[Fan-Fic]The Wise Old Mouse |
Erikadeedee « Citoyen » 1387506660000
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Elo. I'm Erika, and this is my Fan-Fic for Transformice. This is called, ''The Wise Old Mouse.'' Flags standing for: BR: Characters EN: Info ES: Story ~ Matt started a myth of The Wise Old Mouse. Haru and Loukno decide to climb the mountain, sacrafice their lives, to find this mouse, and to see if the myth is true. Will they survive? Anyways, this is my first fan-fic i've ever made of Transformice *-*! The first chapter is very dumbs as I wrote this a LONG time ago, but it progresses. ~ Stuff for the story! Tacpin Fanart Bengalstar~ Poem Bengalstar a dit : Characters: Loukno Funny, never gives up, and always listens. ~ Haruhitastic(Haru) Probably the smartest of the group, amazing problem-solver. ~ Wise Old Mouse Teaching mice how to fight, and be great. ~ Matt The rumour starter, not as smart as the regular mouse. CH. 1 THE GREAT WISE MOUSE Loukno walked across survivor. Mice screamed and screamed of joy, while they hopped around, Loukno found Haru. ''Loukno, how are you?'' Haru said, joyfully looking at the room. Loukno answered with ''Good,'' and they walked across the room. Haru dodged the cannons, while Loukno fell everytime. Mice screamed and screeched as they saw people fall off the survivor area, and continued to look across the room for cheese. Of course, Loukno had a long awaiting sentence she wanted to tell Haru. But of course, Loukno didn't want to say such things. Alot of the times, Haru didn't believe her in situations. Loukno wanted to tell her about The Wise Old Mouse. Certainly she always thought Haru was so good, she could be trained by him herself. But she knew that wasn't true. They talked for a while, survivor players rambling, and talking to friends. Loukno finally just talked to Haru about it. ''HaruHaruHaru,'' she said, jumping around. ''What what what, Loukno? What do you need?'' Loukno told her of how she heard of the ''Great Wise Mouse'' yesterday. Her friend, Matt, had told her about the legends of him. Wise Mouse seeked in the mountains, awaiting to train mice, and always lurking around. She always believed myths, mainly because they were so facsinating. Haru knew of this, and she knew that she always did that too. Haru nodded her head several times understanding what Loukno was saying. ''Okay Okay, Loukno. I think we know what we need to do... WE CLIMB THAT MOUNTAIN!''. Loukno bounced around. ''Yes! Yes! Yes!'' she said, already running past wooden planks, dodging cannons, anvils flying. Haru couldn't keep up with the excitement of Loukno. ''Wait up!'' she shouted, trying to run fast. |
Jackywhacky « Citoyen » 1387507440000
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Where's the wise old mouse? |
Erikadeedee « Citoyen » 1387507560000
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They have to take a very long journey to find him. You'll see. |
Splashclaweh « Citoyen » 1387507560000
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^Epic preview above Lovely story btw |
Erikadeedee « Citoyen » 1387507680000
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Thank you! I hope you all enjoy it. :) |
Haruhitastic « Censeur » 1387507680000
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ooomg very well done <3 so honoured to be in this :) |
Erikadeedee « Citoyen » 1387507680000
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<3 i'm smiling so hard right now haha |
Jackywhacky « Citoyen » 1387507680000
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Hahaha!Lol Haru |
Kittycattfm « Citoyen » 1387507680000
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niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice i like it so far |
Erikadeedee « Citoyen » 1387507800000
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wELL Y'ALL LIKE IT SO HERE IT GOES 2ND CHAPTER CH 2. THE CLIMBING OF THE MOUNTAIN When Haru catched up, she noticed a sign. ''MOUNTAIN UP AHEAD: 5 MILES''. Loukno looked back at Haru, Haru huffing and puffing, trying to breathe from all the running. Loukno however, was fast, too fast, and she almost never needed breathe after running as fast as she had ran. They walked along the long grassy area up to the mountain. Loukno could hear sounds of mice echoing in her head from survivor. What a crazy day of running around, dodging cannons. Loukno knew that she was pretty tired at this rate, and she knew Haru could've been dying at this point, so she decided it'd be best to rest for a while. The grass had been freshly watered by the storm the other night, but no damage had caused much to it. Haru and Loukno lay down, yawning. The sun started setting, and the moon soon came out. They were both out like a flick of light. Haru woke up the next morning, and