Tashaleigh a dit :

I would also like this picture critisized!


Welp, that's it for the day.

It's not too bad, but I suggest you work on the lineart so It's less messy.

My dear, where's her beautiful mouth? It sort of looks like the pipe (Or whatever it's called) is glued or attached to her face.

Windcestor a dit :

i use paint.net..your better than me...

Don't say that D:

not too harsh *blush*

Bunnycakes a dit :

not too harsh *blush*

there's no feet or nose or defined light source on the shading
also the eye goes in front of the hair

also the shading on the grass is really messy and looks kinda random

not trying to be mean, it's really cute i'm just nitpicking

Karusayshi a dit :

Im noob at art , criticque please ;(

Well..... You could improve, here's the red line I made



CLEARER VERSION VVVV


IMPROVMENTS
1. I'd give the body a bit more shape, Like curves, instead of a blobish shape.
2. Me personally, I'd make the eyes much larger.
3. Mice's ears are on top of their head, not on the side
4. I'd give the flower more petals
5. The hair style in this picture has bangs, so i'd add bangs, and make the hair more smooth
6. I'd put a tie collar in the the drawing
7. Mice have whiskers, So i'd recommend giving whiskers ;)
8. Instead of just paws, also give arms
9. Make the tail bow larger
10. Maybe give a smaller mouth next time?
11. Make the neck bow more circular

Well here's what i'd improve on, Good luck on your future art and keep drawing! -Eeveerockz-

Critique??

Graciekinz a dit :

o i'm sorry :c

ugh no i don't use gimp i use onemotion sketch&paint .. it's actually better than dAmuro :I { for me i guess }

sorry lazy coloring be as harsh as you can

As harsh as I can. Ok...

Honestly to me that looks like you really quickly drew a mouse with really light colors. I can barely see the lines and it doesn't look like you really put effort into it. I suggest trying harder next time, perhaps making the drawing site window smaller and next to a picture of the mouse. It helps a lot. Also, you should use darker colors or add a background. The drawing would be okay if different colors were used with the lines, it's kinda hard to see it. I don't like the drawing at all as it is, but it could be really nice-looking if you put a bit more effort into it and used better colors. Maybe think before you draw with the colors, really think about how it will look at the end to the viewer. Will it be super-hard to see? Will the viewer enjoy the easy-to-look-at colors used in the drawing? Those are the sort of thoughts you should think when drawing. I understand it was a lazy drawing, but really why post it on these forums if it looks bad and you don't feel up to making it look nice? Plus if you were lazy you can expect a critique explaining a bunch of wrong things with it, or a confusing red-line. You should really try your best if you are putting it to where a lot of people are viewing it. Because if it looks terrible and sloppy because you were feeling lazy or sleepy, people will most likely assume that's how you usually draw. Then they will post insulting comments or you won't get as much requests as you could have gotten. So that's why you should always try your best.

Barely looked it over, sorry if it comes off offensive. It's really important that you try your best. To me, anyways.

Xxwebkinzx a dit :

Critique??

I think the mouse's feet is a bit too pointy and should be more roundish like paws.
The mouse's tail should be longer and it's not necessary to put lines on them.
The sword (That's a sword, right?) should be a bit wider and pointier.
The mouse should have arms and paws, instead of having arms only.
The mouse's shape should be a bit more realistic. Like the stomach bump should be bit lower.
The eyes look a bit wierd. Mind fixing them?
Try coloring.

P.S Were you sleepy or lazy?
(sorry if this hurted your feelings)

Thanks I was a little clumsy with this
the thing in its mouse was supposed
to be a lightsaber. I do like how I
did the eyes so i'm going to keep
that but thanks for the help :3

Eh. Let's try this. q.q
Clicky
Preferably something on the bow tie and hat. Be as harsh as you want as long as it's not like completely rude. :x Red lines are prefered since I'm a visual person. u.u

Bunnycakes a dit :

not too harsh *blush*

Only thing that first caught my eye are those hands or sleeves... they look a bit strange.. and out of place.

since nobody critiqued


^that, i think i have the right to post again, yah


^please also critique this
thanks

Thanks to everyone who has critiqued my previous drawings. :3

So I think I've found my style and have improved tremendously within the past few days XD



I would like to know what I can work on now.

I will start using photoshop soon, I'm currently using MS paint and a mouse.

Well, okay. I don't want to be rude so I'll put this lightly.

You could possibly work on the mouth. Maybe add teeth, or just have a closed smile.

Work on your lineart, It'll look much nicer.

Where's her other ear, my dear?

The ribbons are different lengths as well. The one on the left is a bit longer than the one on the right.

Otherwise.. It looks pretty good. (I'd also work on the legs but I can't really explain.)

yeaaa critique please, i think i've gotten better...

Kattiej a dit :

yeaaa critique please, i think i've gotten better...

this is realy awesome but i noticed that in a lot of places the coloring isnt filled, such as the place there thehair and head meet. the tie is messy and has coloring outside

Vulli a dit :

Pst I'm going to the beach, so while I'm gone yell at this kemono cat wearing a shirt


here's a version with less cheek fluff, the character is a cornish rex so maybe idk hrm HRM

the one thing i noticed is that the shoulders are very low
i just tried to lower my shoulder and it now hurts so i'm pretty sure they can't do that

Eeveerockz a dit :

Well..... You could improve, here's the red line I made


CLEARER VERSION VVVV

IMPROVMENTS
1. I'd give the body a bit more shape, Like curves, instead of a blobish shape.
2. Me personally, I'd make the eyes much larger.
3. Mice's ears are on top of their head, not on the side
4. I'd give the flower more petals
5. The hair style in this picture has bangs, so i'd add bangs, and make the hair more smooth
6. I'd put a tie collar in the the drawing
7. Mice have whiskers, So i'd recommend giving whiskers ;)
8. Instead of just paws, also give arms
9. Make the tail bow larger
10. Maybe give a smaller mouth next time?
11. Make the neck bow more circular

Well here's what i'd improve on, Good luck on your future art and keep drawing! -Eeveerockz-

out

Mantlestar a dit :

since nobody critiqued

^that, i think i have the right to post again, yah

^please also critique this
thanks

i already told you to get something that isn't sketches so we can actually critique it carefully

also fur doesn't work that way, you seem to have make it swirly

Satash a dit :

i already told you to get something that isn't sketches so we can actually critique it carefully

oh sorry
i didnt know

Satash a dit :

also fur doesn't work that way, you seem to have make it swirly

how does fur work tho?
btw thank you for pointing that out c:

Critique please

^^ so its adorable but
1. the hairsticking out is too thick
2. the bow is uneven