Hey. Im making a fancfic again.

Description and story:
There was a peaceful village in the center of Transformice. The most centered, ruby fountain which they call "The Fountain of Life" has been making the whole place peaceful. Then one day, that fountain sank into the ground. None of the mice know where it is. Suddenly, there was a disasters combination, including floods,tsunami,earthquakes,volcanic eruptions etc etc. Some of the mice died and some were still trying to survive. A 22 year old girl named Lilianna was one of the survivors. She wanted the fountain back. That's the time when she found an underground map that shows the middle of the whole Transformice. Can a teenage girl like her try to save the whole Transformice?

Find out in the END of the book...
-Fin

Want to join? Fill up these fourms.
Name:
Age:
Personality:
Gender:
Looks/Reference:
Role (shaman or survivor):

And you're all entered up!

:)

Sorry I cant post Lilianna's fourm right now :(
Btw there are:
Survivors: 12 slots
Shaman helpers: 6 slots

dundundundun!
P.S.

Here are the characters!:

Name: Selle (Sell)
Age: 26
Personality: A mouse with few words. Selle prefers to communicate with actions instead of verbal speech.
She's very frosty to others, but will open up if people can look past her way of communication. The words she says are usually cold and cutting. Selle is realistic and will be as harsh as needed if the situation calls for it. If talking to a mouse she considers as a friend she will have more positive things to say.
Gender: Female.
Looks/Reference: A striped platinum mouse with blue eyes and long white hair.
She wears blue beads and a shaman feather in her hair.
Role (shaman or survivor): What is this for? Shaman I guess.

Name: Louise
Age: 23
Personality: Happy open person, weird dry humor, oftenly is verry rude without even knowing. Acts verry casual about things, and adapts verry fast to extreme stiuations. She might be happy and open, she rarely sees people as 'friends'
Gender: Female
Looks/Reference: Spotted mouse, with green eyes and black hair
Role (shaman or survivor): Survivor

Name: Nicole
Age: 16
Personality: Hyper,kind, nice, funny,Energetic,Lovable evil sometimes and kinda mean and rude loves to be sarcastic and is a computer wizz.
Gender: Female
Looks: Orange mouse with white and pink sparkles and brown eyes with pink bright hair.
Role
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Shaman

Name: Taeterina
Age: 14
Personality: Serious,bold,and kind
Gender: Female
Looks/Reference: http://i.imgur.com/g1DNAIY.png
Role (shaman or survivor): Survivor

Looks like a nice story!

Name: Miyako
Age: 14
Personality: a bit of a shy type at first, doesn't trust people so fast, she opens up a bit more and smiles more often when she's around her friends, not really a fan of the sun (she can handle it), likes the night, not really a social type, but she does have some good friends (you can choose which ones), sometimes uses japanese words like "Etto..."(when thinking) or "Itai!"(Translation: "Ouch!"), pretty much bubbly (which she only shows to her friends) and clumsy but smart when needed, may look weak but stronger when it's night, really curious and loves traveling and adventures, really HATES bullies and loves the nature (she lives in a forest and has no family).
Gender: Female
Looks/Reference: There are 2 strays of thick hair sticking out of her head. Her eye color is light purple, though you can't see them often because of her bangs and they somehow looks like the galaxy. She wears a too large shirt that looks like the galaxy. Her fur is purple with a thick white stripe around one of her legs.
Spoiler
Role (shaman or survivor): Survivor

((wow such long description, sorry))

Name : Angel
Age : 17
Gender: Female.
Personality : Well, when the foutain was still there, she trolled. ALOT. Now, she trolls probally by saying "THE FOUTAIN IS BACK YEY!" And she always yells and... she runs around alot.
Looks :
[img]sta.sh/01evsb4aorfu[/img]


Role : Survivor

I'm interested in this fanfiction, please write a chapter soon!
You may want to work on your grammar though.

