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Musicaholic « Citoyen » 1411427340000
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griffincraft a dit : I tried a little red line. Is this what you meant by 'ears flattened in aggression'? Dernière modification le 1411427760000 |
Griffincraft « Consul » 1411427700000
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^Yes, that’s what I mean. I’m not too good at that, that’s why i just make it look like the ear’s facing the wrong way >_< |
Musicaholic « Citoyen » 1411428900000
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The reason why the ears don't look aggressively flattened in your picture is because you drew them straight, not flattened. Simply changing the direction in which they are facing won't make it look like they are flattened in aggression. The inside of an ear that is flattened will be facing downwards, in stead of forward like it usually does. They will be located a bit further towards the back of the head and will be facing in that direction. Also, since the ear is facing downward, we tend to see less of the "inside" of it and more of the outer skin. (Unless, I suppose, if you're looking from below the cat) I'm not sure if that helps you understand it better, sorry if I wasn't through enough. Here's a picture of a hissing cat that I examined, maybe if you took a bit of a closer look at it you'd get a better idea. Dernière modification le 1411429080000 |
Griffincraft « Consul » 1411429620000
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Musicaholic a dit : Oh I never really had a good glance at it, so I thought it faced back more than down. Yeah, I really am bad at drawing them facing down, but I suppose practice will make that better. Thanks |
Musicaholic « Citoyen » 1411429680000
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griffincraft a dit : No problem, I wish you luck ^^ |
Griffincraft « Consul » 1411430220000
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Musicaholic a dit : Thanks, and thanks for the help ^-^ |
Sunnyhamster « Citoyen » 1411430940000
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ok um can someone maybe help me here? ah foxy is supposed to be kind of crouching down like that but not fully crouching doWN just so you know I don't really like how bonnie and chica (the two things in the background) came out and um if you're wondering what the white thing around chica's neck is it's a bib tbh just look up "chica fnaf" or foxy or bonnie and you'll see how they look lol |
Kattiej « Citoyen » 1411431360000
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griffincraft a dit : You can't just say you are "bad at it" for every. single. thing. Sunnyhamster a dit : I'll go ahead and say that the leg on foxy closest to us (the viewer) should be bigger, it's skinnier in your drawing. Or are they on the same line?? Well it either has to be thicker or the same thickness as the other one |
Griffincraft « Consul » 1411431600000
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Kattiej a dit : I dont say that for “everything”. I’m bad at paws and flattened ears, I don’t remember many other things I’ve said I’m “bad” at. Dernière modification le 1411431900000 |
Twillla « Citoyen » 1411431840000
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Thanks Kattij ^^ |
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Sunny, the pose looks awkward. It looks like Foxy is facing his ass at the viewer then the arms are glued to one side. Try overlapping the torso on the left arm. I also notice the eyepatch looks a little uneven, the string on it should be more to the side, and the patch a little wider (according to the right eye). What is that on the left side? A gate? |
Sunnyhamster « Citoyen » 1411432200000
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Lordfuzzy a dit : thank you and the thing on the left is a door |
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any suggestions for this? it's alot more helpful if lines were drawn over please! |
Twillla « Citoyen » 1411446300000
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Critique Please ^^ |
Fierying « Censeur » 1411451940000
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you can message me if you dont understand what i wrote ono, in a rush Girlkirbyy a dit : Twillla a dit : Dernière modification le 1411452000000 |
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Twillla a dit : Try adding a background, and make the mouse more detailed & creative! The ears are uneven, and the structure looks a bit awkward. |
Birdluv « Citoyen » 1411514700000
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Lordfuzzy a dit : I don't think telling someone to 'be creative' without specifying how they can is that much of a critique.. All I have to say is about the hips, which look like it belongs to a middle-aged woman. That part of the mouse bulges out more then in. Hmm, maybe extend the tail a bit, too. Dernière modification le 1411514880000 |
Kattiej « Citoyen » 1411516440000
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Twillla a dit : if that was the same drawing a critiqued a while ago, it looks much better. Follow Fierying's critiques as they have helped me a lot in the past :3 |
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also i could never imagine Vulli all anthromorphized so I tried to draw it Feel free to give design crits or anatomy crits or whatever hahaha I'm not used to drawing anthroy things |
Deletedaccount « Citoyen » 1411592760000
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Critique me! Just critique me Vulli a dit : Amazing :OOO |