[Fanfiction] ~When Cats Attack~ by Susanlwu |
Susanlwu « Citoyen » 1376595060000
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hai this is my first time writing a tfm fanfic ok Form Name (what you want to be called!) : On a scale of 1-10 with 10 being very important how important do you want your role to be?: Gender: Personality: ------------------------------------------ Chapter 1 ------------------------------------------ I put my paw onto my aching forehead. I had the dream again. The one where cats attack and kill everyone. I've been having this same dream every few days for a month already, and each time my headache increases. I slowly opened my eyes and saw... A CAT!? I screamed and rolled off of my bed, getting tangled in my sheets as I hit the ground. Then I realized there was no way a cat could fit in my tiny room... "HAHAHAHA," a familiar voice laughed. "The look on your face was PRICELESS!" "Very funny, Izzy," I said as I unwrapped myself and walked out of my room and down the stairs... In my pajamas with my hair still un-combed. Izzy was my best friend, and we had known each other before we could walk. "Wait up!" she yelled as she ran up beside me. I just sighed and faked a smile. "Whats the matter? You know it was just a joke..." "Eh, nothing. C'mon lets go watch TV!" That was a lie. I didn't want to tell her that I had the dream AGAIN, because I knew how much she worried about every little thing and finals were comng next week, that's more than enough to worry about. But I knew she thought I was lying by the look on her face. We walked into the kitchen to get breakfast. My parents were out so I sneakily took a bit of cheesecake, and went to watch me and Izzy's favorite show. A few minutes in, a large red warning appeared. It read: WARNING! CRAZY OLD MOUSE SPOTTED NEAR CENTRAL PARK. IF SEEN DO NOT APPROACH, IMMEDIATELY CALL 555-5555. Then a picture of a demented-looking old mouse appeared, which I assumed was the crazy guy. I gasped and instantly forgot about what happened this morning. I looked at Izzy with a large smile. "ARE YOU THINKING WHAT IM THINKING?" we both said in unison. I hurriedly brushed my hair and put on some clothes. Soon we were running to Central Park. When we arrived, I heard him screeching. Izzy poked me and asked me to follow her, and we scampered up a tree. We watched in silence as he hammered flyers into trees while dodging people with extreme precision. "That's some great agility and speed for such an old man..." I thought. "Just like someone I know..." He quickly ran under the tree Izzy and I was in, panting like a dog. I was afraid he'd look up and see us, but he didn't. Instead he crouches near a bush, pries it open, and jumps in a secret hole. Izzy was already climbing down the tree, so I followed. We looked at each other, and hopped in the secret hole. Thankfully we landed on a soft mattress, so he didn't hear us. He slowly took off his white hair wig, then this fake beard, and finally wiping the make-up off. Sadly, I didn't hide when he turned around... and saw me. We all froze in shock. He wasn't an old man. He was my crush, Dylan. Slowly, he came to his sense. "Look, I have something to tell you guys." _______________________________________________________ LAWL I LEFT YOU ON A CLIFFHANGER c:< ill continue when i get 5+ posts ehehe |
Vivihi « Citoyen » 1376595840000
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Oh my glob everyone is writing fanfics O.O Nice story tho :) |
Janeswdd « Citoyen » 1376596860000
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Just continue noooww D: |
Micefamilies « Citoyen » 1376596980000
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CONTINUE NOW!!!!!!!!!!! |
Vivihi « Citoyen » 1376597880000
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CONTINUE NAOW! |
Flutterbest « Citoyen » 1376598000000
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I read this on deviantart *-* awesome story. You must continue it...right now o.o |
Susanlwu « Citoyen » 1376685900000
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-------------------------------- Chapter 2 -------------------------------- “Kate, Izzy, this is the Defense Against Government Cats secret hideout. The officials have a plan-” He looked around and spoke in a hushed voice. “To kill us all with mechanical cats.” I didn’t know what to say. The officials would NEVER do anything like that... at least the ones that ruled in the very first years. I looked at him, thinking it was a joke and he would laugh at us, but his look was dead serious. “The only way to stop them is to use the legendary anvil god... but it went missing way back in 2013. I can’t tell you more, it’s private info. But if you want to find out more, keep a few people close and trust no one else.” With that, he walked into a private room and locked the door. Izzy and I climbed up to the entrance and walked out. “Race ya to the library!” She said with a laugh. “Hey! No fair!” When we arrived at the library, it was already 6 PM. There was barely anyone there. We pushed open the gorgeous glass double doors and walked in. “Hello girls, may I help you?” asked the librarian. “Uh.. ye-” I started to reply when Izzy slapped me. “Didn’t you hear what Dylan said? Don’t trust anyone else but the mice you know really well!?” I blushed and said a quick ‘nevermind’ to the librarian, then started to search for any info about cats, the Anvil God, or even history of Transformice. There was nothing, other