I might fill a form for a character if you don't mind. Later though.

e; Name: Selle (Sell)
Age: 26
Personality: A mouse with few words. Selle prefers to communicate with actions instead of verbal speech.
She's very frosty to others, but will open up if people can look past her way of communication. The words she says are usually cold and cutting. Selle is realistic and will be as harsh as needed if the situation calls for it. If talking to a mouse she considers as a friend she will have more positive things to say.
Gender: Female.
Looks/Reference: A striped platinum mouse with blue eyes and long white hair.
She wears blue beads and a shaman feather in her hair.
Role (shaman or survivor): What is this for? Shaman I guess.

Added :P
Btw in the time i made this thread, my head was crazy bummed so my grammar was bummed, too.
XD i wish i could do a chapter soon
good luck for myself XD

Pfft...no one else wanna join :P
Chapter 1: Unexpected!

Lilianna was sitting beside a tall tree. She was sad though her parents died. After a while, one of the shamans showed up.
"Um...whats..wrong..?" the shaman asked silently.
"Sigh, I really wished my parents are still here." Lilianna said, hopelessly.
"You know, most mice died...even good relatives too. You're not the only one.." the shaman said sadly.
"I guess so..." Lilianna said with tears falling from her eyes.

Lilianna and Selle both walked to the shop to get some popsicles that cost 60 cheese each.
Suddenly there was a tsunami.
All the mice ran away including Selle and Lilianna, which drowned for sometime like the other 85 mice.
After the big tsunami they were all NOT okay.
Lilianna woke up with starfishes on her eyes and Selle with some seaweed hair.
Next came a volcanic eruption.
"Seriously!?" Lilianna said in confusion.While Selle facepalmed herself.
With no single breathe of mice everything went chaos.
Lilianna tried drawing a question mark on the top of her head and Selle fainted.
Was the whole Tfm glitching?

Find out in the next chapter
:P

Sorry for making this a little short :( I swear in the Golden cheese i will do a long chapter :D

Name: Louise
Age: 23
Personality: Happy open person, weird dry humor, oftenly is verry rude without even knowing. Acts verry casual about things, and adapts verry fast to extreme stiuations. She might be happy and open, she rarely sees people as 'friends'
Gender: Female
Looks/Reference: Spotted mouse, with green eyes and black hair
Role (shaman or survivor): Survivor

Name: Nicole
Age: 16
Personality: Hyper,kind, nice, funny,Energetic,Lovable evil sometimes and kinda mean and rude loves to be sarcastic and Random.
Gender: Female
Looks: Orange mouse with white and pink sparkles and brown eyes with pink bright hair.
Role

All added :D
Btw there are 11 survivor slots and 4 shaman slots left.
2 more characters before i start next chapter!
or yea its enough characters XD

Chapter 2: Been there, done that.

Selle thought that storm was just a glitch. But one more of the shamans stepped up, and Lilianna was like "Not again."
In the next round, the mice were sitting, sleeping, eating cheese, peeking out of holes, etc etc.
Nicole, one of the shamans, was trying to hide her frustration beyond the annoying mice.
A mouse named Louise sat on an anvil...looking at the shaman in confusion
"WHAT THE FREAKING HECK ARE YOU ALL DOING??!!" The shaman rang out to the mice.
Lilianna fell down from the fake ice cream she was dancing on.
Of course, the mods and sentinels in the room the shaman is in, shot her dirty looks.
Louise saw what happened but she thinked nothing happened.
Most mice in that room...including a mouse named taeterina...just jumped off a plank and started booing to the shaman.
Lilianna was revived by the other shaman, and she stored some cheese for goodness sake.

The next round was a very tall grass-ground map.
Lilianna bought a picaxe from the shop and she started digging.
The other mice was scratching their heads. They were like "What in cheesy land is that mouse doing?"
Lilianna found a broken piece of the fountain and she gasped.
Selle and two more survivors jumped to where Lilianna is.
The two survivors were biting their nails when they saw the broken piece of the fountain.
Did the fountain broke to several pieces everywhere in Tfm???

