[Fan-Fiction]~Transformice~ |
Messeessem « Citoyen » 1387769580000
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[url=]-Meet The Characters[/url] [url=]Tig A.K.A. Tigrounette[/url] Male Description:He is the current president of Transformice and his age is still unknown to the world! Likes:Annoying His Fellow Staffs Dislikes:Boxes or Too Many Something [url=]Melibuelle A.K.A. Meli[/url] Description:A famouse artist and Tig's companion. Likes:Annoying Tig,Drawing and Coffee Dislikes:Tig and Work [url=]Sydoline[/url] Description:A writer and news reporter,another of Tig's companion! Likes:Candy and Sweets Dislikes:Hackers and Loukno [url=]Loukno[/url] Description:Tig's cousin,she is an assistant of Tig and a companion too! Likes:Candy and Stealing Candy From Sydoline Dislikes:Sydoline,Tig,Work,and Unfluffy Pillows [url=]-The Story[/url] Chapter 1:Call A Meeting On a nice New Year's Eve,it was peaceful in Transformice. "Loukno,come here!!!"said Tig.Maybe all except for that,but besides that every thing was peaceful as ever. "Yes?"asked a very busy Loukno that's eating a lollipop. "Look at this chart!"screamed Tig. "Everything seems fine except for that cheese stain."Loukno said.Tig slapped his face and pointed at the chart again. "Oh...the cheese and popularity rate is dropping,so?"asked Loukno. "So,we got to raise it or it won't be popular anymore!!!"said Tig. "Call Meli and Sydoline over,now!"Tig demanded. "Geez,fine!"said Loukno.She munched and crunched on her lollipop and gulped it.Then,she stomped out and screamed for Meli and Sydoline. "Now,I wonder how Loukno got that candy..."thought Tig. [url=]~An Hour Later~[/url] "Uh!Why are you so late?"asked Tig. "We had pizza."said Meli. "Whatever!"Tig said.He pointed the chart like how he did to Loukno. "What's wrong with this?"he asked. "My,it seems that our popularity is dropping mouse by mouse and we need to get going and upgrade and update our game in order to gain popularity!"Sydoline said. "Yes,excatly what Sydo said!"Tig said. "Hold a meeting!"shouted Meli. "Ok!"said Sydoline and away she wrote about the meeting in the news. [url=]~The Next Day~[/url] A Shaman was cannoning the other mice of the ridge.One mouse tried his best to reach,just reach for the edge.He made it and jumped on the Shaman. "If you want saves,stop killing us!"said the mouse. "Heh,I don't care about saves!"said the Shaman.All the mice rage and quitted the game. "Ban this mouse!"said Tig. "Huh?"asked the Shaman. "What for?"he asked again. "Well,you been making the mice mad and leaving our game making game unpopular.We had receive many bans from other mice so,I guess we have to ban you."Sydoline declared.They banned him then talked about how to get other players to come back again. "Let's make adds!"sugguested Sydoline. "I'll use my art to create and draw on them!"said Meli.Surely,enough,they made great ads and millions of mice came back.It was the end of a great Tuesday,also a great ending of an amazing January!Everything felt just right.After the Shamans heard about the ban,they didn't stop the mice from getting their cheese and entering the hole.Everything was might peaceful,every was mighty peaceful. "Loukno!Did you take my last lollipop!?"screamed Sydoline.All except for that. |
Cuitdashie « Citoyen » 1387769700000
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o-o tig is every were.. any way, i like the story^^ it sould interesting |
Messeessem « Citoyen » 1387770600000
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Cuitdashie a dit : Thank you very much!This is hard work,but I'm only willing to work on this story!I try my best to make this very TFM-related. |
Susanlwu « Citoyen » 1387773000000
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Mess. Can you please stick to one or two fanfics. And liSTEN TO PEOPLE WHO TRY TO TELL YOU ABOUT YOUR GRAMMAR. Please. You're not listening to anyone's advice, and that is really getting on my nerves. |
Micefamilies « Citoyen » 1387773180000
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Susanlwu a dit : 100% this... Please stop making fanfics that you don't even use within the next day |
Erikadeedee « Citoyen » 1387780080000
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Susanlwu a dit : Micefamilies a dit : Yes, please.... |
Messeessem « Citoyen » 1534560780000
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SoOo, nobody uses this anymore, but it’s been six years and I’m looking back at all the cringe I’ve written in the past??? And like, It’s great. I promise that my grammar has definitely gotten a lot better, when I’m not texting that is ( otherwise I’d fail AP English ). I also listen to advice now and don’t write fanfiction every other day, or at all anymore — thank GOD. |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1534639860000
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Are we able to add our own mice/OC's or no? I'll want to join is why. I like having my characters being apart of FanFiction action. (I will wait to see the next chapter, though I do agree with the AP English bit. Does this mean your first language is a different one? French, by the looks of the OP) Oof, what about the Shamans in the Survivor rooms... Dernière modification le 1534639980000 |
Messeessem « Citoyen » 1536035100000
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It's been about six years, this definitely isn't opened anymore LMAO. I just came back to reflect on my old posts just for some good laughs since it's been a while ad thought it'd be nice to leave a "six years later" message behind. My first language is English, but I'm taking AP English courses to get college credits. I'm surprised people can still see this, to be honest. I haven't been on the Atelier801 forums in forever. |