Alikha a dit :

i made a base

idk how to judge that cuz its cartoony and cartoons are suppose to exagerate..

Kattiej a dit :

idk how to judge that cuz its cartoony and cartoons are suppose to exagerate..

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^ wut i mean like if it wasnt i would say the ears are uneven, you need feet etc.....
but its a cartoon (I think it is atleast) and cartoons can have those things

the feet is so hard so i just erased it in frustration

oh lol thts ok

First thing I notice is that the forehead is MASSIVE. Perhaps consider shrinking it.
Secondly, it's been said time and time again here that mice have whiskers. I don't care if whisker free mice are your style or not, it is anatomically incorrect. A lot of artists seem to forget the whiskers and that's very bothersome to me.
Also, boob arms.

That's all I can critique on with my crap art skills.

lol sorry i laughed when you said boob arms

anyways not to be rude but, can you guys not use like the circle making setting things, it just makes it look at bit odd, but thats just my opinion

Rype a dit :

please go easy on me I know it's not very good

Its amazing. JUst a few kwirks.

Well, as you know, a shaman has more than one of those blue circles and spikes.

Also, a mouse's nose is a little circular not like a human :o

The tail looks a bit..awkward.
The blue thing in the eye?

Rype a dit :

please go easy on me I know it's not very good

It's beauiful the way it is.

Satash a dit :

out

What do you mean by "out"?
Did I over do it a bit?
Should I re-write it completley or re-do the whole thing?
o_o

idk if you wanted to make it look like like a human cuz if you did u did a awesome job if you didn't mice mouse and noise(forgot how to spell it lol and btw im old enough to know how to spell it) isn't like tht but they're just tiny tweaks, easy to fix

Eeveerockz a dit :

What do you mean by "out"?
Did I over do it a bit?
Should I re-write it completley or re-do the whole thing?
o_o

You put your whole style on your critique. That is not a critique, that is what your style. We're trying to improve a person's style or redirect them into another path that may benefit them, not switch them to our own styles. This thread is for anatomy too.

Satash a dit :

You put your whole style on your critique. That is not a critique, that is what your style. We're trying to improve a person's style or redirect them into another path that may benefit them, not switch them to our own styles. This thread is for anatomy too.

That's not my art style............. I could make a drawing showing my style if you'd like, and i'm sorry for over doing it :c, but that seems to be a common art style..... From what i've seen atleast........

i require assistance. yes.
http://i.imgur.com/JAzZS6p.png
just ignore the clothes

Thefourthone a dit :

i require assistance. yes.
http://i.imgur.com/JAzZS6p.png
just ignore the clothes

i think the forehead is too big

okbye

Thefourthone a dit :

i require assistance. yes.
http://i.imgur.com/JAzZS6p.png
just ignore the clothes

I think It's amazing. JUST THE WAY IT IS

kkbyenow

guys if your not going to ask for a critique or critique someones drawing
not to be rude but, can you like stop

Thefourthone a dit :

i require assistance. yes.
http://i.imgur.com/JAzZS6p.png
just ignore the clothes

idk im not tht pro this is just like how i think by looking at it, the head is too long..
thats about it