Name: Taeterina
Age: 14
Personality: Serious,bold,and kind
Gender: Female
Looks/Reference:
Role (shaman or survivor): Survivor

Added :P

Goddangit i cant wait to make another chapter :0

Chapter 3: Sticks and stones, may break your bones.

The 4 mice finally escaped. They didnt even know what else to do. Suddenly there was a group of intruders. They cornered all the alive mice and started giving them wounds and injuries, also by leading them to death. Lilianna was on scars and blood. "Attack!!!" Lilianna shouted as she take out her knife, killing the intruders. She sasheyed her bangs off after killing them all. But Lilianna fainted, still as death while her blood spill all over the plank she was standing on. Selle ran to her and shaked her off (NOT TAYLOR SWIFTS SONG) like crazy. Selle and 7 more mice companions brought her to the hospital in Selle's utility. "Her bones..a-are..affected!!!" the doctor shouted.
Of course, everyone in the hospital shot him dirty looks. The nurse bandaged Lilianna's wounds. The doctor said her bones were affected permenantly, so he will use the metal parts. He operated Lilianna into her metal parts. After the operation, Lilianna woke up. "Life gave you another chance, so be wise to use it." The doctor said while Lilianna gasped. She was out of the hospital. After some days she got used to it.

Faq im too lazy :(
And for Satash's grammar critiques, my grammar was also lazy XD

I wish i could get a banner soon :)

Can't wait for Chapter 4.

OK CHAPTER 4 IT IZZZ (づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ
Chapter4: More the trouble, double and double
All of the mice began to eat spoiled, harsh, and expired cheese from an infection of all the water grounds, cheese and candies.
Because of that, all the mice started having symptoms like coughing, vommiting, dizziness, LBM (lol) which coused to be food poisoning.
When Lilianna felt the damage of the expired cheese she ate, she didnt even faint because she was too strong for the food poison.
Lilianna took a walk, and she gasped after seeing dead mice everywhere she go.
So, she broke the news to some mods
"There's food poisoning! Help us!" Lilianna text a mod
"Sorry. We cant fix this.." the mod replied back.
Lilianna, her friends, and the mods were the only ones left in TFM, alone.
They laid down every dead mice in cofins and closed them.

Then one night, while Lilianna and her friends were staying in one house in their tribe, everything started collapsing.
Everyone woke up and panicked.
"WHAT SHALL WE DO??! THERE IS A COMING LANDSLIDE!!!!!!!!!" Nicole started shouting like she was about to be stabbed by a murderer. She fell asleep.
"IDK!" everyone answered back.
"You're screaming sarcasticly again, but we have to get a freaking plan to avoid THE LANDSLIDE!!! We cant just panic like drama queens stuck in a nutshell!!!" Taeterina repiled, with a high, loud voice.
"Your right" Selle, Lilianna, and Louise replied.
"Ok, where shall we-" Lilianna said but something distracted her from finishing the sentence.
"THE HOUSE IS CRASHINGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!" Everyone screamed as they ran for their lives, leaving Nicole behind.
Lilianna tried pulling her out of the house.

The next week, they build a strong, stiff hut using the left our materials from the broken house.
When Lilianna called them to eat, they were surprised.
"Sorry guys. But, this is all this farm had." Lilianna said, while staring at her rice and veggies breakfast.
"I think tfm wont survive for long..." Louise said.
" Agreed." Taeterina said, shooting dirty looks while eating her food.
"But we have to save this community or else we will be all extinct for STINK CHEESES SAKE! How the hell will we survive if we just act like restless mice that keeps ordering the mods to do whatever we want! We shall do this toghether..as friends." Lilianna said to the sad mice.
Everyone keeps whispering and nodding after of what she said.
They sailed away to another server to gather all of the mice there.
Can they gather all the mice to fix tfm before its too late?

Wow, this is a long one...
(づ｡◕‿‿◕｡)づ

Looks like a nice story!

