Hetaliagal a dit :

the bow is too low on the body, it looks like it's more on the torso than on the neck
the ears should be a tad bit bigger
the feet need thighs/legs, feet usually don't stick out at the sides like that

other than that i think it looks fine, the arms could be fixed up a little too

Thanks, Ill try to improve and make those things better c:.

thanks for critique

the picture is really blurry. i know paint can make pictures blurry but i haven't seen it that blurry before. you must've saved it as a .jpeg over and over again. also, the block that the mouse on the right is leaning against isn't straight.
anyways, let's start with the mouse on the left:

there's a few uncoloured spots in the wings
i can't even tell where the arms are, you should make them longer and more visable
feet should be longer
missing an ear, but you don't need to add a full ear due to the direction the mouse is facing
ears and head need to be connected instead of seperated by lines
the lines for the lineart should be thinner, not as thin as the lineart for the cheese though.
eyes should be placed a bit lower
the mouse needs a snout; mice don't have flat faces like a persian cat

for the mouse on the right:

the tail is too long
i can't really tell where the legs are places because of the skirt thing overtop of them, but they look to be right close next to the block. they should be placed back a bit farther.
again, it's missing an ear, but you don't need to add a full ear due to the direction the mouse is facing
the mouse needs a snout
the feet look too short and stubby, but instead of making the feet longer at the front, maybe make it longer at the back, so the feet at the front don't overlap the block the mouse is leaning against

Hetaliagal a dit :

the picture is really blurry. i know paint can make pictures blurry but i haven't seen it that blurry before. you must've saved it as a .jpeg over and over again. also, the block that the mouse on the right is leaning against isn't straight.
anyways, let's start with the mouse on the left:

there's a few uncoloured spots in the wings
i can't even tell where the arms are, you should make them longer and more visable
feet should be longer
missing an ear, but you don't need to add a full ear due to the direction the mouse is facing
ears and head need to be connected instead of seperated by lines
the lines for the lineart should be thinner, not as thin as the lineart for the cheese though.
eyes should be placed a bit lower
the mouse needs a snout; mice don't have flat faces like a persian cat

for the mouse on the right:

the tail is too long
i can't really tell where the legs are places because of the skirt thing overtop of them, but they look to be right close next to the block. they should be placed back a bit farther.
again, it's missing an ear, but you don't need to add a full ear due to the direction the mouse is facing
the mouse needs a snout
the feet look too short and stubby, but instead of making the feet longer at the front, maybe make it longer at the back, so the feet at the front don't overlap the block the mouse is leaning against

Thanks so much!

Vivihi a dit :

You dun need no halp! YOU ARE A PRO!

Oh wait thought this was ur thread, sorry gonna edit in critique

E: (Critique)

The outline of the hair looks a bit messy? Maybe make it more smooth and straight and not so much bumps there?
The arms' outline is the same and the dress.
The left arm is skinner than the right arm, fix that maybe?

thanks

since nobody critiqued that much on the chibey (thanks gracie :3) (and yes i spelled chibi "chibey")
can somebody help me with this?


help with shading or anything
redline is best
harsh critiques are okay

Mantlestar a dit :

since nobody critiqued that much on the chibey (thanks gracie :3) (and yes i spelled chibi "chibey")
can somebody help me with this?

help with shading or anything
redline is best
harsh critiques are okay

you should try to not put shading everywhere (middle of the hair and face)
then its cheek near the left eye is way too big imo
you should've tried making the right paw's shading less lighter than the body's and left paw's
the posy should have a liiittle bit of shading too and same goes for the scarf
also you should try getting rid of the blue lineart like picking the color nearest to the line and drawing on it
otherwise than that its quite nice
ask when you understood something wrong

Tailtong a dit :

you should try to not put shading everywhere (middle of the hair and face)
then its cheek near the left eye is way too big imo
you should've tried making the right paw's shading less lighter than the body and left paw
the posy should have a liiittle bit of shading too and same goes for thescarf
also you should try getting rid of the blue lineart like picking the color nearest to the line and drawing on it
otherwise than that its quite nice
ask when you understood something wrong

thank you~ *-*
you will always see me overshading but that's a very nice critique
again, thanks c:

help k be as harsh as u want i just need HALP

I think it's perfect. ^-^ To me, you need nothing to complete but more art!!

E~



Be as harsh or cruel as you want or please. I just want to know how I can make better art. (Note:All my arts are drawn from a mouse. I don't have a tablet. .-.)

Nekoava a dit :

I think it's perfect. ^-^ To me, you need nothing to complete but more art!!

E~


Be as harsh or cruel as you want or please. I just want to know how I can make better art. (Note:All my arts are drawn from a mouse. I don't have a tablet. .-.)

this thread is for critiquing
if your just going to say "omg thats awesome!"
dont post please

Nekoava a dit :

I think it's perfect. ^-^ To me, you need nothing to complete but more art!!

E~


Be as harsh or cruel as you want or please. I just want to know how I can make better art. (Note:All my arts are drawn from a mouse. I don't have a tablet. .-.)

Okay

The arms are different lengths
The tail is unnaturally straight then a sudden curve >.> if you look at a mouse in tfm or even in rl they arent like a fishing pole
also the tail diamond - the insides arent the same color as the background, dunno if that was intended of not
it also isnt attached to the tale simply extending the top will fix that

otherwise its qt

Please not very harsh words.. I am a kid C:

No one critiqued my drawing on deviantart.. :''c

Ohmygosh a peacat!

Wait, I have to stay on topic...
Maybe someone could give me a critique on this one? I rarely see anything about my drawings...
I really want to improve on coloring, like shading and such. So could someone give me tips on that?

Susanlwu a dit :

help k be as harsh as u want i just need HALP

the lineart's wobbly and choppy looking. there are some spots where you've coloured over the lines so you should fix those, too.
the chain that's attached to the diamond isn't attached to the other chain links.
the paw of the mouse that's on the tree and holding it shouldn't be bending that way, and it almost looks like the other paw of the mouse who's holding the branch isn't even holding the snowball. you should touch that up a bit, too.

Staarii a dit :

No one critiqued my drawing on deviantart.. :''c

the scarf of the creature below is a bit too thick, and i personally think one foot should be on the ground instead of having all four up off the ground. another thing, i think the tail should be thicker at the bottom and thinner at the top. however, that's just my preferance. you can leave the tail and the legs alone if you feel they look fine.

now, for the creature on the top, it looks like it's almost about to tip over. the foot on the head should look more "planted". here, i'll show you below.


see how the drawing on the right looks more "rough looking" than the drawing on the left? i think it makes it look more planted and stable.

aside from all that, your drawing looks great. i love the colouring, shading and . . well, everything. heh.

Hetaliagal a dit :

an awesome critique

THANK YOU *u*

Uh oh nobody critiques my art?

Lolokizka a dit :

Please not very harsh words.. I am a kid C:

Well fine u.u

firts of all the head and most of the features of it is off center too
Everything is wobbly, do you do lineart? lineart would help.
You can crop the picture too, theres too much space with nothing but blue in it. It will also clear up some space on you computer if its saved on there
The tail is too thick
The ear on the right in my opinion is too far to the left
The arms are little stubs and are really far down
The headphones should curve instead of being really high on the ears and then cutting across the head.
Also the scarf is weird because it doesnt seem to wrap around the mouse's body but instead is pinned onto it

sorry if this was too harsh

derp