Atelier 801
Transformice 
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| I hope you enjoy my story, and critique's are [url=]allowed[/url], but please do not fix my spelling! [url=]Characters:[/url] Kirin (Noobforevah) Beautyiscool (Beauty) Flutty (Flutterbest) Imae (Imaewsome) Iwuv (Iwuvcheesed) [url=]Chapter One: A Whole New World[/url] Iwuv's POV I looked around this strange place, wondering what it is. I saw a mouse. He looked like a trainer with his hat and all. On his face was not a smile, but an annoyed face that I was here. Maybe he's tired after training lots of new mice. The mouse trainer said:  So I did what he said, fetched the cheese towards the right then bring it back to the hole. When I went into the hole though, I landed in a totally different place! Somehow a book about Transformice was right in front of me. In the book there wasn't much except how Transformice was created, where to go, and the rules. *DING DING DING* I wonder why a bell went off, maybe someone got in trouble? Well, I must get cheese now I suppose if I want to be some clothes. Speaking of clothes.... I wonder what they have at the shop! "Move it you idiot!" Yelled a mouse Oh yeah, I forgot I'm blocking the cheese, oops! Now I shall go to the store, I got out the book and looked for where the store is. After that I went searching for the store! ______________________________ Ahh, here it is! I walked in and saw some fabulous furs that I could buy! The only problem is... I don't have any cheese. Maybe a helper at the store could atleast give me some cheese to start out with? "Um h-helper?" I asked shyly She turns around and sees me. It takes for her a second to respond, but then she finally says something. "Yes, do you need help with something?" She asks politely "Indeed I do, you see I'm new here and I was wondering if you could um give me some cheese?" "Oh, I don't give free cheese darling! I only sell clothes!" She says laughing Well that was embarrassing! As I was walking out she taps me on my back, I turn around to see what she wanted. ______ I AM NOT ACCEPTING CHARACTERS |
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| [url=]Chapter 2:Meeting some new friends[/url] Iwuv's POV "Before you leave, I would like you to meet 2 of my daughters." The helper said "Um okay, what are they're names and where are they?" I asked "They're names are Flutty and Beauty! They're currently at their tribe. In a few minutes though, they'll be getting cheese in Room 1, so you can go talk to them their!" "But I don't even know what they look like!" I whined "This is a photo of Beauty.  " The helper says, showing the photo. "And this is Flutty.  " She says as she gets the photo of Flutty out Off to Room 1 then! I opened my book, to find Room 1, then went there. I just hope I find Flutty and Beauty! I'm so scared. *DING DING DING* Seriously! Why does that noise go off alot? I'll just try to ignore it, as best as I can. Oh! I see the cheese! I grabbed the cheese then went staright to the hole. It's actually very cozy in there! Even when their is alot of mice smushed in it. Next map! I looked around to find Flutty and Beauty, I focus really hard because I do not want to miss them! "Hey watch where your going noobie!" Yelled a mouse I stood up and saw it was Beauty! I must of accidently tripped over her. She looked like she did in the picture, so it must of been her. "I-I'm so sorry Beauty I didn't see you!" "Wait... How do you know my name?" Beauty said confused "I know your mom, well kind of she works at the clothing store! She told me to find you and your sister Flutty, so you can kind of help me around Transformice." I tried to say that bravely. "Oh, well I'm sorry for sounding so rude! So, whats your name?" She says in more of a clam voice "My name? Well my name is Iwuv." "What a nice name! How 'bout we: collect some cheese, then you can meet my younger sister Flutty?" She suggests "Great idea!" I respond So we went to get cheese. The good news is, when we finished, I got 89 cheese in total! Woo-hoo! And she got 184 which is WAYY better than what I got. But hey, it's better than nothing! |
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| Thanks everyone! [url=]Chapter 3:The Forums[/url] Iwuvs POV Beauty and I started walking to Room 801, because Flutty was there. She was talking to some of her friends but in the corner of her eye, I could tell she saw Beauty and I. She kept talking to her friends though until finally beauty taps her on her shoulder. "Flutty! I have a new friend for you and me!" Beauty says excitedly "Cool! Is this the new mouse? If so she looks very kind." Flutty says back "Yep! I just wanted you to meet Iwuv, before we head on out of here." "Ah, I see. Well it was nice seeing you Iwuv!" Flutty says happily "Nice seeing you to Flutty!" I respond Then Beauty and I head out of Room 801 and go to a random room filled with lots of mice. It was so crowded, I was sure Beauty was going to lose me! But luckily, we stayed close together so nothing would happen. "So what do you wanna do with your cheese, Iwuv? Do you wanna spend it or save?" Beauty asks me. "Hmm,I guess I'll save it up, until I get 100 pieces of cheese! Then I'll buy something awesome." I respond "Okay! So now, we are going to go hunt a tribe for you!" "A tribe? That sounds exciting! Where do we go to get a tribe?" I say all of a sudden confused. "Well that's easy. Follow me, we're going to the forums so you can get a tribe that you will enjoy." So Beauty started walking to the forums, while I followed her. I wonder what are in the forums, or what in looks like. Well I guess I'm going to figure out today! ___________________ When we got to the forums, it was REALLY big! I don't think I could ever use that by myself! Beauty logged in to her account and started seraching for the thread to join a tribe. "I found the thread!" Beauty says as she moves over so I can see  "Wow! Click on it. I want to see what i can do to join a tribe." I say jumping up and down So she does. The first thing that I saw was a comment that had a form to join a tribe. Beauty copied the form, then went to the last page and pasted it. "Okay so, you're going to fill the form out Iwuv,. Understand?" Beauty says with no hesitation. "But what if people think that you're asking for a tribe?" I say unsurely "Hmm, I never thought of that. Well I guess you're going ot have to make an account!" So Beuaty logs off her account, and goes to the homepage. She clicks on the "Sign Up" button, then let's me make an account for the forums. - Author's Note:I do realize that I've repeated some words lots of times. I'll try not to do that! |
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