Graciekinz a dit :

i really adore your style plum. nice lineless.
first thing i notice is no eyes. other then that, it's so cool.

continuing ^^ wheres the mouth, and nose?

Sourisplum a dit :

http://i.imgur.com/ER3lSkO.png

thought I should get critique on that

dayum thats impressive
I'm just going to guess the no face thing is part of style, so I don't really see anything wrong with it other than a missing tail.

Sourisplum a dit :

http://i.imgur.com/ER3lSkO.png

thought I should get critique on that

no redline bcuz no tablet but to me the shading looks a little awkward
like on the arm that just goes outward the highlight just seems to stop in a random place and on the chest the shading is in straight lines like rectangles kinda
also i think the sham marks on the face should be covered by the hair

Yeah I didn't put a face because I wanted to keep it more simple, maybe I should've put the nose or something though.

Soakitup a dit :

no redline bcuz no tablet but to me the shading looks a little awkward
like on the arm that just goes outward the highlight just seems to stop in a random place and on the chest the shading is in straight lines like rectangles kinda
also i think the sham marks on the face should be covered by the hair

Huh you're right, I probably shouldve highlighted the hand also. And also what's wrong with the rectangles on the chest? I was wondering whether I should make the sham marks go over or under the hair, and I didn't want to put it under the hair because the circle on the forehead would look strange, and all over the hair would make the ones on the body pop out too much.

http://i.imgur.com/apL5L4M.png

I dunno

Sourisplum a dit :

http://i.imgur.com/ER3lSkO.png

thought I should get critique on that

welp! this is amazing, since is a unique art style
i cannot really critque on anatomy etc etc because your style is more of a ... design icon type, not really an actual mouse.

All what i can comment is that one of her ear is shorter than the other.
and actually the smoke, in my opinion, does not really match with the overall picture. ><

Fierying a dit :

welp! this is amazing, since is a unique art style
i cannot really critque on anatomy etc etc because your style is more of a ... design icon type, not really an actual mouse.

All what i can comment is that one of her ear is shorter than the other.
and actually the smoke, in my opinion, does not really match with the overall picture. &gt;&lt;

XD I have the tendency to tilt the head a bit, I tried to correct that on the sham markings and stuff. Gotta make them perfect next time! And yeah the smoke is out of place

i think it's amazing too eeee
the second one looks better imo

(yells about how plum is gr8 at art)

Anyways, to clear up some confusion. . .
If I ask you to stop, then please stop. Wait a few weeks before critiquing again because you may have improved on your OWN anatomy in that time length.
If other people who frequently critiques here also askes you to stop, then it's a good idea to actually stop critiquing for the time being.

On another note, sometimes it's better if you also say who or what kind of artist you want to be critiqued by. Might help.

Crits please?

Immagetcheez a dit :

Crits please?

I think the tail should be more curvy.

are you sure?????
don't let personal opinion overrule your critique

I really can't critique this well (because watermelon bodies are uh... hard to redline? lmfao) but I will say that the head is seeming almost canine-like to me?

Haruhitastic a dit :

are you sure?????
don't let personal opinion overrule your critique

I really can't critique this well (because watermelon bodies are uh... hard to redline? lmfao) but I will say that the head is seeming almost canine-like to me?

Thanks Haruh I'll keep it in mind! (Will try round the maw a bit ♥)

Immagetcheez a dit :

Crits please?

This is what happens when you smoke a pipe 25/7

Like Haru said, the head looks kind of canine. If you try to curve the snout up slightly (instead of slightly down like you drew it) and maybe make it a bit shorter, then it should look more mouselike. Also blindfold mask things are normally tied at the back of the head, but that should be fine since some people like to draw them on the side. Also, the head looks bald-ish, maybe if you put some fur stuff textures it would fix that. And I'm pretty sure that if vulli wasn't so goddamn fat and had a normal body, then the forearms would be more fore.

And gosh I love how you drew the smoke I wish I could do that

Vulli a dit :

Well first of all my body appears to be a large fruit instead of a body

lol

Immagetcheez a dit :

Crits please?

i know i'm in no position to crit you but
http://i.imgur.com/o7fC52v.png
sorry for huge canvas + ignore my back leg because yours is fine
the feet should just be the same color as the inside of the ear

Sourisplum a dit :

This is what happens when you smoke a pipe 25/7

Like Haru said, the head looks kind of canine. If you try to curve the snout up slightly (instead of slightly down like you drew it) and maybe make it a bit shorter, then it should look more mouselike. Also blindfold mask things are normally tied at the back of the head, but that should be fine since some people like to draw them on the side. Also, the head looks bald-ish, maybe if you put some fur stuff textures it would fix that. And I'm pretty sure that if vulli wasn't so goddamn fat and had a normal body, then the forearms would be more fore.

And gosh I love how you drew the smoke I wish I could do that
lol

Lol thanks Souris, I admire your work.

Soakitup a dit :

i know i'm in no position to crit you but
http://i.imgur.com/o7fC52v.png
sorry for huge canvas + ignore my back leg because yours is fine
the feet should just be the same color as the inside of the ear

Tfw wtf you're in full position to crit me. Thank you! I love the way you did the ears/tail/feet, I'll think about that next time! ♥

e: And dem cutie eyes omg

crits for this please? I'd just like to see what people think could be improved etc. c:

Hoodiedoodie a dit :

crits for this please? I'd just like to see what people think could be improved etc. c:

The eyes aren't really looking the same direction and is irking me a bit.

The arms look somewhat. . . Off. I'm not sure why.
Somebody call Ork to handle this.

Don't worry Ash I 'got dis'.

The shadow on the left arm maybe distorting it in your eyes. Hang on, I'll red line it

Non TFM realated arts are allowed right? If so than please critique this:



If not than I shall get rid of it.

Also I would like critique on this:



I`m looking on improving shading, I think it`s gotten better though. Also any other advice would be very helpful.