[Fan fiction] How to get new friends? |
Mantlestar « Citoyen » 1377155700000
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"Hey, walk faster, Mantle! We need a table to use so we can have lunch in peace! Plus, today's special is cheese soup!" shouted a pretty cute student. "Ugh, whatever you say, mom!" I complained "Just do it, fatlass! I'm freaking starving!" "Oh, shut up, Strider! We're almost there!" As we were buying lunch, we laughed about that ugly mouse who winked at Strider. "AHAHAHA! Somebody's getting a boyfriend!" I teased her. "H-hey, don't tease me! It's freaking gross! I'd rather die than have him as my boyfriend!" she said. I sometimes wonder how me and Strider became good friends. We keep yelling at each other, yapping things that doesnt make sense, and after that we just laugh about how funny that mouse acts, or something else like that. As I placed my lunch on the table, some mouse winked at me as well. "You know, if that guy is actually winking at me, kill me now, please." I joked. When the bell rang, Strider said, "Let's go back to the classroom. I heard the teacher is going to announce something." As the teacher came in the premises, whispers of "Shhhh!" came about the classroom. "Good afternoon class. The day after tomorrow, we will have a trip. I will give you waiver slips, and then you are going to fill that up. You are going to write what's exactly on the whiteboard. And after you do that, we will do our activities for today. Is that clear?" the teacher explained firmly. The whole class answered, "Yes ma'am." While I was filling up the form, I've thought that Transformice Institute of Arts is fun. I love to draw, and create a colorful canvas. It's fun when you get to draw what you want. If you're forced to draw something else, it isn't really fun at all. But when the teacher says, "Paint whatever you want," my mind gets active and makes me want to put more colors when I think I'm actually done with my painting. Oh, how fun fun fun fun fun fun fun fun fun fun fun fun fun fun that was. And I've been thinking if "fun" is actually a word. As the teacher wrote what we're supposed to copy, the whole class exclaimed, "What?! We're going overseas?!" "Yes. No complaints! You guys are going there to find your hidden talents. And if you found yours, it's finally time to make it better. Any questions?" I raised my hand to ask a question. The teacher noticed I raised my hand, and she lazily asked, "What is it, Mantle?" "Why is that all of a sudden we're going overseas? I've heard the principal is cutting the school's budget." I asked. The teacher sighed and explained, "Nobody knows. And nobody, except you, is interested to know! They all care about going to Par-cheese, France without knowing the dangers of going there! I'd rather stay at home and sip a cup of tea. And what made you think the principal is cutting the school's budget?" "Senior students suddenly disappeared after their trip. Every single one of them. Of course, nobody wants to enroll here because they're scared to die." "And when did that happen? Do YOU know any witnesses?" "Every single student here knows that, why didn't you know?" I raised my eyebrow. This trip is very suspicious. Firstly, if you would like to look at the waiver slip, you can't choose to not come to the trip. Second, there's nothing wrong with enhancing our talents in the trip, but finding our hidden talents? I know this institute is for enhancing our talents, and our class is specifically for everything that relates to drawing and coloring. Lastly, but definitely not the least, we're going overseas! The principal is budget cutting, so why plan a trip to Par-cheese, France? As I was reading the waiver slip through, I noticed a fine print saying: "WARNING: JUST SHOW THIS TO YOUR PARENTS. DO NOT SHOW THIS TO ANYONE ELSE! OR ELSE, FACE THE CONSEQUENCES!" I had a loss of words. What consequences will I face when I show this to someone else? I planned to not show this to my parents and to not join this trip. "Hey Mantle, why are you crying?" Strider asked "Huh? Oh, it's just..." As I wipe my tears using my handkerchief, I showed Strider the fine print of the waiver. "Maybe I got scared of that and I cried without knowing myself." I said. "Maybe you shouldn't come to this trip." she said. "You, too. I don't want you to go missing." "Let's throw this away after classes." After classes, we've thrown our waiver slips away. And as we were throwing it away, numerous waiver slips crumpled into balls are lying in the trash bin. Looks like everyone had the same idea as ours. more coming soon more povs more characters until i find my ipod (i have 2 povs in there ;_;) I'm hiring more characters im making a new pov for the first 3 characters who will apply how to apply reference: your traits (the more the merrier): PS IF THERES AN ERROR DONT BE SHY, LET ME KNOW. |
Championrs « Citoyen » 1377157860000
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Get me in this story :P |
Mantlestar « Citoyen » 1377158220000
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Championrs a dit : oh there's a form |
Championrs « Citoyen » 1377168600000
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Mantlestar a dit : sorry im blind :P Reference: How I look like?--> Sonic Hat, Tiger fur, 3D glasses, and diamond tail : Im all orange:p My traits (the more the merrier): Im lazy, I love drawing through viprin's drawing editor, loves the forum :P |
Micefamilies « Citoyen » 1377175020000
