Conwolf a dit :

Judging: Griffincraft (2)

Anatomy: 5.5/7
Detail: 3.5/4
Neatness:4/5
Colors:1/4
Originality: 4/7
Impact: 3.5/7
Theme: 4/5
Explanation: The cat’s anatomy is a lot better, though the cat doesn’t seem to have a muzzle. The muzzle is too high up and there is no distinction, like a cat would have. The colors are way too bright for being in a hole. I can tell that there supposedly is a light source from the front/right, but when you look out the mouse hole, you see blackness, which doesn’t make any sense. The light seems to be coming from there but I can’t see the actual light... The background doesn’t really give that hellish feeling, but more of a boring and plain one. The perspective is still strange. The picnic blanket seems like it is “falling and sliding” off of nothing. There is also absolutely no shadows on the wall, even though you shaded everything else. The brown mouse holding the spatula is now actually making contact, but it just looks like the spatula is laying on their paw. There are folds on the blanket and banners but because they are just lines, I can’t really understand how they are creased. The colors are a bit too saturated and make the scene appear more upbeat. It’s quite misleading.

Advice - Fold some cloth and see how it looks. Or if you’re too lazy like the rest of this generation, google it.
Multiple Themes: 2 (+1)
TOTAL: 26.5/35

Spoiler

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