Immagetcheez a dit :

TFW NO STOP I'M NOT QT WHAT IS THIS


Omg my sides

cutie

Mistalee a dit :

hm those ears. and the position of upperjaw 8D

there is also shading without a defined light source. pick a direction before you start any sort of coloring and stick with it.

Vulli a dit :

Someone kill this with critiques/redlines idk

the ears and tie are 2big, and the tail looks like it's sprouting from its flank and not its spine. too blunt a nose as well. that's... about it. your mouse bodies are good mouse bodies.

wait no the foot closest to us starts at the knee and not at the ankle. your other leg is fine tho.

Vulli a dit :

I have a problem with drawing ears too big. This is even after I shrunk them. Someone teach me the secret to properly sized ears

I either make them too big or too small.
Somebody should teach me too.

can anybody critique?

Froggymypet a dit :

can anybody critique?

the eyes are different sizes and look like they stare into nothingness. you should add some life to them.
the scarf shouldn't be sticking out like that, unless there's some strange invisible wind blowing it. the tail is too straight and the tail accessory looks like it's about to fall off. your mouse needs thighs and the left foot should overlap the thigh. the bow should be placed more to the left, too. other than that, it looks fine to me.

Froggymypet a dit :

can anybody critique?

~The eyes are different sizes first of all.
~Why is one foot bigger than the other? I understand one is pointing out, but it seems bigger? The top of the bow is pointing up, while the bottom of the bow is just straight.
~The santa hat's pom pom part is way too small and short.
~There should be more than one stick thing at the end of the scarf.
~Maybe add some wind effects to the scarf?
~The flower petals are uneven.

But it looks really cute ^^

Vulli a dit :

Someone kill this with critiques/redlines idk

Well, the feet are a bit too skinny and small.
The ears are kind of big.
And the arms are too skinny >.<

Other than those things, it's rlly good.

Froggymypet a dit :

can anybody critique?

Try align things in the art.

Satash a dit :

I either make them too big or too small.
Somebody should teach me too.

don bluth.
the secret of nimh. different mouse types up the wazoo.

hi i
did a thing...



you can be harsh!!

Haruhitastic a dit :

hi i
did a thing...


you can be harsh!!

you colored outside the lines

yes i know that's how i like to colour
im kind of looking more for anatomy advice not "lol u coloured it wrong."

Haruhitastic a dit :

yes i know that's how i like to colour
im kind of looking more for anatomy advice not "lol u coloured it wrong."

okay.
your welcome

okay so
first i would like to say that the lines are really thin and quite rough
the arm is really uh, odd looking
and i think the bowtie could use a little detail

not much wrong with it i guess
e// oh and there is no neck

Haruhitastic a dit :

hi i
did a thing...


you can be harsh!!

Haruhitastic a dit :

hi i
did a thing...


you can be harsh!!

sorry it kinda looks like the 2nd arm goes over the pot rim because it shouldn't

Micefamilies a dit :

okay.
your welcome

my welcome what
not to be rude but uh
if youre not gonna give a proper critique then dont give one at all, simple as that

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Elaf a dit :

okay so
first i would like to say that the lines are really thin and quite rough
the arm is really uh, odd looking
and i think the bowtie could use a little detail

not much wrong with it i guess
e// oh and there is no neck

Soakitup a dit :

sorry it kinda looks like the 2nd arm goes over the pot rim because it shouldn't

yes thank you both.
i was kind of using satash's style as a reference because a long time ago they gave me a bunch of how to guide drawings and ive been working with them
and thank you for the redlines aa
im happy it doesnt look that far off

it's a good drawing :)

be as harsh as u want


except from the fact the backround is too big