critique please?

Froggymypet a dit :

critique please?

When I looked at your drawing,I realised that one ear was much more pointy than the other(Which could be a drawing error)Plus the flower seems to be a little messy,might want to clean it up a bit.The mouse's arms are drawn quite neatly.This part is my preference,so you can choose not to follow it:I think that the body should have a curve that indicates the hips of the mouse,but not too much though.I shall leave the rest to better critiquers.

Froggymypet a dit :

critique please?

its so cute, u r improving, I do agreee with the other critiquer about the ear and the flower but not about the body, I know how your style is and that is paart of it. I also noticed the feel arent even and it should be dark/shaded under the arms
hope i wasnt too mean, I MEAN ITS REALLY GOOD

Kattiej a dit :

its so cute, u r improving, I do agreee with the other critiquer about the ear and the flower but not about the body, I know how your style is and that is paart of it. I also noticed the feel arent even and it should be dark/shaded under the arms
hope i wasnt too mean, I MEAN ITS REALLY GOOD

Laddee a dit :

When I looked at your drawing,I realised that one ear was much more pointy than the other(Which could be a drawing error)Plus the flower seems to be a little messy,might want to clean it up a bit.The mouse's arms are drawn quite neatly.This part is my preference,so you can choose not to follow it:I think that the body should have a curve that indicates the hips of the mouse,but not too much though.I shall leave the rest to better critiquers.

ok thank you. and i also noticed the ear but i had no idea how to make it like the other one >.<

Froggymypet a dit :

critique please?

1. eyes shouldn't be over the nose
2. the body is a bit slanted
3. the other feet is a bit bigger
4. the right (my right) eye is a bit smaller
5. the shading is uhh (idk the right word) just blur the airbrush and use the magic wand tool in sai
6. the ears shouldn't be bigger than the head

sorry for being harsh <_>
e: i just noticed in my redline that the ears doesnt have the same length
sorry about that

critique??/

Kattiej a dit :

critique??/

First of all, soooo cuteee!

I'm probably the worts critic ever but...

You might wanna shade in the ears a little darker so there's more definition.
You could outline the hair and focus more on making perfect lines in the hair.
Give it a little more detail.
If you're gonna do a drawn background (not just a color or pattern) you might wanna focus on it a little more and add some detail.

All of this is just my personal opinion, others will probably disagree but what can ya do!

I dislike doing red lines so I hope you find my answer clear enough. I'll do them only if I cannot properly explain myself.

To add something to Tasha's ideas :)

The legs anatomy is not good in general. The left foot cannot be so close to the right one or the mouse would have no stability. Right now if you look at it, it looks like it's going to fall. I don't think you want your mousie to fall and hurt herself :(
Then the lines for her right leg. If you wish to draw it like a bubble on her tummy, you might want to do the same with the left leg. Otherwise, the right leg's lines cannot look like that. You make the tummy completely disappear by doing so. Next time you might want to try and draw the legs starting from the side of her body. (Considering how you drew the right one)


While I am always unhappy about my mice's tails, it looks like yours is coming from the mouse's side. Try to keep it behind the body. (It's easy to say it but I'm honestly bad at it myself, so don't worry) Also, do it thin at the end. I don't understand how the star's attached to the tail :D Make sure you don't miss that detail next time? Aaand don't forget to center the mouth.

Hope it helps :3

Meanwhile, I was trying out a new style. Messy lines/messy shading, etc.
Any ideas on how to improve? I am honestly not a big fan of the tail and the left side of the tie looks a bit weird.


e: Edited the post with a smaller version. It was too big :/

Sabusha a dit :

Meanwhile, I was trying out a new style. Messy lines/messy shading, etc.
Any ideas on how to improve? I am honestly not a big fan of the tail and the left side of the tie looks a bit weird.

e: Edited the post with a smaller version. It was too big :/

looks really good! the arm on the right is a bit shorter than the one on the left and i agree with you on the tie, i think it should be a bit longer and the point at the end shouldn't be as long as it is now. aside from that, i think the feet should be positioned more towards the viewer and the ears should have more insides showing.

Thank you! :)

thanks for all the help, I'll work on it when I get a chance to go on my laptop which has all my art

Although I know style shouldn't be critiqued, the issue I have here is that the eyes take up almost the entire face of the mouse. I understand you're doing a chibi style but there are times when the eyes can get TOO big... dontbemadandfireme

It's fine :3 I personally like big eyes a lot but I can try to make them smaller!

Well, this isn't to critique on style but anatomy, but I just thought I'd bring that up~

Ook so based on the last critiques, is this about right

sry, I keep posting this, I want it to be correctly drawn so how about now


better ?

Kattiej a dit :

sry, I keep posting this, I want it to be correctly drawn so how about now

better ?

Hope this helps!



Quick crit anyone? Go hard, I want to test everyone's ability for the real thing I'd like fixed ^^

So for the mouse on the left it's left arm looks weird, Like its out too far or something, thats all
For the critiques you made for me, I might add the inside ear and the matching up my the rest like the grass and the hair is part of my style so I'll leave that (just a fyi)

i made a base