Vulli a dit :

Also I quickly sketched a person and the anatomy is totally wonky who wants to redline it and yell at it and junk

i started redlining but then this:

I just made this:



I need your HONEST opinions on it. I have a feeling I will need to learn where to shade though...

Im noob at art , criticque please ;(

Orkestrzhopa a dit :

i started redlining but then this:

i love you so much

Micefamilies a dit :

I just made this:


I need your HONEST opinions on it. I have a feeling I will need to learn where to shade though...

1. Mice bodies aren't just a oval blob
2. Feet shouldn't look like its in front of the mice, plus it needs a better connection.
3. The arms are a bit too low and the right arm shouldnt also come out of the front. (dat bewb arms)
4. Poor freezing, the headphones are stabbing into her head. They shoud rest on the mouse's head.
5. Hair should probably exceed the head, and have a little texture / more well defined splits
6. The perspective should allow us to see her other ear, and the other eye. So I moved the left eye closer to the middle and even added a tiny portion of the right eye
7. Nose is too close to eyes
8. look at the redline ovo

Susanlwu a dit :

1. Mice bodies aren't just a oval blob
2. Feet shouldn't look like its in front of the mice, plus it needs a better connection.
3. The arms are a bit too low and the right arm shouldnt also come out of the front. (dat bewb arms)
4. Poor freezing, the headphones are stabbing into her head. They shoud rest on the mouse's head.
5. Hair should probably exceed the head, and have a little texture / more well defined splits
6. The perspective should allow us to see her other ear, and the other eye. So I moved the left eye closer to the middle and even added a tiny portion of the right eye
7. Nose is too close to eyes
8. look at the redline ovo

uh all you pretty much did on the redline was trace the body

Elaf a dit :

uh all you pretty much did on the redline was trace the body

asdf no i didnt

there are just some people that just dont want to admit they are just doing something wrong... ugh.
anyways, critque pl0x, no compliments
harsh critique is fine (as long you arent swearing or like complaining.[eg: OMG THIS PART SUX*didnt put in reason*]

Susanlwu a dit :

1. Mice bodies aren't just a oval blob
2. Feet shouldn't look like its in front of the mice, plus it needs a better connection.
3. The arms are a bit too low and the right arm shouldnt also come out of the front. (dat bewb arms)
4. Poor freezing, the headphones are stabbing into her head. They shoud rest on the mouse's head.
5. Hair should probably exceed the head, and have a little texture / more well defined splits
6. The perspective should allow us to see her other ear, and the other eye. So I moved the left eye closer to the middle and even added a tiny portion of the right eye
7. Nose is too close to eyes
8. look at the redline ovo

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Fierying a dit :

there are just some people that just dont want to admit they are just doing something wrong... ugh.
anyways, critque pl0x, no compliments
harsh critique is fine (as long you arent swearing or like complaining.[eg: OMG THIS PART SUX*didnt put in reason*]

the eye shine is a shit too shiny for the picture, tone it down a little bit and it'll match
the arms are not equal length

Fierying a dit :

there are just some people that just dont want to admit they are just doing something wrong... ugh.
anyways, critque pl0x, no compliments
harsh critique is fine (as long you arent swearing or like complaining.[eg: OMG THIS PART SUX*didnt put in reason*]

i think the fingers of the right paw are too big... u should make them thinner c:

Can someone critique my eye style?




I would say, I need to work on eye lashes........
My eye also glitched out a bit causing some weird lines to appear....
BTW I USE PAINT.NET AS MY ART PROGRAM

EDIT:

Eeveerockz a dit :

Can someone critique my eye style?
I would say, I need to work on eye lashes........
My eye also glitched out a bit causing some weird lines to appear....
BTW I USE PAINT.NET AS MY ART PROGRAM

i think u should align the eye with the eyelash

Letatsus a dit :

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Bit late for a critique I should say, but I will do it anyway.

I think you should work on the feet, so they look less "shoe-like". It sorta looks like a shoe. So maybe work on that?

Satash a dit :

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the eye shine is a shit too shiny for the picture, tone it down a little bit and it'll match
the arms are not equal length

... i dont get it...
:edit: ohhh okok i get it now but really, i was expecting more from you since oyu are picky with critques

Fierying a dit :

... i dont get it ;~;.

i think he means that it looks like you straight up used the pen tool on the little white shine dots in the eyes and everything else in the pic is blurry and soft

Susanlwu a dit :

1. Mice bodies aren't just a oval blob
2. Feet shouldn't look like its in front of the mice, plus it needs a better connection.
3. The arms are a bit too low and the right arm shouldnt also come out of the front. (dat bewb arms)
4. Poor freezing, the headphones are stabbing into her head. They shoud rest on the mouse's head.
5. Hair should probably exceed the head, and have a little texture / more well defined splits
6. The perspective should allow us to see her other ear, and the other eye. So I moved the left eye closer to the middle and even added a tiny portion of the right eye
7. Nose is too close to eyes
8. look at the redline ovo

Thank you. :p I shall use that to help now. ;p


edit:oval blobs are fun, don't ruin that

http://i.imgur.com/XiGg5y0.png
critique that please
im not really good with human anatomy anyway
redline away

Mantlestar a dit :

http://i.imgur.com/XiGg5y0.png
critique that please
im not really good with human anatomy anyway
redline away

Would be best if you did an actual drawing, not a sketch.

Fierying a dit :

... i dont get it...
:edit: ohhh okok i get it now but really, i was expecting more from you since oyu are picky with critques

kind of gave up since i kicked around a lot of people