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Kattiej « Citoyen » 1377174600000
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xwolfgodxx the hat and the head aren't porportioned. either the hat is too big or the head is too small. or you drew the hat too far out this way<< and you need to bring it in more. It's hardd to describe I hope you understand though i think it's too LOOONNG idk hard to exxplain Pageget |
Immagetcheez « Citoyen » 1377175260000
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Here Kami. First: A bit of line-correction. Second: Redrawn, just try think a little bit more - realisticly? And check out some cat anotomy things. Maybe buy a book? You do cats quite a lot. Third: Always remember to create flow in your work. It helps anatomy! Just side notes - Eyes too close together/ Feet too scew/ Tail a bit odd/ Feet in back too close/ Ears a bit odd I draw cats not in a manga-kawaii sort of eye fashion, so I tried adopting your style. It may be a bit odd. |
Mistalee « Citoyen » 1377175500000
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hm those ears. and the position of upperjaw 8D |
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Immagetcheez a dit : This helped a lot! Thanks Holly! |
Buggzie « Citoyen » 1377211500000
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Mistalee a dit : Those eyes look painful, and the ears start from under his eyes, ouch... still a really nice drawing though c: |
Thefourthone « Censeur » 1377219660000
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Mistalee a dit : it looks like it just got punched on it's lower jaw on the right or punched on the left of the upperjaw |
Cadencecool « Citoyen » 1377234900000
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some critiques? |
Eeveerockz « Citoyen » 1377236580000
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Cadencecool a dit : I'd put the arms a bit higher |
Kattiej « Citoyen » 1377266160000
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the mouse is really cute <3 ermm idk if u did this on purpose but ur missing the tail item on the big sham. also the words/letters are a little messy |
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Give me ciritique |
Iwuvcheesed « Citoyen » 1377268860000
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Cadencecool a dit : First, that is so qt. As Kattie said, the tail ring isnt there, also, i would would those arms higher, it looks as if it was coming out of its knees. In my opinion, you should put the thought bubble more to where the head is. Horrible Critique ;; |
Laddee « Citoyen » 1377283320000
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Zlogg a dit : Ok,the first thing i want to focus on is the face.The eyes are way too big and closed together that it makes me feel uncomfortable.And because of that,the whiskers have no space and touches the eyes.Either you smallen the eyes or smallen the whiskers.Also,the bottom part of the body seems really flabby,it doesn't look stablised.Try to show it's knees in the drawing. Meanwhile.. I need serious help with the neck,head,and feet. |
Satash « Citoyen » 1377284580000
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Kayleekitti a dit : http://i.imgur.com/MrXKsq7.jpg good night |
Marliaaa « Citoyen » 1377285120000
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No harsh critiques plz |
Kattiej « Citoyen » 1377285720000
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-delete- |
Satash « Citoyen » 1377285720000
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Kattiej a dit : no stop |
Kattiej « Citoyen » 1377285840000
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okok I'll delete it if the hair goes over and under the eye then it should go over the eye tail is too low but u no i love ur art |
Iwuvcheesed « Citoyen » 1377286500000
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Marliaaa a dit : O-okay ill try not to be harsh. The tail is going straight throw the cloak like theres a hole there, also, the heart should be curved, or the chain should go straight down. The hair is layerd below the eye, which should be covering it, I know it may be a style, but it just doesn't look very nice in my opinion. The nose is also upside down. Try putting it the other side around. Where is the cloak supported? Try putting a little knot where the neck is or just do a little collar as I understand it is a vampire. The arms should be a bit straighter, but if you put them on the side it would be natural. (This is my opniion, but I dont support the hair being that big. Try making it a bit smaller?) imsorryhorriblecritqueonceagain |
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Satash a dit : This also helped! Thanks~ |
Immagetcheez « Citoyen » 1377286740000
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Satash a dit : TFW NO STOP I'M NOT QT WHAT IS THIS Omg my sides |