umm.. girl mouse.. x'D

no the bump in the middle no on the side and in my opinion mice dont hv gender looking differences

Xxxrubyxxx a dit :

Need a critique ;; Can you be harsh but a little gentle?


yes... I know the shading is horrible.

now ruby i can critique harsh but not judge harsh lol...
the ears on the cat hat are too long (but i love the hat)
the start of the arms are too far down, they aren't suppose to start at the middle(sry if im being harsh)

Kattiej a dit :

no the bump in the middle no on the side and in my opinion mice dont hv gender looking differences

Hmm. :/
It's a style, that is always the way I draw.

sry :(

Pzsani a dit :

Ummm.. Critique? :o

And.. This is a gif, click the picture.


(Made in Paint)

the chest fur is pretty pointy, i think it should look more scraggy to give it a furry look to it. the elbows are pretty pointy, and the ear should be wider. now, for the legs, the feet shouldn't be positioned that way. the left foot (the one facing the viewer) should be centered more along with the paw pads. the right foot's paw pads shouldn't be seen and it should be centered more as well, with only one toe being seen. (sorry, this explanation may be confusing. i was planning to do a redline but my tablet driver broke and i don't feel like restarting my comp again.)
the tail is too straight, and i know you don't have much room on your canvas but you could wrap it around the mouse somehow.

hi all i need help for that

the fur on the shoulders are way too long and pointy and up
yea thats all i got
oh and the two tail furs are too long and far apart (in my opinion)

Mishkatave a dit :

hi all i need help for that

i think it should have whiskers but otherwise very cute

can someone critique this drawing.. ik its not tfm related, but still :P

Mishkatave a dit :

hi all i need help for that

The fur on shoulders are way too long and pointy. (Sorry lol looked at Kattie's critique and couldnt find another way to explain)
The end of the tail is too skinny.

Kattiej a dit :

the fur on the shoulders are way too long and pointy and up
yea thats all i got
oh and the two tail furs are too long and far apart (in my opinion)

Vivihi a dit :

The fur on shoulders are way too long and pointy. (Sorry lol looked at Kattie's critique and couldnt find another way to explain)
The end of the tail is too skinny.

sharp can not say but that I did in 5 minutes

I know that there is no mustache I often do not put

Soakitup a dit :

i think it should have whiskers but otherwise very cute

I know that there is no mustache I often do not put
but thanks mice

Vivihi a dit :

Five minutes o.o

maybe idk what time

Mishkatave a dit :

sharp can not say but that I did in 5 minutes

I know that there is no mustache I often do not put
I know that there is no mustache I often do not put
but thanks mice

Five minutes o.o

Critique my friend's drawing of me?



*Please don't tell she has some white spots out of the drawing at the ears*

Swirlfire a dit :

Critique my friend's drawing?

the feet need toes, the tail's end is too thin, there should be a bit of detail in the hair, the lineart's a bit choppy and there are some spots where the colouring's gone over the lineart. other than that, it looks good to me.

Buggzie a dit :

can someone critique this drawing.. ik its not tfm related, but still :P

the eyes are just a bit too big, the hair looks choppy (i think it should look smooth and flowy) and has too much detail in it, the nose is too small and is down too low, and the shoulder should be thinner at the bottom.

Hetaliagal a dit :

the feet need toes, the tail's end is too thin, there should be a bit of detail in the hair, the lineart's a bit choppy and there are some spots where the colouring's gone over the lineart. other than that, it looks good to me.

the eyes are just a bit too big, the hair looks choppy (i think it should look smooth and flowy) and has too much detail in it, the nose is too small and is down too low, and the shoulder should be thinner at the bottom.

Edited post. Don't tell the coloring is out of the outline. .-.

didn't notice that edit. am surri.

Buggzie a dit :

can someone critique this drawing.. ik its not tfm related, but still :P

first off, if you take photos of your art, make sure you have good lighting. half of this redline was spent fiddling with the magic wand tool and brightness/contrast so i could see what i was doing.

second, your facial features all migrated away from the center of the face. don't do that. the center of the face is not a huge blank space - it is small and filled with things like the corners of the eyes, the top of the nose, the beginnings of the eyebrows, etc. your hairline is also way too high - she's either balding or wearing a very badly-placed wig.

the eyes go smack dab in the middle of the head, an equal distance from the top of the skull to the bottom of the chin. yes, cartooning involves moving that eyeline up and down, but if you don't know where the eyes are supposed to go in the first place you'll never get a cohesive style going. the nose, no matter how stylized it is, will never be tinier than the pupil of the eye. i understand that large eyes are a stylistic thing, but there are limits - when they make up over half the width of the face, it's time to stop and think about what you're doing.

those lines above the eyes confused me until i realized they were puffy eyelid lines. those don't go that high over the tops of the eyes unless the person is squinting or has a swollen eye. the eyebrows are never straight lines. always give them a curve. there are many emotions to be rendered depending on what sort of curve you give.

you did good giving the hair some volume and not making it completely symmetrical. i'd like you to take a moment and think about hairstyles - if your stylist (or whoever) gave you a fringe that had a huge lock of hair hanging longer than the rest, right in the middle of your face, would you be happy with the cut? or would you demand they even it out? because that is what this poor girl is suffering from at the moment. i realize it's there to fill up the huge empty space between the eyes, but if you use facial real estate properly there's no need for that.

her shoulders are... i don't even know. does she have extreme scoliosis? is she shrugging? did her shoulder get blown off in the war? you drew her face from the front and her torso from what i /think/ is a three quarter pose - ie one that tilts the body. i can understand one shoulder being lower than the other then, because that is how perspective works, but that huge difference is ridiculous. you don't stand with one shoulder next to your ear and one way below, like igor. if that were the case, your upper body would need to be sideways for the shoulders to be on those levels.

Critique please?

No harsh comments please thanks. A redline would be good too.

Her feet are little spikes, not actual feet. Her eyes are almost as big as her entire face. (There is such a thing as too much chibi style)
Is her pony supposed to go down to her butt?

p.s. ork never stop being amazing