Sorry for the bad quality, but can someone critque this? ._.
Red overline it if you wish lol

Kurokai a dit :

Sorry for the bad quality, but can someone critque this? ._.
Red overline it if you wish lol

first of all
i'm too tired t say anything except
why jpg?

Satash a dit :

first of all
i'm too tired t say anything except
why jpg?

Sure no worries. I always upload them as
jpeg, but when i use transparency i save as png.
It wasn't so bad quality until i uploaded on imgur
to post picture here. And this is my first time posting
a picture o.o Should I start saving them as png?

yes, you should save them as png. it makes it better quality than jpeg. (i used to save as jpeg for awhile but then learned that png was better).

Critiques?


click very large ;;

Nievesitax a dit :

Critiques?

click very large ;;

Where are the arms?
To be honest, the wings and tail should be kind of bigger?

looks fabu vulli

although the ears are your style owo the nose looks like a circle to me ;o;

Vulli a dit :

Hrn I don't really like the head/ears and the body looks off, everything looks off to me helllp

hmm.
you could put the feet abit bigger. just a bit.
thats all i see..

Vulli a dit :

Hrn I don't really like the head/ears and the body looks off, everything looks off to me helllp

i feeel like u guys are not critiquing him just because he's a sent...............
but anyhow, i've critiqued before and then satash said i was wrong so im not going to try

Vulli a dit :

Hrn I don't really like the head/ears and the body looks off, everything looks off to me helllp

I find that the right leg is really akward for the mouse.It seems as if it's protruding.It looks as if the mouse has two legs on the same side of the body.To prevent this,do not draw the whole leg,only draw the ankle and feet. Also,for the ears,I think that I can't help you.I can only tell you to try drawing smaller and smaller each time you draw the ears.When it reaches a comfortable size,stick with that size.

Vulli a dit :

Hrn I don't really like the head/ears and the body looks off, everything looks off to me helllp

the ears are bigger than the head and it seems very heavy
rule of thumb except for elephants, try to size the ears not too much bigger than the head

Kattiej a dit :

i feeel like u guys are not critiquing him just because he's a sent...............
but anyhow, i've critiqued before and then satash said i was wrong so im not going to try

that's not it
most people here hold vulli as their idol, so that means they look upto them.
hell vulli's my idol too
the thing is
people have idols and they may be uncomfortable telling them faults

pls


red lines prefered.

Yo all look here

BE AS HARSH AS U WANT ik its dumb i did it for fun

Marliaaa a dit :

Yo all look here

The body is way to skinny and small. The arms aren't really there?
The feet just look like two butt feet. No offense.

Marliaaa
im going to try not to be so hard on u (ya no i love ur art) ok,
the arms look like boobs and u can fix that might not having the body so small. There should we a seperatiion between the legs. the ears are uneven..........................

a dit :

3.) Think, is this actually going to help the artist or is this just your own preference?
This rule is here because sometimes people just don't like it and try to get the maker to change what they don't like. If you are going to add things that is annoying to you, say that it is YOUR PREFERENCE.

Vulli's feet are quite fine, in fact they are realistic compared to the blobs that most artists here pass off for feet. Remember to critique based on anatomy, not your own personal preferences.
And if you're going to critique someone please do it properly. Recently the advice being given here has been a little on the side of lacking depth.

Taleyes a dit :

pls

red lines prefered.

That is a skinny damn neck. Dragons have big, strong neck like this. Your avatar is an example actually, so I don't know why you decided to give him a giraffe neck.
I feel like the base of the wing is also quite small. Like it would snap under all the weight. Here's a how to draw guide that might help some! cilck
Good luck!

Marliaaa a dit :

Yo all look here

...i
just
what
What even were you trying to draw? If any creature or human had a head that size with a body that size they wouldn't be capable of functioning. A rabbit's ears generally arent that large, depending on the breed. Here's an example of bunny ears.
What program was this drawn in by the way?

Haruhitastic a dit :

Vulli's feet are quite fine, in fact they are realistic compared to the blobs that most artists here pass off for feet. Remember to critique based on anatomy, not your own personal preferences.
And if you're going to critique someone please do it properly. Recently the advice being given here has been a little on the side of lacking depth.


That is a skinny damn neck. Dragons have big, strong neck like this. Your avatar is an example actually, so I don't know why you decided to give him a giraffe neck.
I feel like the base of the wing is also quite small. Like it would snap under all the weight. Here's a how to draw guide that might help some! cilck
Good luck!


...i
just
what
What even were you trying to draw? If any creature or human had a head that size with a body that size they wouldn't be capable of functioning. A rabbit's ears generally arent that large, depending on the breed. Here's an example of bunny ears.
What program was this drawn in by the way?

marliaa uses paint