Haruhitastic a dit :

please do
i thought it was assumed by now

haru help me

Haruhitastic a dit :

i wish i could

please help do

And thus the once popular thread degrades into gibberish

EDIT: no

Sourisplum a dit :

And thus the once popular thread degrades into gibberish

plum
you need skype and add me

EDIT: god damn it

Felt that something was wrong about the white part of the body.
The orange tuff on the head is hair.

Laddee a dit :

Felt that something was wrong about the white part of the body.
The orange tuff on the head is hair.

are you trying to do anthro or just like a shark belly up

Laddee a dit :

Felt that something was wrong about the white part of the body.
The orange tuff on the head is hair.

First of all what the heck is up with the double fins

Laddee a dit :

Felt that something was wrong about the white part of the body.
The orange tuff on the head is hair.

why are there four fins

Sourisplum a dit :

First of all what the heck is up with the double fins

The first pair is the front fins, with the tiny 2 fins at the back. Didn't draw the pelvic fin though. Hold on,let me check the anatomy of sharks again.Edit:Oh, sorry, I got the fins wrong.

Soakitup a dit :

are you trying to do anthro or just like a shark belly up

It's an anthro.

Laddee a dit :

The first pair is the front fins, with the tiny 2 fins at the back. Didn't draw the pelvic fin though. Hold on,let me check the anatomy of sharks again.

It's an anthro.

1. anthro
An animal with human-like characteristics. A human with animal-like characteristics can also be called an anthro, but technically they are not.


Dude anthros are not animals that stand up right.

EDIT: I would've suggested searching shark anthro on dA but after doing it myself.... let's just say half the people who draw anthros are h**** men.

Oh silly me, I better do more research next time.

Sourisplum a dit :

1. anthro
An animal with human-like characteristics. A human with animal-like characteristics can also be called an anthro, but technically they are not.


Dude anthros are not animals that stand up right.

beautiful

Laddee a dit :

Oh silly me, I better do more research next time.

try drawing sharks with side-view before you try the position you did jsut now

It's supposed to be my mouse as a chibi :3 can you critique?

wooooopidy woop woop.i am so sorry for the huge fil e.


not too recent and not too old.no asspattings and nothing too harsh.i'm mainly looking for critiques at the nose/the whole face,arms and a bit on the legs too dfg

Can you critique this art? I know I'm too lazy to shade

Bethdacat a dit :

Can you critique this art? I know I'm too lazy to shade

quick sketchy redline-



okay- to start off, her back legs look really confusing.
It's hard to tell what kind of position she's in.
Is she leaping torwards the cheese? Or is she going to land on the platform with the cheese?
You could sketch her from the side- just a thumbnail, nothing fancy- to make sure you have her body and perspective drawn correctly.
Her hind legs are way too large when compared to the body and head.
Also, her head- where's her chin? Is she looking up?
Her tail looks really out of place, too-
If she'd be diving torwards the cheese, it would be out of view or barely in view, since it would be behind her (the air would push it back).

Can someone make a critique of this please?

Cuteprettypi a dit :

Can someone make a critique of this please?

Your shading could use a little work. (Sorry if this is your first time shading!)

The paintbrush shouldn't be sticking out like that. Maybe like how the mice hold it?

The tail's end looks like an extra paw. :o

Vivihi a dit :

Your shading could use a little work. (Sorry if this is your first time shading!)

The paintbrush shouldn't be sticking out like that. Maybe like how the mice hold it?

The tail's end looks like an extra paw. :o

Stop. Seriously. I think I've mentioned to you three or four times that if you don't put any more work into your critiques to stop, and here is no exception. Either put more effort in or don't do any at all.
Also for the record, it's in the mouth. It's not holding it.

Cuteprettypi a dit :

Can someone make a critique of this please?

That's a reaaaaally low hanging halo.
The arms are far too short and really awkwardly pasted onto the mouse.
The eyes are GIGANTIC. They take up almost the entire mouse face. The mouth is tiny and so is the paintbrush. If you're gonna have huge eyes make the mouth proprotionate atleast.

Cuteprettypi a dit :

Can someone make a critique of this please?

DOn't try to draw the snow fur like zig zag lines, try and make it look fluffy and not---well here's an example

http://fav.me/d6m7imt

The third mouse has the snow fur. Do you see how it looks really fluffy but the lines aren't wavy like your's? She put the fluff where it would stick out more, like the chest fur and cheeks, but not randomly dispersed over the whole body. Are you getting what I'm saying?

Probably not

EDIT: and do you know how to use layers