than basic history books that everyone memorized back in elementary school. “Kate! Come over here and look what I found!” said Izzy. I rushed over to where she was sitting. She pulled out a dusty book from under a shelf and blew the dust from it. The title said “The Real History of Transformice and Everything You Need to Know to Survive in It” We started to read. The first few pages was about things like Wall - Jumping and Shamaning. Then I flipped to the part about the Anvil God. "The anvil god is one of the most powerful things in the world of Transformice. It can control any creature, whether living, dead, or mechanical. Mice have disturbed it for so long, and it started to kill the bad mice. Soon, it was banished far to the outer regions. It is said one can call for it" I didn’t even finish the sentence when two castle guards grabbed me and Izzy. “Well, what do we have here?” asked one castle guard. “LEMME GO!” I yelled and tried to escape his tight grip. But it was no help. “You girls shouldn’t be reading these type of things...” That was the last thing I remember before blacking out. --------------------------------------- sorry if its too long i just wrote and couldnt stop ._. |
Tahalechef « Citoyen » 1376686320000
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Not Bad, :3 Good Job ^-^ |
Flutterbest « Citoyen » 1376686440000
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Susanlwu a dit : this is really good so far :3 can't wait for the next chapter |
Susanlwu « Citoyen » 1376688240000
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Flutterbest a dit : Tahalechef a dit : ty wheeeee fluttershy (ies?) ty mice vvv |
Micefamilies « Citoyen » 1376688360000
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I love the story! *-* |
Xxxrubyxxx « Citoyen » 1376688840000
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Susanlwu a dit : amazing story! btw can i whisper you on private? |
Susanlwu « Citoyen » 1376688840000
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Xxxrubyxxx a dit : ok ill turn on whispers |
Cuteprettypi « Citoyen » 1379640780000
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Nice story! ;D |
Bengalstar « Citoyen » 1379640780000
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omg amazing story *-* |
Sourisplum « Citoyen » 1379641800000
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Wait so how come Dylan had to act like a crazy guy? |
Nekoava « Citoyen » 1379642340000
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Sourisplum a dit : ^^^^ This - Epic story otherwise. |
Susanlwu « Citoyen » 1379642580000
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because he needed to tell people of the incoming danger but couldnt ruin his reputation owo u brought this back 2 life the good news is i found the 3rd chapter that i forgot to post xD you can also request to be in the story Form Name (what you want to be called!) : On a scale of 1-10 with 10 being very important how important do you want your role to be?: Gender: Personality: ------------------- Chapter 3 ------------------- I woke up on the concrete, back aching from lying on there for so long. “How long was I out?” I asked Izzy. She looked up at the ceiling. It was concrete, just like most of the room other than a cell door. “I don’t know. The only thing I can say is that we are in the castle dungeons.” Of course we were stuck in the worst place ever. No light and food so vile that some have died eating it. I got up and pressed my body onto every corner wishing there was a secret exit or something. But after 15 minutes of hopelessly looking for a non-existent exit, I sat in silence. “Hey there,” a strange voice called from outside in the hall. I jumped up, startled. Izzy, who was sitting near the cell door, looked out too see who was there. She suddenly jumped against the wall and looked at me with terrified eyes. “Wwwho’s ttthere..?” I shakily asked. A hooded mouse stepped out of the shadows, and pulled off his hood. I was far away from the door, but I could clearly see the large scar on his face. Everyone knew he was The Dark Shaman, but no one knew his real name. He summoned an invisible cannon cannon and started to cut open the cell bars. There wasn’t much time, so we had to squeeze through. He motioned for us to follow and we crept down the hall. “THEY’RE GETTING AWAY!” one yelled. The two guards ran to catch us, and we ran through the castle corridors, turning every few seconds. The guards were slow and fat, so we sped ahead of them, finally arriving at the large doors at the front of the castle. That was definitely not a good idea, with all the guards standing at the main entrance. However, The Dark Shaman was faster and quickly spawned a cannon, knocking the large double doors off its hinges. ------ it is sorta short |
Imaewsome « Citoyen » 1379642700000
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Name (what you want to be called!) :Imae On a scale of 1-10 with 10 being very important how important do you want your role to be?: 9 Gender: giurl Personality: Nice, mostly when doing something fun. Weird, but cool, being weird is kinda her specialty, she's also good in hand-to-hand combat. huwhuwhuhueheuehuehhuhu |
Susanlwu « Citoyen » 1379643000000
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Imaewsome a dit : you will appear in the end of the next chapter or the start of chapter 5 depends how long i want it to be and if it delays too much free get also g'night |