[FANFICTION] an Illusion |
Sirusthemice « Consul » 1378583040000
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Hey.So I decided to write a fanfiction because I had a huge urge to. ovo I hope you enjoy it. *1: Bakachoy / Eli ~ Ice Elementalist *2: Nekoava / Dakota ~ Wind Elementalist 3: Bubblespark / Ivy 4: Susanlwu / Susan JOIN REQUESTS ARE CLOSED *MY CHARACTER INFO* Name: Siri Age: 15 Special powers; blue fire Personality: Quiet,musical,intilligent,clumsy when not paying attention. ; blue eyes Constructive critism welcome but not too harsh please ; w ; P.S: I kinda suck at writing so I hope this will give me some improvement yo. CHAPTER 1 ~ Vibrating grounds "Life is an illusion," those words echoed in my head over and over again.They were familiar,however,I couldn't grasp any meaning in them at all.Just another ordinary morning,slightly cloudy,but still pretty warm.I took a last bite of my cheese and prepared to go outside on my daily chase.Something didn't feel right,the air was really dense.I threw all yesterday's thoughts away and skipped outside to vanilla. "There goes a mouse,there goes another," I quietly mumbled to myself,already in the hole.A new map came on while the bell rang,however,something was strange.The ground vibrated somehow.I wasn't sure if anybody else could feel it,but I did.I tried to ignore it as I ran towards the cheese.Each time my paw touched the ground I felt as I was getting hit by mini electric bolts,it dorve me crazy.The words echoed in my head once again.now,as if the mouse who spoke to me was right beside me,as in very loud.That startled me and got me to fall. ~ timeskip ~ I felt like I was falling endlessly.I wonder what even happened.After another few maps and a shaman turn I skipped away,back to the goth-esque tribe house of ours.Luckily,it was quiet there.No vibrations,no dense air,nothing.I grabbed a book and started flipping through the pages in search after my last stop. - I hope you liked this Q w Q I'll get to ch 2 tomorrow!~ |
Kattiej « Citoyen » 1378583160000
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woah o.o first post :D |
Sirusthemice « Consul » 1378583280000
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Kattiej a dit : What's with the woah and yeh. |
Kattiej « Citoyen » 1378583400000
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it makes me think its very good. ur a very nice author and writer |
Sirusthemice « Consul » 1378583520000
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Kattiej a dit : 'Xcuse you,I'm actually p bad at writing. |
Kattiej « Citoyen » 1378583760000
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o.o oh come on if u have an urge to write thts already pretty good. i never get urges to write. im too lazy |
Sirusthemice « Consul » 1378584300000
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Kattiej a dit : Ok then. |
Bubblespark « Citoyen » 1378584300000
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numsddfs can i join Name: Ivy Age (human years): 15 (not my real age c:) Picture (eye color included): - Light green eyes. Background character or *special powers character?: Is being a main character an option? If special power,what kind of power?: None. Personality (A MUST): Shy, has insecurity issues, and won't speak unless comfortable. |
Bengalstar « Citoyen » 1378584540000
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I really like how you used dialogue at the beginning of the story |
Sirusthemice « Consul » 1378584660000
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Bubblespark a dit : F i l l i n t h e f o r m. o o v o |
Bubblespark « Citoyen » 1378584780000
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Sirusthemice a dit : dun |
Sirusthemice « Consul » 1378584780000
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Bubblespark a dit : Ok you're in.And no,there's no main character option.But be ready for a surprise that I've prepared. ovo |
Bubblespark « Citoyen » 1378584780000
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Sirusthemice a dit : alright then c: |
Nekoava « Citoyen » 1378590180000
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Name: Dakota. My nickname is Cody. (It's true.) Age (human years): 14 Picture (eye color included): Dark brown. Background character or *special powers character?: Main character..? Wait nvm. You can pick. As long as I'm in the story a lot. xDDD If special power,what kind of power? Personality (A MUST): Shy, insecure, mainly emo, really cute and has guys asking for her number, a lot. |
Sirusthemice « Consul » 1378590420000
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Nekoava a dit : You can gt a role of a character with powers,because then you will be more or less the main character along with me and someone else. ovo P.S: I knew you would comment sooner or later. eve |
Bakachoy « Citoyen » 1378591560000
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ah i'd love to be included in this story ;o; Name: Eli Age (human years): 15 Picture (eye color included): same blue as in ref Background character or *special powers character? speical powers pls If special power,what kind of power? Elementalist//Ice Personality (A MUST): usually the humurous and cynical guy in the group. more often than not, he's outgoing to those he's close with |
Sirusthemice « Consul » 1378591560000
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Bakachoy a dit : Ok!You're in! probably ch 2/3. :3 |
Nekoava « Citoyen » 1378591740000
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Sirusthemice a dit : So I'll be a main character with you and someone else (???). Sirusthemice a dit : LOL are you psychic? |
Sirusthemice « Consul » 1378591860000
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Nekoava a dit : Yeah.You are just as important as Eli (Bakachoy) and me. 83 ...Yes.I actually am. ovo Also specify your powers please >w< |
Bubblespark « Citoyen » 1378594020000
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edited |