!" urged Xiajiemei. Not sure of her plan, Joel carefully wrote a small message on the wall. It glowed brightly, just as bright as the stones he passed by earlier.

All the sudden, several different mice came, each writing words on the dark, cold cavern wall.

"/ban Jirlobot" yelled Xiajiemei across the room. Joel realized what she was doing, she was going to vote ban the cat. Several of the mice replied, shouting out "1/5" or a different number.

Immediately, the cat exploded in thin air, leaving nothing but a slip. One of the mice picked it up, slowly reading the words.

"J-I-R-L-O-B-O-T o/" carefully spoke the mouse. He was confused of why something that strange was a player. The most confusing of all parts was how the cat could have been banned in the first place, this was obviously CFM. Joel stared at Xiaojiemei, waiting for an answer (although he never asked her the question). She smiled and walked right back to the tunnel, taking her time. Joel quickly caught up with her.

"So when will the cat come back?" asked Joel in wonder, "and how can you use transformice commands?"

"The cat will come back in an hour," replied Xiaojiemei. "and your second question is quite complicated to explain, let's just say it was a one time thing with the cat."
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please tell me if you find typos in there and stuff

sorry everyone haven't been working much on the story because of time :(

i has slowly lost track ;(

Wingcestor a dit :

i has slowly lost track ;(

not surprised

ugh wow it's been over a week sorry everyone

am i in a sorry yet im 2 lazy too check

Marliaaa a dit :

am i in a sorry yet im 2 lazy too check

I don't want to spoil anything for you so you'll have to see

bumping in case if I'm going to write anymore chapters

also I'm working on a different story and I might just explain everything about the story before I request a lock
I'm not requesting a lock now in case if I write more chapters but I think this story is dead tbh

Bengalstar a dit :

bumping in case if I'm going to write anymore chapters

also I'm working on a different story and I might just explain everything about the story before I request a lock
I'm not requesting a lock now in case if I write more chapters but I think this story is dead tbh

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!

this story is AMAZING!

keep writing T^T

TEAM OPPA. LOL. THIS STORY NAME. I CAN'T EVEN.

Bengalstar a dit :

ugh wow it's been over a week sorry everyone

*takes one month to finish chapters sometimes*

uhhh

I have to admit, at a first glance, this story is interesting. I'm not sure, since I just looked at it for a short while however. I did notice stuff that was off, like

"/ban Jirlobot," Xiaojiemei said.

How would she say '/'?

Maraoone a dit :

*takes one month to finish chapters sometimes*

uhhh

I have to admit, at a first glance, this story is interesting. I'm not sure, since I just looked at it for a short while however. I did notice stuff that was off, like

"/ban Jirlobot," Xiaojiemei said.

How would she say '/'?

slash? o3o

Bapyessir a dit :

TEAM OPPA. LOL. THIS STORY NAME. I CAN'T EVEN.

ik

Maraoone a dit :

*takes one month to finish chapters sometimes*

uhhh

I have to admit, at a first glance, this story is interesting. I'm not sure, since I just looked at it for a short while however. I did notice stuff that was off, like

"/ban Jirlobot," Xiaojiemei said.

How would she say '/'?

when I think about it now she probably wouldn't be able to say the slash, but to make it look like she vote banned jirlobot I put in the slash (probably confused a lot of people sorry)

"evilly glared at Xiajiemei"
meep
ouo

Firebluestar a dit :

"evilly glared at Xiajiemei"
meep
ouo

oh ty for telling me about the typo fibs

how is this on page 2

I don't mean to spoil all of this but sadly I'm going to focus more on other IRL stuff rather than this fanfic

