[Fan-Fiction]Angel in the Sky |
Bethdacat « Consul » 1379795040000
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Hey, my mice friends! I have decided to do a fan-fiction of an angel mouse and her destiny to save her world from destruction of her world, Transformice. She will need to have power of her mice friends (SAM: I WANT YOU.) to work together to stop the cats. Let's start by describing the names of our mice friends in the fan fiction! ^^ Names, Names and Names: Bethdacat=Beth Fluffyshyl(qtest)=Fluffy Glorialisa=Glori Cuteprettypi=Pi Nekoava=Dakota Juliasaysmoo=Jessica Rainbowloca=Rainbow Mootsoup=Moot Kura=Kura Sydoline=Sydo Tigrounette=Tig Sonikku=Sonic Marliaaaaa (idk how much letters so deal with it)=Maria (more please? i give cookies~) And then let's start our prolouge thing~ "Wake up..." a distance voice called towards the little mouse's dream. "Wake up..." it called again towards her. She opened her pure green eyes in the darkness. All there was was darkness and... what? A shaman goddess? "Here, my young one, let me help you get up." She took her hand and stood up. The shaman's name glowed in the eyes of the mouse. "Sydoline," it read towards her. "I will protect you in the distance. you are the first one." Sydoline whispered to it's ear. "T-The first one to w-what?" the mouse stammered. "The first mouse to have angel wings." Sydoline smiled adorably. They both walked into the darkness. "Our world is being destroyed by cats." Sydoline frowned and a TV screen popped up. It showed a tabby cat scooping up a bunch of mice. "Help!" "Sydo!" "$%^$ you cat!" the mice screamed frantically in the stormy map. The tabby cat licked it's lips and ate the bunch. "You must stop the cats, but, what is your name, little mouse?" Sydo asked. "Beth" was all the little mouse could whisper. END OF PROLOUGE ~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 1: Cheesecake Pwets ~~~~~~~~~~ Beth woke up in a grassy land with walls. She remembered being made, going to this room. The tutorial room. "You are a little mouse! Go fetch the cheese on the right, using the keyboard arrows. Press up to jump." the tutor mouse would say. She walked to the right, and jumped the obsticle. She took a piece of cheese. "Well done! Now bring back your cheese to the mousehole!" She fell on the ground, legs first. She went to the hole with her cheese. Hearts surrounded it. She was taken to room "11". Mice young and old were running. Beth saw the cutest mouse she had ever seen. It's name glowed too. "Fluffyshyl," it read. This mouse belonged to a tribe. It was named Cheesecake Pwets. "Excuse me..." Beth asked. "Yea?" Fluffy replied to the little mouse. "Could I please join your tribe?" "Sure! Just let me invite you there." Fluffy worked on her letter and sent it towards Beth. Beth found herself in the tribe. A mouse named Glorialisa was there. "Welcome to the tribe, Beth!" Glori welcomed the little mouse in the distance. ~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 2: Cat in the Bushes ~~~~~~~~~~~ It was about time Beth and the others had went in the tribe house for a meeting. She could feel a warm breeze in her fur. She had been feeling those before, but this one was very warm. "Okay," Glori said to get the mice's attention, "so, you say you have spotted a cat?" "Yes..." Beth stammered in fear and hid in a corner. "She's afraid of cats eatting her," Fluffy said to Glori, "in fact, everyone is." Just then, a mouse appeared, her name was Staarii. "Hi guys!" Star shouted from the hole. "Hi cutest!" Fluffy shouted back towards the hole. But then, a cat appeared. Was it the same tabby cat? Yes, Beth thought inside her head, It is that cat. Now the cat was holding two mice in it's paws. "Help me!" a mouse named Cuteprettypi cried. "Save us!" a mouse named Nekoava shouted. "I have to stop that cat," Beth said sternly to her mates, "You stay here." The little mouse padded towards the cat. Shamans from all rooms tried to cannon the cat, but it didn't do anything to it. The cat used it's tail to wipe out all of the shamans. The shamans were instantly eaten up by the cat. Beth had a flashback, when she fainted by something, when she met Sydoline... ~~FLASHBACK~~ "$%(^ you noob!" the shaman, Popmcwho offended Beth when she climbed. The shaman used cannons first, but Beth dodged them. The shaman used a box and Beth