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reference: your traits (the more the merrier):adventurous, shy fun, smart, friendly Nice story so far owo |
Kattiej « Citoyen » 1377178860000
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brb aplying traits: nice, friendly, stubborn (lol there has to be somethiing bad about her/me), cool and collected |
Mantlestar « Citoyen » 1377179640000
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ok im gonna think of something but i have to sleep ;_; (not even sleepy yet .-.) dam ninjas are cutting onions again |
Mantlestar « Citoyen » 1377244140000
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“Rise and shine, Kulche!” yelled a mouse not much older than me. “What was that for, Rev?! It’s summer!” I replied as I rub my eyes. The first thing I saw was a life buoy on Rev’s shoulder and sunglasses on his head. “Naz, what does this mean?” I asked. It was obvious we were going swimming. “We’re going swimming! Isn’t it obvious?” he answered. I wanted to laugh at myself. It’s definitely obvious. “Then why didn’t you guys woke me up earlier?” I asked. “We woke up earlier to leave you alone here in the mouse hole, of cou- Ow! Naz that hurt! I was kidding!” Rev said. “Actually, the reason is because we were so excited about the trip, that we forgot to woke you up! Don’t worry, we had not had breakfast already!” Naz explained. “Thank goodness for that. Let me take a bath.” I replied. As I was to exit the room, I noticed Rev is also holding a surfboard. I jokingly said, “Wait a minute! Why are you bringing a surfboard with you, Rev? You don’t even know how to surf!” Everybody started to laugh, even Rev. Phew that was a good start for the day! In the dining table, Rev tried to put salt on my pancakes and my French toast! And they still say he’s more mature than me! … We were peacefully going to the beach by using our van, and a maniac didn’t read the sign that says “One way,” and he almost put our life on the line. … “Hey dad, isn’t this a one way road?” I asked. “Yeah, it is. Why did you ask?” “Because there’s ANOTHER VAN GOING STRAIGHT TO US!” I exclaimed “DAD, TRY TO OVERTAKE! OR MAYBE SLOW DOWN!” Rev panicked “W-WAIT! TH-THERE’S A CAR BEHIND US! D-DON’T SLOW D-DOWN!” Naz stuttered. … We all shouted until our throats dried out. We have never experienced this. We didn’t know how to react to these kinds of situations. The good news is, all of us survived! Even the maniac did! … “W-What h-ha-happened?” I stuttered. I felt something heavy on my legs. I found out that it was my mom and Rev. “What’s this soft thing he- Oh, it’s Kulche’s feet.” Rev said. “Dad, are you ok?” Naz asked. “Yeah, and is everybody okay?” “I’m still alive.” I replied. “Yeah, me too.” Rev answered. “I’m so glad to see all of you alive!” my mom exclaimed. “I’m glad to see you alive, too!” Naz answered. … I’m just so happy everybody survived. awesome MS word made those awesome quotation marks ok 1 more pov (but im lazy to fix it ._.) |
Graciekinz « Citoyen » 1377280380000
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wow soo cool ouo nice |
Mantlestar « Citoyen » 1377348060000
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"Hi" she typed. She was one of the friendliest person I know. The Internet is really mean, but she is an exception. "hey! wb!" I replied. Even though we're friends, it's awkward talking to her everytime. "Evry, whr are you" she asked. "oh! i was in the lobby, jaja. sorry." I answered. "Hey, follow me! Your stats r a bit bad, but u can still make it better" I can really make it better, if I'm actually not day dreaming in front of my monitor. "C'mon" she insisted. After that, I followed her to have fun. I want to have fun. I want to be happy. .. "Mom! Mom! What's that?" I said, as I pointed to a foldable machine. "Oh, Evry, it's a laptop!" "Lap sop?" I asked as I scratch my head in confusion. "No, laaap- top." she corrected. "I want one!" I declared. ... While I was having a nice flashback, Jaja sent me 20 messages! How long was that flashback? ... "Happy 10th birthday, sweetie!" said my mom. As I blew the candles on the nicely decorated 2 layer cheese cake, my mom took a picture of me, crying because I was too close to the candle, and I felt my eyes are going to burn any minute. "Mom! This isn't a good picture at all!" I exclaimed. "Doesn't matter, I still have a picture of you, Evry!" my mom teased. As I sighed, my mom showed me a large box covered in gift wrapper, and finished with a big bow. "Oh my cheese! What's in there?" I shouted. When I was opening the present, my mom took shaky pictures of me. I couldn't make those pictures out, even now. I giggled as I found out my birthday present was... a LAPTOP. That piece of mechanism changed my life. ... 50 messages?! I should really answer her right now. "whut?!" I asked with a tiny bit of frustration. "Is ur lag that bad" she replied. "yeah. it's raining here." I said. I'm not actually lagging, but it's really raining. "Oh. Ok" she said. "great! thunderstorms! i hate them!" I complained. The thunder became stronger, and my Wi Fi connection became weaker. I tried contacting Jaja, but suddenly, BOOM! I jumped out of my chair, as my laptop's battery exploded. I was charging the laptop at the moment, and the charger is low quality. My laptop went into flames, and so did my desk. And half of my room was on fire. But, the good thing is, it's raining and the thunderstorm stopped. I breathed heavily as I watched the rain stop the fire. I was truly shocked for what happened. I wish that didn't happen. i have an idea for the other pov, im gonna update this tomorrow |