*AUTHORS NOTE* I'm new to forums, forgive me if this is the wrong place to post stories/fanfic. *Chapter 1* I cornerjump a block of ice before coming to rest on a chocolate slab. I'm exausted already while mice around me scurry about wall jumping like pros. I sigh, and unconcionsly say aloud, "I'll never be as good as the others"Mice around me shoot me glares and I realize that I messed them up. I cringe, chiding myself for always being such a screw up. A mouse in front of me mutters "Noob"A few mice laugh and the speaker flips her hair with a smirk on her face.My cheeks burn a little and embarrased I head back to my tribe house. I'm lucky to have the leader of the tribe as my friend. He calls me names like "noob" or dumbass" sometimes; I know he means them jokingly but it dosen't always sound like that. He made me his assistant though, I'm in charge of ranking people from 3:00 PM to 5:00 PM everyday.
Around 1:00 PM I decide to retire to my bed in the corner of the tribe house. The house is vacant surprisingly, and I decide to get some shut eye for half an hour.

I'm awakened by some chatter, which I ignore. It's probably Cindy and Alexa again, blabbing away.
I stand up and cross over to my mirror to brush my hair when I hear some words that alert my overly large ears.
"I know right? She's SUCH a noob, she's only in this tribe because the leader took pity on her."
I hear Alexa's laugh and her nasal voice echo across the room.
"Dinah is SUCH a geek, even her IQ is lower than her stats."
Their laughs bounce off the walls as tears threaten to spill out of my eyes.
I check the clock over my bed and nearly fall over.
It's 6:00 PM and I completely missed my shift. This happened last week as well but I had blamed it on the fact that I was feeling sick. This time I'm in trouble. I hastily get my ranking log and scribble down names.
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So thats Chapter 1! I hope you guys like it and I'll be taking names for the leader of the tribe and suggestions for chapter two in the comments.

First! Great story so far!

ahh nice story

very nice, moarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

*Chapter 2*

I finally finish the rankings after 2 hours and set down my pen. My leader makes us write everything by paw, and I have a terrible hand cramp. I hear some footsteps behind me and I assume it's my leader. I spin around and grimace preparing to have to explain why I was behind on my work when I see none other than Cindy. I timidly mutter,
"What do YOU want?"
She replied with a fake happy voice,
"Aww sweetie, what we said before, we're sorry, in fact I thought we could help you with your ranking!"
I try to but in with a:
"Thats nice but I...."
Cindy rambled some more.
"No buts sweetie, let us help you."
She and Alexa shared a smile. Suddenly I watch in horror as Cindy passes the papers to Alexa who dumps them into the sink and turns on the faucet.
My jaw drops and I hear another set of footsteps.
"Hello girls, how are you today?"
Alexa and Cindy bat their eyelashes and say:
"Hey Thomas"
I glance down at my bare wrist and hastily say,
"Oh look at the time I better get go-"
I'm suddenly cut off by Thomas raising his eyebrows at me,
"Dinah? Where are the rankings?"
I try to explain but Alexa butts in.
"Our dear Dinah slacked off again....She forgot to do her work again, what a shame"
My eyes water as Thomas glares at me from 3 inches above me.
"DINAH" He roared,
"THIS IS THE LAST TIME YOU SLACK OFF, YOU'RE FIRED."
I burst into tears and whisper,
"This isn't fair"
He glances up,
"What was that?!"
I timidly look up and say
"This isn't fair"
His eyes exuded anger.
"THEN GET THE HELL OUT OF MY TRIBE"
I ran to my bed and packed my clothes in my suitcase.
The last thing I saw before I left was Cindy and Alexa waving at me from the upstairs window mouthing the word,
"Bitch."

omygod -pulls sleeves up- THEY ARE SO MEAN I WILL PUNCH U IN THE FACE ALEXA+CINDy

Graciekinz a dit :

omygod -pulls sleeves up- THEY ARE SO MEAN I WILL PUNCH U IN THE FACE ALEXA+CINDy

^^^

Holy crap those girls are witches minus the w plus a b O_O

if that really happened i would've kicked them where the sun don't shine

Same. also MORE PLS :D

Awesome story! I cannot wait to see those girls get what they deserve! But why didnt she just show him the wet papers in the sink? SHe could explain what happened...right? I dont know but I'd like to read more.

