Pzsani a dit :

Ummm..... Critique?

Notes: Try not to make the limbs look usless. The tal is too thick. The eye doesn't match the head's profile posititon. Too much lightening.

I really just want help on how to make the mouse look better idc bout the fish htey were a little add-on

Freezingk a dit :

I really just want help on how to make the mouse look better idc bout the fish tey were a little add-on :3

Lol ok this is my first time critiquing (did I spell that right?)...this is probably gonna be pretty bad. :/

1. The right ear looks a bit too small....ik perspective and junk makes it smaller than the other ear I think but not that small. Also the inside of the right ear shouldn't be showing.

2. The headphones...the ear muff/bud (dunno what it's called but hopefully you will understand) should be on the ear not the hair.

3. There should be some shading on the scarf, on the hair, and on the head where the hair is covering it.

4. The feet should be the same pinkish color as the inside of the ears and the tail.

5. The back leg that's showing...um the line of it shouldn't go all the way up otherwise it looks a bit strange.

6. The tail should start thicker than become thinner not the other way around.

Here...I tried to redline ;u;


Please pro critiquers correct me if I'm wrong on any of this stuff :/

Can someone Critique this?


If you did, u get 900 cookies. Ty

Kittenpawsz a dit :

Can someone Critique this?

If you did, u get 900 cookies. Ty

im not the best but ill try

the hat is kinda too big

the arms are different sizes
and
the tail is kinda weird

go hard on me

Flutterbest a dit :

Lol ok this is my first time critiquing (did I spell that right?)...this is probably gonna be pretty bad. :/

1. The right ear looks a bit too small....ik perspective and junk makes it smaller than the other ear I think but not that small. Also the inside of the right ear shouldn't be showing.

2. The headphones...the ear muff/bud (dunno what it's called but hopefully you will understand) should be on the ear not the hair.

3. There should be some shading on the scarf, on the hair, and on the head where the hair is covering it.

4. The feet should be the same pinkish color as the inside of the ears and the tail.

5. The back leg that's showing...um the line of it shouldn't go all the way up otherwise it looks a bit strange.

6. The tail should start thicker than become thinner not the other way around.

Here...I tried to redline ;u;

Please pro critiquers correct me if I'm wrong on any of this stuff :/

Vulli a dit :

The head looked kinda weird!


Just quick doodle on it without changing your style. Draw the entire shape of the head first before adding anything on top, or else your ear placement might look weird/off. The way you drew the hair makes the head look like it gets really high in one place, drawing the head first will also help with that.

Wow... Thans flutter and vulli Ill try to fix the stuff you think is wrong but I think the things you saidwill really help c: Thank you guys ^-^

Could I have some critique on this? I drew it awhile ago, but....


Click the black box ^^;

Kittenpawsz a dit :

Can someone Critique this?

If you did, u get 900 cookies. Ty

the hat''s ears are facing/pointing in the wrong direction.
arms are too skinny and they are different sizes

links are being weird, welp.
firebluestar.deviantart.com
le featured drawing x.x

Kiokosama a dit :

Could I have some critique on this? I drew it awhile ago, but....

Click the black box ^^;

Alrighty, lets do this.
For starters, ears arn't that big, trimming them down a bit would make for a neater and more accurate look. Headphones are sideways for some unknown reason, make it closer to the base of the ear for a more accurate look. I have no idea if the nose is a stylistic choice or not, but atleast make it a bit closer to the muzzle. Glasses and eyes are way too close to the middle of the face, enlarge the glasses a bit and put them eyes in the correct spot. Hair is fine for the most part~

Moving onto the body, that curve isn't exactly comfortable in a standing-up position. Paws are fine, just give a little arm to them. The feet are a bit small, enlargering them and putting more space between them should work. Last but not least, tails don't go on that part of the back, hermana! Put it down more near the rear and it can work.

Hope I didn't miss anything, have fun drawing~

Kattiej a dit :

the hat''s ears are facing/pointing in the wrong direction.
arms are too skinny and they are different sizes

stooopppppp

Firebluestar a dit :

links are being weird, welp.
firebluestar.deviantart.com
le featured drawing x.x

This one?

Haruhitastic a dit :

stooopppppp

okok I'm boycotting this thread bye bye
but seriously tell me they're not.
i dont see u yelling and froggy but she got tht the arms are different sizes

y-yes that one haru. x.x
*tablet sucks kbye*

Kittenpawsz a dit :

Can someone Critique this?

If you did, u get 900 cookies. Ty

gravity doesn't work that way

Kattiej a dit :

okok I'm boycotting this thread bye bye
but seriously tell me they're not.
i dont see u yelling and froggy but she got tht the arms are different sizes

I'm telling YOU to stop because your critique is ridiculous. you said the arms are "too skinny" when in actuality they're quite fat (not trying to be rude to you Kia, I'll give a more proper critique anyway). You've been told by Satash to stop too. Either put more work into your critiques, or kindly stop. Not to be rude but you're not being helpful.

Firebluestar a dit :

y-yes that one haru. x.x
*tablet sucks kbye*

mice have whiskers and noses
tails arent 5px lines, but quite thicker and with pink or the colour of their fur
scarves dont work that way unless wind is blowing, is the wind blowing?
the fur gogo wears has a lot more spots than that
what kind of tablet and what program?

http://i.imgur.com/ER3lSkO.png

thought I should get critique on that

i really adore your style plum. nice lineless.
first thing i notice is no eyes. other then that, it's so cool.