What was supposed to happen at the very end of the ID chapter is that Wingcestor, Xiaojiemei, and the team would group up and destroy the huge laggy cat. After they destroy it, they once again meet Choo which follows the team along until Xiaojiemei leads them to another dock which is located on the other side of the ID server. When they reach the shore they say their goodbyes and what not.
At the deathmatch scene/Koffe the team wakes up to a surprising alarm which tells all mice to head to the dock (weird, right?). They found out later that Marlia had set off the alarm, not the admins. When they reach the dock they notice the boat keeper and a HUGE crowd of mice. The team realizes that there was indeed some strange clouds ahead. Although it was a great idea to leave, Team Oppa stayed to figure out what was happening.
As predicted, it was a storm. The biggest one they would have ever seen. More and more mice left and fled to Koffe, while the others stayed. The ones that did stay were surprisingly either noobs or rebels. The rebels had favored deathmatch as their skill and were going to instead of evacuating like normal mice, they would take on the storm with their skills and skills only. Team Oppa tried to get the noobs to a safe place, but it was no use. Before the noobs could get on top of a tree, it was too late. The wave had crashed onto the island which then sent Team Oppa scattered around (eww my spelling). They noticed quickly that the deathmatch players survived the wave and surprisingly gained strength from it. Linxus started calling for help, hoping they'd respond. One mouse came over, his name was Cold. He greatfully told the mice how to play deathmatch and told him skills he had learned as a young mouse. The team started to learn slowly and slowly, until finally they could keep up with Cold. He told them to follow him to where the other mice were, and so they listened. Cold told them that they were going to follow the mouse way over by the sea as planned. It looked like a speck to the team, but they agreed and followed anyways. The mouse that was way over by the sea was Nick. They called him the Lone Wolf mainly because he'd normally fly alone during the darkest hours. While the team was cannon jumping over across the sea, Nick told them a few tricks along the way, like how to attack your enemies, how to defend, how to circle jump. They thanked Nick along the way. The whole deathmatch group stopped for a moment, realizing that there was actually a huge storm along the way. Even Team Oppa could see that there was a small cyclone looking thing ahead. Nick ordered everyone to turn around and head to Koffe, and so they did as fast as they could. By then the noobs had found their way on higher land, so they no longer needed help. Even then Team Oppa lead them towards Koffe --one cannon at a time, where they knew it would be more safer. It took less than an hour for the team to head to Koffe, which then Sydoline held a scroll. It looked as if it was the one that The Hack Brigade wrote on, which was strange. What would Sydo want to do though with these hacks? And then there was Lewbot, a rebel to the admin team. Even then it was slightly confusing for the EN Anti-Hack brigade to figure out what was going on. Linxus tried calling Tig, but Sydoline had actually tied up the rest of the admins back stage, including tigrounette. Sydoline had the other walkie talkie, which she carried in her belt (?). From where did she get the belt? It wasn't just Linxus' walkie talkie though, there were many more. They were from FR, TR, BR, RU, more than you'd think. As the town clock struck 12', all the walkie talkies for some reason vanished in thin air (not including what the teams had, though).
"Your time is up!" screamed Sydoline. Before the team knew what was going on, she read the directions of hacks on the scroll, which then turned Koffe to the glitchiest spot in the world. Towers and towers fell apart and all the mice scattered everywhere, searching for a safe place. Even the Mods couldn't do anything about the situation, for they had no powers what so ever to ban an admin. The only mouse though who wasn't scared, was lewbot. Lewbot and the Rebels as they knew standed in a huge crowd, staring straight at Sydoline. In a flash, before Sydoline could even charge at them, they teleported. They weren't using hacks though, they had used Sydoline's own lag. Furious, Sydoline summoned a huge herd of Exploding sheep which then set everything on fire and explode as you would normally predict. Thousands of mice screamed for help as they were being eaten away by the fire. The rebel team tried their best to help the mice, but sadly enough, they could not help them all. Sydoline summoned another exploding sheep herd, which hurt the rebel team badly. They were scattered everywhere, just like the other mice. The only surviving team left was the EN anti-hack brigade. Realising that they still had their walkie talkies (just not sydo), they called other teams as well (which was one thing they could do). They called TR, FR, BR, you name it!
*insert huge fighting scene here* *sydoline gets killed slowly*
at the very end of the chapter they had noticed right away that a few mice survived. Marliaa, Iwuvcheesed, Imae, and bubble. The team actually heard someone coughing and noticed right away that it was Lewbot. They rushed right ahead to try to find Lewbot, which was under tons and tons of debris (eww my spelling). Lewbot coughed and wished the team very good luck, hoping that they'd survive. His words at the end "Y-you did it, y-you actually d-did it." (there were more things that he probably would have said too).

At the end ofc EN was a huge mess with the storm and the attack and what not but at the end Team Oppa freed the other admins and saved they day. This scene marks as the players who left and got a life (since most were killed off)
There were plenty of more survivors as well, just that Team Oppa hadn't noticed them until later.

i was also possibly going to make a new set of chapters just for what happened after only but eh what's the use. It would have been just the ruins of Koffe 100 years later and the EN anti-hack brigade promotions which made them mods and what not. Then they had to take care of the EN server (which was low populated after what had happened) and yeah more adventures to tell. Not to forget a lot more hackers too since the admins were too lazy to ban them all :P

Also sorry for typos and what not but that's pretty much what was supposed to happen, ty for reading