Vivihi a dit :

Uhh...try and critique please? Not too harsh, im just a kid, people.


I know, the feet look awkward.

And I didnt shade >_>

You could try doing some hair at the back,and the legs look a little off because they go from the waist and it looks a bit weird if you know whait I mean.Then what Sourisplum said about the shirt. -v-

Sirusthemice a dit :

You could try doing some hair at the back,and the legs look a little off because they go from the waist and it looks a bit weird if you know whait I mean.Then what Sourisplum said about the shirt. -v-

Yes, as I said the legs look [url=]REALLY[/url] awkward. I tried to fix that up, but I failed, and just gave up.

Thanks for the advice about the hair :)

Vivihi a dit :

Yes, as I said the legs look [url=]REALLY[/url] awkward. I tried to fix that up, but I failed, and just gave up.

Thanks for the advice about the hair :)

I mean you should have a little help sketch to see how the legs go under the skirt.Then they will look less awkawrd. c:

Sirusthemice a dit :

I mean you should have a little help sketch to see how the legs go under the skirt.Then they will look less awkawrd. c:

Ahhhhh thank you :)

Iwuvcheesed a dit :

being harsh = approved
But I dont want any "the image quality is poor"

Thedarksidex a dit :

This is art I did for a friend :33 I've never had an art critique before so I'm curious.

i like your coloring and the bow on the tail

Not too harsh,and no asspatting ok.Critique all you want,lol.



P.S: I know the sleeves look retarded. 8'I

Harsh as you want. Slap me hard. Not sure if I posted this here, before *-*
I’m looking for critiques on the neck decorations, the bee fluff around her neck, and the head position. (And anything else fkjhskjfks)

Sirusthemice a dit :

Not too harsh,and no asspatting ok.Critique all you want,lol.


P.S: I know the sleeves look retarded. 8'I

Look over the sleeves. And the ears... the ears are um

odd. Too small and in a weird place. Oh, and the wings are on her butt. They're waaaay to love. (one more lol sorry) And her breasts are facing forward. They should be to the side.

Immagetcheez a dit :

Harsh as you want. Slap me hard. Not sure if I posted this here, before *-*
I’m looking for critiques on the neck decorations, the bee fluff around her neck, and the head position. (And anything else fkjhskjfks)


Look over the sleeves. And the ears... the ears are um

odd. Too small and in a weird place. Oh, and the wings are on her butt. They're waaaay to love. (one more lol sorry) And her breasts are facing forward. They should be to the side.

Haha,thanks.I'll try to think about the ears and breasts some more,I've always had problems with that lol.And the wings wouldn't be on her butt if they weren't summoned like they are in the picture,because here they're behind the hair (summoned).But anyway,thanks for the critique. ovo

Sirusthemice a dit :

Haha,thanks.I'll try to think about the ears and breasts some more,I've always had problems with that lol.And the wings wouldn't be on her butt if they weren't summoned like they are in the picture,because here they're behind the hair (summoned).But anyway,thanks for the critique. ovo

Sure! Good luck! That's a bad ass mouse, I love it *-*

Immagetcheez a dit :

Sure! Good luck! That's a bad ass mouse, I love it *-*

Yep,thanks!And I just drew myself in my new look out of boredom 8U

The only thing I need to say is about the breasts.
You're probably a girl and maybe had puberty so look at your own breasts and see how they go.
They're usually like water balloons.

Satash a dit :

The only thing I need to say is about the breasts.
You're probably a girl and maybe had puberty so look at your own breasts and see how they go.
They're usually like water balloons.

Yeh.Ik.Need to practice more.Lol.

Sirusthemice a dit :

Yeh.Ik.Need to practice more.Lol.

I would draw some examples breasts but I'm afraid Chris will see.

Satash a dit :

I would draw some examples breasts but I'm afraid Chris will see.

Haha,no need. |3

Here’s what they’d sortta look like in that position she’s in. Listen, it’s awesome, I can’t even draw legs well until I’ve drawing them a hundred times. Your colours are nice, too.

Immagetcheez a dit :

Here’s what they’d sortta look like in that position she’s in. Listen, it’s awesome, I can’t even draw legs well until I’ve drawing them a hundred times. Your colours are nice, too.

BOOBS.
Also the other nitpick I saw in the picture was the waist. It was kind of pretty er, small. The ribcage is a little bigger and then the fat and skin should be also applied on top of the rib cage.
*not you holly

Immagetcheez a dit :

Here’s what they’d sortta look like in that position she’s in. Listen, it’s awesome, I can’t even draw legs well until I’ve drawing them a hundred times. Your colours are nice, too.

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ahhAhhA ok this had me laughing anyway thanks and woo p p i am just good at legs (somehow) (i also got a color sense)

The boots are amazing though.
Maybe you should become a boots designer.

Satash a dit :

BOOBS.
Also the other nitpick I saw in the picture was the waist. It was kind of pretty er, small. The ribcage is a little bigger and then the fat and skin should be also applied on top of the rib cage.
*not you holly

Yeh I'll have to study anatomy for a bit -v-' Aain thanks for pointing this out 8'D

Satash a dit :

The boots are amazing though.
Maybe you should become a boots designer.

why you.no.just.No.