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Opal
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Hetaliagal a dit :
the scarf of the creature below is a bit too thick, and i personally think one foot should be on the ground instead of having all four up off the ground. another thing, i think the tail should be thicker at the bottom and thinner at the top. however, that's just my preferance. you can leave the tail and the legs alone if you feel they look fine.

now, for the creature on the top, it looks like it's almost about to tip over. the foot on the head should look more "planted". here, i'll show you below.

see how the drawing on the right looks more "rough looking" than the drawing on the left? i think it makes it look more planted and stable.

aside from all that, your drawing looks great. i love the colouring, shading and . . well, everything. heh.

Oh wow, thnks for the critique! It's really long, I appreciate your effort! c':
oh and there's not ground ovo
Hetaliagal
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Staarii a dit :
Oh wow, thnks for the critique! It's really long, I appreciate your effort! c':
oh and there's not ground ovo

oh, whoops. silly me. ;;
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Iceviaya a dit :
Ohmygosh a peacat!

Wait, I have to stay on topic...
Maybe someone could give me a critique on this one? I rarely see anything about my drawings...
And you know, I really want to improve on coloring, like shading and such.

those knees are like really huge
Luckyisdesi
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Latest art request,if someone could give me honest critic,i would be gratefull .(sorry if the file is too big)

http://i.imgur.com/FGrtQrv.jpg
Reminiscentia
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Soakitup a dit :
those knees are like really huge

They're not huge, they're fluffy c:
Thanks for pointing that out anyway
Hetaliagal
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Luckyisdesi a dit :
Latest art request,if someone could give me honest critic,i would be gratefull .(sorry if the file is too big)

the lineart is kind of messy, did you just use a normal layer for it or did you use a linework layer? there's an option in the linework layer that allows you to delete, move and deform lines. it's really handy. i'd suggest trying it out if you haven't already.

the eyes of the mouse in the pikachu hoodie are too far apart. also, his hat and face has a bit too much shading on it.
the diamonds should have some more texture and shine to them.
the hair should have a tad bit more detail (i think it'd look nicer if you added some shine to it)
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Could someone give me a critique? This is my bestest art so far but I think it still needs improving. Be as rude as you please. :\



http://i.imgur.com/qpkEec8.png
Beargirlfriend
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Nekoava a dit :
Could someone give me a critique? This is my bestest art so far but I think it still needs improving. Be as rude as you please. :\

Try to make the mouse a tiny bit skinner.
The arm/paw holding flower isnt the same as the other one.
And missing ears.


The items are fine.
Fierying
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i got a question :I
if this is an art critque thread, are video critquing allowed?
Susanlwu
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Fierying a dit :
i got a question :I
if this is an art critque thread, are video critquing allowed?

i think so

video = art right?
Graciekinz
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http://i.imgur.com/9xUxyzx.png?1
i can't shade ok ;;
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Graciekinz a dit :
i can't shade ok ;;

it looks awesome, just reaaaaaaaaaally blurry @.@
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helo ples give me critique and yes i kno that the lineart is sloppy

http://i.imgur.com/Rblh97O.png
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7.5/10 Not bad, but I see some technicall problems
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Soakitup
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Mootsoup a dit :
helo ples give me critique and yes i kno that the lineart is sloppy

mootles super i love ur art pls
http://imgur.com/a/TgHBE
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Letatsus a dit :
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umm i just think the flower petals are a bit too pointy
the brown on the skin going into white should be a little farther down
one ear is bigger then the other
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Letatsus a dit :
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the flower petals are too many and too small/pointy
the white airbrush coming off of the eyes should not go onto the fur
the eyes are a little bit too far apart
the feet should have acual toes
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Soakitup a dit :
mootles super i love ur art pls
http://imgur.com/a/TgHBE

THANK U BBY
Soakitup
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Mootsoup a dit :
THANK U BBY

i love u
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