straightened her hat. ''Loukno, wakey wakey!'' she said softly, her voice like silk. Loukno got up and picked the grass off of her. ''About 2 miles more,'' Loukno said, smiling and jogging. Haru jogged too, and they did the whole way. When they reached the mountain, it was high. Loukno could see the top. She imagined the mountain, a hole in it.. with the Wise Old Mouse sitting there. She could see if the myth was true. Haru only came because she knew Loukno couldn't have stayed out there on her own. Loukno was fast, but she wasn't good without people. Loukno jumped on the mountain, starting to climb. Haru followed close behind. Loukno was having no trouble at all. Haru hoped nothing would happen, and this climbing would be okay. Loukno slipped. Only one arm was on the mountain. They were high on the mountain, too high to fall. Haru, with one hand on the mountain, reached and tried to help Loukno. Loukno's fingers were close on the rocky edge, but they would slip. Haru tried to hurry, trying to get Loukno's paw up. 3 fingers of Loukno remained on the mountain. Haru knew what she had to do. She took both of her hands off the mountain, with her feet staying sealed to the ground. It was tough, and Haru almost fell. But she helped Loukno, and Loukno couldn't have been in more danger if Haru didn't do what she did. Loukno looked at Haru, her eyes sparkling with a sudden ''Thank you.'' Haru returned with a smile, and they kept climbing. |
Splashclaweh « Citoyen » 1387507800000
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LOL that was fast xD |
Erikadeedee « Citoyen » 1387507800000
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copy and pasted from tribe subform winkwink always share stuff like that with tribe members before it goes in the fanarts |
Bengalstar « Citoyen » 1387508220000
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omfg yes a thread *-* erika i love thisss |
Erikadeedee « Citoyen » 1387508220000
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tyyy omigosh i so cant wait until the ending |
Erikadeedee « Citoyen » 1387553760000
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hihi new chapter woot CH 3 WE'RE STILL TRYING Loukno was still shocked by the slipping, she was paralyzed it seemed. Haru was worried of what would happen. The sun was setting, and they were barely up the mountain. Haru and Loukno were so tired, they worried of if they'd fall asleep climbing. Haru looked up to see a hole in the mountain, but it wasn't the top. It was only a few inches away, the place where they'd sleep tonight. They looked at eachother, smiling. When they came to the hole, they lay down, so tired. ''The perfect view of the moon,'' Loukno said. Haru nodded and smiled. Soon after they fell asleep, Loukno heard a bow shooting from up ahead. She crawled to the edge of the hole, and looked up above. There stood a figure... a figure with a beard...she then realised what it was. She scurried into the hole, covering her mouth tight. ''Haru!'' she said, jumping around in the quietest way she knew possible. ''What?'' Haru said, her voice squeeking small. She rubbed her eyes. Loukno told her what she had saw. Haru, tired down to the bone, fell asleep. ''I don't have time for this,'' Loukno said, running to climb. Haru started to worry. She started having a nightmare. Loukno slipped... she fell.. she heard screams of Loukno...She woke up in a flash, and scurried around. She looked up, to see Loukno out of sight. She looked down. She could see a figure. Haru was shocked. She scurried down, trying to hurry as she knew it was Loukno, lying there, dead. She got a bit closer, realising it was a moose, sleeping. Haru hadn't climbed down far, so she got back up, and started climbing for Loukno. Haru was worried. Dead to a bone worried. She couldn't think. ''What if Loukno was kidnapped? What if she was gone!?'' Haru shouted, her voice terrified. ''Haru?!'' Loukno said, looking down from the top. ''Loukno!'' Haru hurried up the mountain. By this point, it was already time for the sun to come out. When she reached the top, she found Loukno, sitting there, by a figure. The Wise Old Mouse. |
Erikadeedee « Citoyen » 1387569240000