*Chapter 3*
I walk out of the entrance and look back as a tear rolls down my cheek. I sit on the curb and begin to sob uncontrollably. All of a sudden I hear some wheels screech and footsteps then someone sits next to me. I glance up and see a mouse who looks a little familiar.
The voice is a little foreign but I can understand enough.
"Kikoo pwet, what is the wrong?"
I reply with my voice shaking:
"I was bullied and tricked then kicked out of my tribe"
The french voice speaks to me again.
"That is very sad, very sad, why don't you come with me and you can be joining my tribe, oh and what is your name girl?"
"My name? " I ask? "My name is Dinah.
"Wel Dinah, my name is Jean-Baptiste Lemarchand."


SORRY THIS IS SHORT, COMMENT IF YOU KNOW WHO THAT IS! CHAPTER 4 COMING TOMORROW!
Edit: Guess who it is and I'll make the name of your choice the name of Thomas's tribe!
Hint: He's a big name of transformice *Wink Wink*

i dunno who dat is ;; but.. awesome chapter especially since this person is french~

its tig
imma stalker deal with it

lmfao
it's tigrounette c;
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O.... eheh

hhAHHahAHAAa
ok

Livcorish a dit :

*Chapter 3*
I walk out of the entrance and look back as a tear rolls down my cheek. I sit on the curb and begin to sob uncontrollably. All of a sudden I hear some wheels screech and footsteps then someone sits next to me. I glance up and see a mouse who looks a little familiar.
The voice is a little foreign but I can understand enough.
"Kikoo pwet, what is the wrong?"
I reply with my voice shaking:
"I was bullied and tricked then kicked out of my tribe"
The french voice speaks to me again.
"That is very sad, very sad, why don't you come with me and you can be joining my tribe, oh and what is your name girl?"
"My name? " I ask? "My name is Dinah.
"Wel Dinah, my name is Jean-Baptiste Lemarchand."


SORRY THIS IS SHORT, COMMENT IF YOU KNOW WHO THAT IS! CHAPTER 4 COMING TOMORROW!
Edit: Guess who it is and I'll make the name of your choice the leader of the tribe!
Hint: He's a big name of transformice *Wink Wink*

moreeeeeeee

x3

tig obv ^^^^^^

*Chapter 4*

My jaw drops and I realize why he looked so familiar. Just when I'm about to say something Thomas, Alexa, and Cindy come rushing down the walkway and all start talking at once.
Thomas: "Ah Mr. Lemarchand! Fancy meeting you here!"
Alexa: "OMG YOU'RE JEAN BAPTISTE!!!!! NO WAY!"
Cindy: Is this bitch bothering you? I can take care of her, *Shoots me a death glare*"
(I'm going to call Jean, Tig from now on)
Tig cooly glanced over at Thomas.
"Ah Thomas, this is where it all ended up."
Thomas replied in a hasty tone, "Listen I'm so sorry about-"
Tig cut him off saying "Save it Tom, I don't wanna hear it."
Tig ushers me into the car and we speed off. Vanilla rooms and bootcamps pass by for what feels like hours. I finally build up the courage to ask Tig about Thomas.
"What did you mean when you said you don't wanna hear it?" I timidly ask.
"We started a tribe together years ago, it didn't work out and he quit. That was before I became the biggest name on Transformice. He's been begging for forgiveness ever since."
I realize what was bothering Tom all along. He had always been in shame. Serves him right.
We pull up to a huge mansion and I stand there in shock.
Tig casually says to me, "Welcome to your new home!"

*Chapter 5*
"I feel so out of place here" I think to myself. Everyone has superior stats and are all great at something like bootcamps or building. I hear a knock at the door and look at the peephole of my new room. (I have my own room!) I'm relieved to see it's Tig, and not Alexa or Cindy. I know it's silly but I'm paranoid. He pops his head through the door and says that he wanys me to try out for the tribe's lagball team. I frown, sports was never my thing, but I agree to try out anyways. We're team blue and I'm handed a jersey when I walk onto the court. The ball is served up into the air and
suddenly something comes over me.
I hurl myself through the air and bring my paw down on the ball.
The ball goes over the net and slams down on the other side. Suddenly everyone is quiet for a second before they burst into cheers!
I'm in shock, I never thought I had it in me but there it was all along. Tig and the coach walk up to me and tell me I've made the team.
I'm grinning like an idiot because for once in my life I feel like I belong.

CHAPTER 6 COMES TOMORROW

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