idk im done critiquing urs, i mean my art isnt even tht good
page get

it is just do ya normal pictures and go onto what i use and make it even better

hai guys, can I have some critiques, please ? =)

aww ill tell ya anways :/ if you look about here I on the tail theres a tiny little bump its not much and on the head (can't spell it) tearia thing theres the 0 and on the left theres a little curl however theres no curl on the other side and the left feet is much bigger then the other one. except theses tiny things its epic!
but what paint did you use to draw it ?? :/

Xwolfgodxx a dit :

aww ill tell ya anways :/ if you look about here I on the tail theres a tiny little bump its not much and on the head (can't spell it) tearia thing theres the 0 and on the left theres a little curl however theres no curl on the other said and the left feet is much bigger then the other one. except theses tiny things its epic!
buit what paint did you use to make it ?? :/

thanks for your critique but the perspective is very important, and it's normal to see some truc more smaller than the others, like the feet! :p
oh and I used the brush with some ajustation.

ok what program did you use i use photo editor http://pixlr.com/editor/

Xwolfgodxx a dit :

ok what program did you use i use photo editor http://pixlr.com/editor/

I use pts

ok :/ can you give me the full web?

Kattiej a dit :

@Immagetcheese
ohh this is akward..................................................................

sry about tht then......................................................................akward...
is tht your alt account or something???
idk this one seems good, idk about this one the only thing i dont like is the end of the tail but...

So can you red-line what's wrong with it??

oh ugh ok suree but its sorta personal opinion wait a sec


I might not be right and the text says hairs together or not as many. you cant see all the hair on mice tails

i cant write with a mouse...

Susanlwu a dit :

i think the forehead is too big

okbye

Kattiej a dit :

idk im not tht pro this is just like how i think by looking at it, the head is too long..
thats about it

hi yes i am very guilty of making the foreheads big in my drawings.

Wiwop a dit :

hai guys, can I have some critiques, please ? =)

The tail is rather long, to be honest.
The feet are a bit too...pointy. I guess?

But it's beautiful.

ok done this is the "better" picture

can anyone tell me any effects or anying to make better

woud like some critique

Graciekinz a dit :

woud like some critique

The only thing I'm going to say is about the tail.
The tail is crooked and I know why you tried to make it into a heart shape. Sometimes things like tails should be left alone though.

http://imgur.com/T7mAHvh

i apologize for the lack of tfm art but none of my decent art is mouse
i also apologize for using a link, but i have to due to it being wider than the forums uwu;;;;

Ok I think the hair in the back of the wolf shouldn't go up, but it should go down and if it does up, maybe not that mucha nd not tht high

Graciekinz a dit :

woud like some critique

those hands are really big. . maybe you should consider making them smaller. the ears should be bigger and you should tune up on your airbrushing/blurring in the hair. also, is that a scarf on the neck? if it is, it should be smaller and should have extensions or whatever hanging down from it. the lineart isn't connected between the legs, and like satash said, the tail shouldn't be crooked like that. you could also make the chain for the tail accessory thinner.

Karantaa a dit :

http://imgur.com/T7mAHvh

i apologize for the lack of tfm art but none of my decent art is mouse
i also apologize for using a link, but i have to due to it being wider than the forums uwu;;;;

like katt said, the hair shouldn't stick up as much as it is now. also, the tail should be shorter if it's a wolf (sorry, i can't really tell if it's a wolf or a cat or what).

pffpff it's a kinda failed cat

Kattiej a dit :

Ok I think the hair in the back of the wolf shouldn't go up, but it should go down and if it does up, maybe not that mucha nd not tht high

Hetaliagal a dit :

like katt said, the hair shouldn't stick up as much as it is now. also, the tail should be shorter if it's a wolf (sorry, i can't really tell if it's a wolf or a cat or what).

so basically, i need to just make the fur on the back of the head not stick up as much, and somewhat flatter?
as well as try and improve on my ability to make cats look like cats and not wolves

edit ; something more like this? http://imgur.com/ZiR82xv