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another chapter cause i feel very snazy today wise old mouse is called wom now cause i'm too lazy to type it everytime CH 4 IS IT REAL? Haru froze for a second, hearing sounds of cracking, still hearing it from when Loukno slipped down. Wom looked up at her, not talking but yet brushing his slightly tangled beard. ''Haru, this is Wom,'' Loukno said, smiling at the figure. ''N-nice to meet you.'' she let out, her voice squeeking as she sat down. ''Dear, there's nothing to worry, i'm not a villian.'' he laughed, seeing Haru being shy and scared towards him. ''Well, I know that..'' Loukno punched her elbow at Haru and Haru reconized she needed to stop. When everyone seemed quiet.. and settled, the Wom started talking. ''You see,'' he said, ''I'm the one who created most of Transformice, with Tig. Of course, I had to hide from all the new players, because you see, I wasn't like them.'' Wom talked of how he couldn't fit in, so he ran off into the most shadowest place he could. And it was the ONLY place he could go. The Transformice map could've ran out by now, but Wom made the world bigger, and it looked amazingly impressive. He talked all night, over the burning fire with the wooden logs in place. The hole in the back of him is what Loukno was expecting it to be, big and round, and wider with much room for more then 3 people. Haru still didn't talk for more of the night. She only talked to Loukno when she needed to, and that was rarely. Wom started to finish. The night wind blew in her ears. She curled into a ball and slept, so did Loukno. Wom walked into his hole, but they never saw again that night... short and kinda bad chapter but erm yes enjoy |
Erikadeedee « Citoyen » 1387736520000
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CH 5. THE TRAINING GROUND When Haru woke up, it was still dark. ''Must be atleast 5:00am,'' she muttered to herself, falling on her back yet again. Haru felt liquid on her back, and got up to turn around. She noticed a scratch on her back, and hurridly rushed before it started oozing more blood. She ran into Wom's hole, and scurried around looking for him. Banging on the walls while her back was bleeding, she decided to lay down and wait. She knew it was important, but Loukno would wake up soon. She closed her eyes, and slowly everything disappeared around her. Haru heard a crack, then a thump. ''Haru?'' Loukno echoed, Haru waked up. She looked around to find herself in some kind of world, a weird one indeed. ''We need to find Wom!'' Loukno said, picking up Haru and dragging her. The cut hurt bad. She closed her eyes again. When she woke up yet again, she didn't feel anything, except her paws. ''Loukno? Wom?'' ''Yes Haru,'' Wom said, scratching his beard a bit. She looked around, only to find herself in the hole, nothing different from the first time. Loukno had her tail down, shivering a bit. Haru knew it was because she was worrying. Wom made some water for her, and he settled down in the corner. When everyone was okay and normal again, he then said, ''Follow me.'' They followed, and what they saw... was a big training area, and Haru smiled at Loukno. triple posting dANG sENTS PLS DONT GET MAD AT ME |
Kattiej « Citoyen » 1387736940000
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Man, I hate when someone spends so much time on something and gets no posts because this is a pretty good darn story |
Erikadeedee « Citoyen » 1387745760000
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thanks i'm kind of sad no one has posted but it's fine |
Erikadeedee « Citoyen » 1387769700000
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CH 7 MORE TRAINING, TRAINING, TRAINING, TRAINING.... The next morning, Haru awoke in a hurridly fashion. She bonked her head, and then without thinking jumped off the mountain. She landed safely, and smiled at what she had done. She began to run to the Training Grounds. ''Where is Haru...'' Loukno mummered as she got up. ''Training Grounds,'' Wom said, grinning, and disappearing at the slightest second, flickering every minute or so. Loukno jumped down the mountain and then started running there. She should of known Haru would go practice, since obviously she wasn't at all good yesterday. While Haru practiced her running, sharp-shooting, and more, she heard the crackling of the tree. She hid behind a bush, because she didn't want to go back to the mountain, but yet train all day so she could go home. Sure, she liked Wom, and everything, but she just wanted to be back in her home in the actual Transformice. Haru looked over, hearing Wom and Loukno. She saw them both, looking down at the bow and arrows that were scattered across the floor when Haru ran into the bush. Wom left, and Haru could hear one word, ''Train.''. She assumed Loukno was needing to train too. She heard an arrow shoot. ''Loukno?'' Haru said, getting up from the bush. ''Yes, hi.'' Loukno said, still focusing on her bow and arrows. Haru walked up, and she started to train along with Loukno. By this time, the day was at 4:21pm. Loukno headed back to the mountain, dropping the arrows and bow. Haru heard her sigh, and underneath the breathe was, ''I want to go home, i'm so tired...''. Haru practiced more, more, and more. The sun started setting, and Haru started to get a bit dizzy with running and such. Haru threw herself down, and started to sleep, even though it was only sunset. |