Micefamilies a dit :

Thank you. :p I shall use that to help now. ;p


edit:oval blobs are fun, don't ruin that

but they are to oval-ly and blobby .w.

Micefamilies a dit :

Thank you. :p I shall use that to help now. ;p


edit:oval blobs are fun, don't ruin that

get

we are here for anatomy or something to improve their style or lead them to the direction they want
read the fifth word

Can banners be criticised in this thread?

Tashaleigh a dit :

Can banners be criticised in this thread?

it's hard for us to critique but leave it up here can see

Constructive critisism only please!



Okay, what could I work on? I only have the means to use windows paint so please keep that in mind.

Note: I did not create the background. I just added text, a border, and pictures of my mice and cheese.

Also, I'd like to know if should get into drawing mice? Here's a drawing I did of my mouse Tashaleigh.



Please give me some feedback on this picture and whether I should continue to draw mice or not.

Tashaleigh a dit :

Constructive critisism only please!


Okay, what could I work on? I only have the means to use windows paint so please keep that in mind.

Also, I did not create the background. I just added text, a border, and pictures of my mice and cheese.

don't really like that font too much but that's my opinion
not much anyone can tell you to do really since you don't have anything except MS paint

Soakitup a dit :

don't really like that font too much but that's my opinion
not much anyone can tell you to do really since you don't have anything except MS paint

Thanks for your feedback, what about my drawing?

Tashaleigh a dit :

Thanks for your feedback, what about my drawing?

it's just generally messy but lemme see if i can get a redline done




sorry this redline is really like shit but you just need help with anatomy
arms aren't supposed to be little tiny short stubs, also your mouse's face doesn't have a snout

Eeveerockz a dit :

Can someone critique my eye style?
I would say, I need to work on eye lashes........
My eye also glitched out a bit causing some weird lines to appear....
BTW I USE PAINT.NET AS MY ART PROGRAM

EDIT:

i use paint.net..your better than me...

I would also like this picture critisized!



Welp, that's it for the day.

Tashaleigh a dit :

I would also like this picture critisized!


Welp, that's it for the day.

it's nice and all but i can't really tell if the tail is too long or not... the diamond on the tail (the lineart for it) is a bit messy..

Would like this critiqued.. it's too big so i put in link

Tashaleigh a dit :

Okay, what could I work on? I only have the means to use windows paint so please keep that in mind.

hi my banner requests are locked so now nobody knows my skills or background but long story short ive been doing graphic arts since i was ten years old and im twenty now so ive been doin this ten years (look ma i can math)

first step: get the gimp. it's a million times better than paint and you can do a lot with it. it's a free download and if you parents wont let you download anything, let them look over the website so they can confirm it's virus free. here's the gimp's website

on the banner itself, the background was sloppily removed from the mice. i seriously have to give you credit though because removing a background without a proper background eraser is difficult but yeah, it's really jagged. you can use cheeseformice's dress room for a clearer photo.

you need to turn your anti-alias on on your text, that will make it less pixelly.
i also don't like the random paisley pattern to the left while the tiny mice are on the right.
i gotta go eat but when im back ill do some kind of mockup showing everything

Graciekinz a dit :

it's nice and all but i can't really tell if the tail is too long or not... the diamond on the tail (the lineart for it) is a bit messy..

Would like this critiqued.. it's too big so i put in link

please stop making everything so large, it makes it look really pixelly. what program are you using?

Vulli a dit :

Pst I'm going to the beach, so while I'm gone yell at this kemono cat wearing a shirt


here's a version with less cheek fluff, the character is a cornish rex so maybe idk hrm HRM

im terrible with art but i'd personally go with the less cluff since it's a cornish rex because they're not that fluffy see

Haruhitastic a dit :

hi my banner requests are locked so now nobody knows my skills or background but long story short ive been doing graphic arts since i was ten years old and im twenty now so ive been doin this ten years (look ma i can math)

first step: get the gimp. it's a million times better than paint and you can do a lot with it. it's a free download and if you parents wont let you download anything, let them look over the website so they can confirm it's virus free. here's the gimp's website

on the banner itself, the background was sloppily removed from the mice. i seriously have to give you credit though because removing a background without a proper background eraser is difficult but yeah, it's really jagged. you can use cheeseformice's dress room for a clearer photo.

you need to turn your anti-alias on on your text, that will make it less pixelly.
i also don't like the random paisley pattern to the left while the tiny mice are on the right.
i gotta go eat but when im back ill do some kind of mockup showing everything


please stop making everything so large, it makes it look really pixelly. what program are you using?


im terrible with art but i'd personally go with the less cluff since it's a cornish rex because they're not that fluffy see

I think Gracie uses Gimp, yeah gimp/

Haruhitastic a dit :

please stop making everything so large, it makes it look really pixelly. what program are you using?

o i'm sorry :c

Vivihi a dit :

I think Gracie uses Gimp, yeah gimp/

ugh no i don't use gimp i use onemotion sketch&paint .. it's actually better than dAmuro :I { for me i guess }

sorry lazy coloring be as harsh as you can

honestly the only gripe i've had is your pictures are sooo big and pixelly ;; i love your style but when it's so big like that it loses it

i tried to draw a sleeping mouse welp


critiquers gogogo

Haruhitastic a dit :

hi my banner requests are locked so now nobody knows my skills or background but long story short ive been doing graphic arts since i was ten years old and im twenty now so ive been doin this ten years (look ma i can math)

first step: get the gimp. it's a million times better than paint and you can do a lot with it. it's a free download and if you parents wont let you download anything, let them look over the website so they can confirm it's virus free. here's the gimp's website

on the banner itself, the background was sloppily removed from the mice. i seriously have to give you credit though because removing a background without a proper background eraser is difficult but yeah, it's really jagged. you can use cheeseformice's dress room for a clearer photo.

you need to turn your anti-alias on on your text, that will make it less pixelly.
i also don't like the random paisley pattern to the left while the tiny mice are on the right.
i gotta go eat but when im back ill do some kind of mockup showing everything


please stop making everything so large, it makes it look really pixelly. what program are you using?


im terrible with art but i'd personally go with the less cluff since it's a cornish rex because they're not that fluffy see

Thank you so much for the advice and I'm of age so my parents won't care XD

Haruhitastic a dit :

honestly the only gripe i've had is your pictures are sooo big and pixelly ;; i love your style but when it's so big like that it loses it

aww i'm so sorry about that :c i'm trying a new style though- i'll try to not make it that big :3

Susanlwu a dit :

i tried to draw a sleeping mouse welp

critiquers gogogo

the arms aren't level with the legs, they need to be lowered. and you've coloured over the lines/drew a line over a line in some spots, you should fix that too. the right ear (the one facing the viewer) needs to be wider and the left ear's inside shouldn't be seen, and, you should change the view of the headphones as well.