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Noobforevah « Citoyen » 1377455100000
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whoever you are i bet you're here to haunt my dreams because oh my dear lord jesus christ in heaven why is this here oh my god i just-- if you'd like to see how bad my writing was... go ahead... bUT I REALLY WISH YOU WONT. Yes yes this story is horrible. Don't be hatin. Actually, nevermind you can hate. Characters Tiff Vivi Ashley Ayrton Lovie (Soonmore?) -- Chapter 1 -- -- Anger Issues Much -- Tiff's POV The sun glistens through my fur, just as I was day-dreaming about lollipops, I was rudely awoken by my friend Vivi... With a stick. "Wake up already!" Vivi hits me with a stick right in the middle of my forehead. "What was that for Vivi!" I sighed, its not like she never did this before. She woke me up with 50 sticks and 5 apples, okay maybe im exagerating, but she always does this whenever I'm day-dreaming off in my own world. "I did it because you're sleeping silly! Now come on we're going to be late!" Vivi literally drags me off the floor into a mansion. As I looked around the place, I could see a few mice in here with us. One of them has yellow hair and sapphire blue orbs, while the other one has black hair and red orbs. Wait, there's another one behind that wall just staring at us. It looks like she has yellow hair and sapphire blue orbs... Wait. There's twins here? "Vivi you made it!" The person with black hair and red orbs starts to walk over to us. "Hey Ayrton!" The one called Ayrton stares at me. "Who's this?" "Oh, it's my friend, Tiff." Aryton waves at me. "Hello!" Hmph. I turn my head and look another direction. "Is she always that way Vivi?" Vivi shook her head. I sighed, I walked over to a corner and slept there, only to be rudely awoken moments later by being poked with a stick.. What's up with sticks and poking now-adays! Aryton's POV As I was talking with Ashley and Lovie, I could hear the door open. Vivi's finally here! I walk up to her to say hi. "Vivi you made it!" I said with joy. "Hey Ayrton!" I smiled, just then I could see another mouse beside her. "Who's this?" I said confused, why would she bring a friend over here? We made it clear it was friends only... "Oh it's my friend, Tiff." So Tiff was her name? I might as well be polite. I wave at her and say hello. She hmphs and turns her head in another direction.. How rude can she be! Lovie and Ashley back away slowly, scared of what might happen if we got Tiff mad. "Is she always that way Vivi?" Vivi shook her head. Why is she like that with us only? I could see in the corner of my eye that Tiff was walking into a corner.. And slept. Vivi walks over to her and chuckles. She takes out a stick out of her pocket and begins poking Tiff awake. Third Person POV As Vivi starts poking Tiff awake, Aryton walks over to Lovie and Ashley and begins talking about pie. Yes, pie. Once Tiff was awake, she looked very irritated. She then begins stealing the stick away from Vivi, doing this, Vivi starts running as if she knows what's about to happen. Tiff then begins throwing the stick on the ground and magically has a sledgehammer chasing after Vivi. Ayrton suddenly notices this and tries to stop Tiff from making Vivi a pancake. Ashley and Lovie starts to back away.... Very slowly. Tiff suddenly calms down and Ayrton sighed. Vivi suddenly stopped running and hid behind Ayrton. Vivi explained why she forced Tiff to the mansion. Tiff gets annoyed, yet again and with a Hmph, turns her head the other way. Ashley and Lovie tries to make conversation but Tiff just ignores them both. She mutters something unspeakable to be added to this story. Ashley and Lovie sweatdrop and laugh nervously. Vivi facepalmed while Ayrton mentally facepalmed. Tiff noticed this and became even more annoyed, she got a sledgehammer and started chasing after Vivi, for no apparent reason. - Time Skip - "Whew, glad that's over!" Vivi said panting. Tiff was found reading a book, while Ashley and Lovie was playing with dolls. Ayrton was just confused why everyone was doing something except him. Ayrton decided to walk over to Tiff to say sorry, but was interrupted with Tiff chopping him with a book. "What was that for!" Ayrton had enough of Tiff's attitude. "Hmph, you were going to bother me. That's it. I'm leaving." Tiff