fell towards her death and closed her eyes. "Hahaha!" "Noob!" "^)($ you Beth!" was all the mice were saying. "Goodbye stupid" were the last words Beth could hear before she fainted. ~~~~~~~~~~~ Beth had tears in her eyes but she never gave up stopping this cat. Will she get there in time? ~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 3: New Mouse ~~~~~~~~~~~ Beth climbed up the cat and used her skills to get up to the cat's face. She looked down. 3 feet to below. She went on the cat's nose. "Ah... ah... AH-MEW!!!" The cat had sneezed and fell to the bottomless pit of map 0. "Hey guys! What did I miss?" Jessica ran towards Beth and the 2 other mice. "Dakota, explain to her everything about this person, except for the secrets." Pi smiled at Dakota and Jessica. Dakota explained everything but Beth's secret to Jessica. "Cool!" Jessica yelled, "I want to take a picture!" Jessica got her camera out and the 3 mice smiled. "I'll go back to my tribe," Beth said to the others, "do you wanna come?" The 3 mice cheered as they walked down to the house. (sorry it's short) ~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 4: Another Mewcomer ~~~~~~~~~~~ It had been days since the tabby cat fell down the pit. Beth gazed lazily towards the outside of the house. Glori, Fluffy, and the 3 new mice were playing with a ball outside. The rest, well, they were gazing at the TV, listening to "What Does The Fox Say". Star now stopped drawing a request and began dancing randomly. Beth just stared at the cold sun from outside. Her green eyes shone if you were outside. Rainbowloca noticed Beth staring outside lazily, thinking she was depressed. "It's nothing," she whispered, "I have a mission too." Rainbow was not suprised hearing her talk to him like that. "But if you have a mission, you're supposed to do it!" Rainbow screeched like a rat at her. Just then, all of the mice in the tribe heard thumps. They got louder and louder until they saw a Siamese cat with another mouse bunch. Beth memorized one of her friends, Mootsoup, in the bunch. "Beth!!" Moot cried towards her, "BETH!! HELP!!" "No! Moot!" Beth cried and got up from the purple chair she was gazing lazily in. "I have to save Moot!" Beth jogged out of the door, past the mice watching the TV. "I wonder what Beth's up to now." Star wondered. Beth ran past Glori, Fluffy, Jessica, Dakota and Pi. She ran towards the cat. Her wings were revealed so far, everyone in the tribe house could see the little wings. Beth turned into a shaman. Her tattoos were revealed first. Then, the feather appeared. "I'LL SHOW YOU!!" Beth screamed as she spawned a cannon towards the cat's stomach. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 5: Something Missing ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Beth's eyes had disappeared, now that the cat got up when the cannon hit it's stomach. The cat screeched and used it's claw and tried to catch Beth, but it was no use. Beth's heart was beating over one million beats per hour. She was breathing, but not suprised on what was going on here. "What's going on?" Fluffy hid instantly by Glori, "I don't want my clothing to be un qt T.T" "Don't ruin Fluffy's clothing!" a mouse voice called. His face looked familiar. He had that same headband. The same carrot. The same... "KURA!!!" Fluffy yelled and ran towards Kura. It showed he was an admin. Meanwhile, the cat and mouse fight went on. Beth was still crazy and was spawning multiple cannons to the stomach of the cat. The cat kept screeching and failed to catch the little mouse. Beth looked and saw herself knocked down. Then Sonikku (sonic) showed up as another shaman. "That guy named Tigrounette told me the same mission." Sonic replied to a mind, "I can see everything." Beth got up from his paw and continued to spawn cannons. The last cannon was in the cat's eye. The cat continued to screech and fell down Gloria's mech map. A mouse fainted from that fight. Star smiled. Another mouse fainted with the mouse. Soon, all of the mice fainted by the fight. Glori and Fluffy and Kura were laughing not so mean, but thinking it was funny. "MEEP MEEP MEEP" Kura laughed out loud and spawned meeps everywhere. "MEEP MEEP MEEP" "MEEP MEEP MEEP" Glori and Fluffy loled too and found theirselves spawning meeps everywhere. Soon, everyone in the map was loling and meeping. Sydo and Tig went up a hill and saw everyone meeping. First, Sydo loled and meeped. Then, Tig put on a troll face and rofled and meeped. "Wait. Something's missing." Sonic looked around the map, sniffing the air. Then everyone sniffed the air. Beth instantly ran and went to another room to find the thing Sonic was missing. (by the way , Mootsoup was saved.) ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Chapter 6: The Squeak Patrol ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Beth was in room 1 and all of the mice there were shouting stuff she didn't understand. She swished her tail from side to side until a crash was heard from room 5. "W-What's going on?" a mouse stammered as the shaman's feather grew darker. "No one knows! We're all going to die!" another mouse screamed frantically on the shaman map. The shaman said nothing but he then made the grounds disappear, including the cheese and the hole. "He's... a slave...?" Beth wondered inside her mouse head. The shaman then screamed in the map, making the map have wind. Her wings were brushed in the breeze as the shaman screamed more like a rat. Her heart was beating over 9001 beats per hour. She was breathing heavily as the shaman spawned a huge cannon. (this chapter is wip so deal with it) ~~~~~~~~~~~~ Tell me if I should improve the story by ideas and you might get a cookie! <3 |
Fluffyshyl « Citoyen » 1379795160000
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BEAUTIFUL!!! <3 |
Nekoava « Citoyen » 1379795700000
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Can I RQ to be in the story? -Waits for form or reply- |
Bethdacat « Consul » 1379796300000
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Nekoava a dit : yes, your fan fic name and personallity please |
Tahalechef « Citoyen » 1379796300000
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Beautiful, Great job ^^ |
Cuteprettypi « Citoyen » 1379796300000
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Bethdacat a dit : Can I be in? My fanfic name is Pi and my personality is Shy but hyper :P |
Bethdacat « Consul » 1379796720000
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Tahalechef a dit : Thanks qt -gives cookie- Cuteprettypi a dit : Sure! -gives cookie- |
Nekoava « Citoyen » 1379796840000
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Bethdacat a dit : [url=]Form:[/url] [url=]Name in fanfic[/url]: Dakota Dillons [url=]Personality[/url]: Known as an emoctional 15year old mouse who won't back down, no matter what. She loves skateboarding and is very flexible. She's random, funny, and emo at the same time. Just remember, don't mess with her. Or she'll mess with you. |
Bethdacat « Consul » 1379797080000
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Nekoava a dit : -gives cookie- youre in |
Nekoava « Citoyen » 1379797200000
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Bethdacat a dit : Yayyyyyyyyy -Nom nom nom- |
Cuteprettypi « Citoyen » 1379797980000
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Bethdacat a dit : OMG YAYYYAYYAYAYAYAYAY I GOT DA COOKIE! :D |
Bethdacat « Consul » 1379800140000
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New chapter! |
Juliasaysmoo « Citoyen » 1379800140000
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Didn't you say I'd be in it? |
Vivihi « Citoyen » 1379800320000
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OMG NICE STORY! |
Bethdacat « Consul » 1379800560000
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Juliasaysmoo a dit : will add you to the next chapter. Vivihi a dit : Thanks qt! -gives cookie- e: New chapter! |
Bengalstar « Citoyen » 1380277740000
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aww cute stories ^^ |
Marliaaa « Citoyen » 1380295140000
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might join this if u want |
Bethdacat « Consul » 1380317160000
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Marliaaa a dit : yes, your fan fic name and personallity please Bengalstar a dit : Aww thanks qt -gives cookie- e: New chapter! e2: Another new chapter! |
Fluffyshyl « Citoyen » 1380413520000
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YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH KURAAAAAA <3 |
Satash « Citoyen » 1380413640000
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nice story but you could use some details |