[Fanfic] Portal To Another World |
Xkeepasecret « Citoyen » 1382290380000
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Characters: Mary (Girl) - Brave, Friendly, Caring. Sky (Boy) - Tricky, Loving, Liar (More To Come) About a girl (Mary) that is a mice who enters the human world. She find a charming human (Sky) to help her with. Chapter 1: Before I was drunk and kissing the man I wasn't supposed to kissed, lets start with the beginning shall we. It was a cold winter day, Mary was walking into a cave. "I need somewhere to sleep" said Mary. I had ran away from home. It's not my fault that my dad messed with my feelings. Just hope I don't cry again. Thats why I'm walking to this cave. I have a legend charm braclet, holding it tight. Trying to find that magical door that leads me to ANOTHER WORLD. When Mary was walked to the cave there was a door. "What type of cave has a door!" thought Mary. She figured out something, the door lock matched her charm braclet. She put her charm braclet in and a portal sucked her in. Though the charm braclet disappeared. She fell down she was so hungry for cheese, she could eat anything. Well that was only the beginning....wait a minute what are these to long things that help me stand up! How come I'm so tall and wheres my tail! I'll ask that boy over there! I got crawled on the ground wait.... this is to weird the boy is standing on these things. Mary got up wiggled a little bit and walked. She ran to the boy "HEY YOU WHATS YOUR NAME!" Mary said. "Sky jeez nothing to yell about!" said Sky. "I have some questions...dumb questions." said Mary. Mary blushed at him for some reason. "Sure... what are they?" Sky asked. "What are these things" said Mary. I pointed at these things I was stand on. "Legs..." said Sky. "Okay and what planet is this?" Mary said asked. "Earth..." said Sky. Mary hugged him, she couldn't help it. "Good you just made a friend now lets go!" said Mary. "I got to go to school" said Sky. "Then I'll go with you!" said Mary. Sky walked as Mary walked. "Feels like a new beginning" thought Mary. Hope you liked! :D |
Noobforevah « Citoyen » 1382290560000
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(first part I read) OMGAWD SHE DRUNK. (finished reading) This story is kewl. I dont understand it slightly. But Kewl c: (( SHE IN LOVEEEEEEEE )) |
Xkeepasecret « Citoyen » 1382290560000
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Noobforevah a dit : Lol ty xD |
Arcticangel « Citoyen » 1382290800000
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I like it so far but just wondering, is it TFM related? |
Noobforevah « Citoyen » 1382290800000
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Arcticangel a dit : Well. It sort of is... If you think about it.... er... I dont know anymore. MY BRAIN CRASHED! E: Well, maybe later on in the chapter the author will post... *cough* mouse related things *cough* vvv I KNEWW ITTT~ We-well maybe not. (ahem) quarter* |
Xkeepasecret « Citoyen » 1382290920000
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Arcticangel a dit : It's like one quarter of tfm related... but it will get more related in most of the chapters. |
Xkeepasecret « Citoyen » 1382293080000
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*PREVIEW* Chapter 2: (New Character Added!) Emiley We walked threw the door, and rushed to the prinicpal office. That was atleast what Sky called it. Sky talked to the prinicpal while I sat with this girl named Emiley. "Hi! My name is Emiley!" she said. "Hi my name is Mary?" I said. "One time my cat fell down trying to get some food from the frige! Emiley said. We both laughed. "Do you have any pets?" said Emiley. I didn't have a pet because I was the pet. "Lets get you a dog!" said Emiley. "I have to stay here though." I said. I looked at Sky who was signing my papers then looked at Emiley who was smilling crazy at me. "What the heck?" Mary said. Emiley grabbed my hand and rushed me out the door. "Let me see Mary" said the prinicpal. "Okay she right...." Mary was gone. "What the heck!" said Sky. "Be right back?" said Sky. Sky rushed out the door. |