starts to walk out the door, when the door just then slammed, and got locked. Tiff was irritated. "Where else do we get out." Ayrton, Vivi, Ashley, and Lovie stepped away from her. "There's no escape......" Ayrton jumped in fright. "W-W-Who's there?" Silence. Nobody answered him. "Well if we're locked in here, we might as well find a way out. Everyone split into groups." Ashley was with Ayrton, and Vivi and Lovie were together. Tiff was alone. Once both groups left, Tiff walked through the endless halls. There was no hope left... -- Chapter 2 -- -- Locked In -- Tiff's POV As the four of them left, I sighed. Finally, peace and quiet.. I jinxed it. "Foolish creatures..." Hmph, mind's playing tricks on me I see. As I walked through the endless hallways, I could feel the temperature starting to decrease. What if it's not an illusion? What if that person wants to eat me? I shiver at the thought of it. My ears twitched, I start to hear footsteps behind me. I increased my pace with my tail right behind me. I found a door, should I open it is the question. I might as well take a gamble, as I start to open the door slowly, I saw something.... something horrid. Vivi's POV "H-how do you think the others are doing?" "I don't know Ashley... Just be brave. Im sure the others will be fine!" I smiled a fake smile. Truth is, we may never make it out alive. As we walk through the hallways, we heard a scream. "That's Tiff!" we both increased our pace, we cant leave some one in danger... Even if they end up making us pancakes with a sledgehammer. As we get to the scene, Ayrton and Ashley were there. "What happened Ayrton?" Ayrton and Ashley just facepalmed. "See for yourself, Vivi." As I look through the door, I could see Tiff fainted..... From rainbows. I sweatdropped. How could some one so fierce... Be scared of rainbows? I may be her life long friend, but I never seen her scared of rainbows. ??? POV As I continue stalking Tiff, she increased her pace. She can't escape from here, even if she DID try. It's impossible. As Tiff starts to open a door, she pierces my eardrums with her screech. I had to cover my paws over my ears to even pay attention to what's in the door... Rainbows. Scared, of rainbows. I mentally facepalmed at this. Just then, Ayrton and Ashley arrived first. I hid in the shadows, looking at what they would do. "Tiff are you alri-" Ayrton shut the door. "A-Ayrton what's wrong?" Ayrton shook his head. "She's scared of rainbows, that's all." Ashley facepalmed. I would have too, shortly a few minutes later Vivi and Lovie arrived. Hmph, I might as well let him live for a while... Their... What do you call it... Entertaining. -- TBC -- As I type on my laptop, I turn away from the screen to do something. I finish typing a few words, these are my words. To Be Continued. (BAHAHAHA thats a lie unless school actually gets back.) Dernière modification le 1445986500000 |
Micefamilies « Citoyen » 1377455580000
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FIRST :U i liek it |
Noobforevah « Citoyen » 1377455580000
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Micefamilies a dit : I will not give you a cookie :U |
Micefamilies « Citoyen » 1377455700000
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Noobforevah a dit : -cries- I like the story though |
Noobforevah « Citoyen » 1377455700000
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Micefamilies a dit : Okay. LOL XD don't cry. (Gives le cookie) vvv Lol. |
Micefamilies « Citoyen » 1377455700000
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YAY! -eats cookie- |
Dkghost « Citoyen » 1377455820000
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now people want to write stories i bet it's because haru :p nice story btw |
Noobforevah « Citoyen » 1377455820000
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Dkghost a dit : Lol. I did it because there's to many freaking fanfics now ._. also ty. |
Vivihi « Citoyen » 1377456000000
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Mrow...I'm in a lot of fanfics these days XD |
Noobforevah « Citoyen » 1377456000000
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Vivihi a dit : LOL. Your one of my friends so yeah XD |
Dkghost « Citoyen » 1377456360000
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Noobforevah a dit : Noobforevah a dit : true, good luck |