Name: Miyako
Age: 14
Personality: a bit of a shy type at first, doesn't trust people so fast, she opens up a bit more and smiles more often when she's around her friends, not really a fan of the sun (she can handle it), likes the night, not really a social type, but she does have some good friends (you can choose which ones), sometimes uses japanese words like "Etto..."(when thinking) or "Itai!"(Translation: "Ouch!"), pretty much bubbly (which she only shows to her friends) and clumsy but smart when needed, may look weak but stronger when it's night, really curious and loves traveling and adventures, really HATES bullies and loves the nature (she lives in a forest and has no family).
Gender: Female
Looks/Reference: There are 2 strays of thick hair sticking out of her head. Her eye color is light purple, though you can't see them often because of her bangs and they somehow looks like the galaxy. She wears a too large shirt that looks like the galaxy. Her fur is purple with a thick white stripe around one of her legs.

Role (shaman or survivor): Survivor

((wow such long description, sorry))

Okay Its added! ^^

Look up in the characters after i wrote the 5th chapter ^^

Name : Angel
Age : 17
Gender: Female.
Personality : Well, when the foutain was still there, she trolled. ALOT. Now, she trolls probally by saying "THE FOUTAIN IS BACK YEY!" And she always yells and... she runs around alot.
Looks :

[img]sta.sh/01evsb4aorfu[/img]

Role : Survivor
Edit: BETTER PIC
Edit2: Removed
Edit3: New outfit
Made by: Angelfromaj

added again o.o
wow, am i dreaming XD
so much characters!

I guess i SHOULD start the sixth...

Chapter 6= Blood. Blood everywhere.

Lilianna and her friends started the journey in one of the sea maps.
While they were travelling, Lilianna and the others didnt noticed that Nicole just brought 9k bottles of sauce.
She left the sauce bottles open, as she would hold a sauce party in the server they were going to.
Then, while Nicole was sleeping peacefully, 7 of the sauce bottles dropped into the sea.
THE SAUCE WAS SWIMMING IN THE SEA THEN IT TURNED RED!
"BLOOD! BLOOD!' Louise screamed when she saw red stuff on the sea
"LETS GET OUT OF HERE!!!" every one screamed except for Selle and Nicole.
"Wait a minute guys, I think I saw a fountain piece on this "blood sea" your screaming on.." Lilianna said while she found a shattered ruby floating on the sea.

"NO! Dont go!" Taeterina exclaimed.
"Nah, i'll go for it." Lilianna said while tying a loose rope on her plump mouse waist.
She dove into the red sea and got confused.
"Why is it sticky here o.o" she wondered.
Lilianna tried getting the ruby, but she drowned like she was in quick sand.
When she was about to fall in her doom, she accidentally tasted the red water and swam to the boat with the ruby.
"Hey guys! This isnt blood! It's sauce XD!" She said, going in the boat while laughing.
After that minute, Nicole woke up.
"Hey! Where's my sauce! =(" Nicole screamed
"Looks like it spilled into the sea." Louise said.
"DARN IT! GIVE ME BACK MY SAUCEEEE!!!!" Nicole screamed angrily, forcing her friends to give back the bottles of sauce.
"Sorry, but it sank to the sea!" Taeterina said while snickering a little.
"UGHHH!!!" Nicole screamed

"Hey guys! Speaking of sauce, I found one piece of the ruby fountain! 9 more to go!" LIlianna exclaimed happily.
"Woohoo!" everyone cheered.
Their journey continues on another server yet, part of the ruined game.
Will they find all the pieces and save Transformice

Find out in the next chapter!

(Oh btw this is me, Queenlordess! Sorry for logging my other acc on rather than my own)

can i just ask very quickly why your character dialogue includes emotes
let's go into a normal flow of conversation... isn't it a bit... odd that a character would randomly verbalise "x d" while speaking

I did that to make it a little Tfm related and it's like they are speaking in the chatroom... I dont want this fanfic to get locked because it is not Tfm related =( it is in the fanfic rules. Sorry if i offended you decision. =(

queenlordess a dit :

I did that to make it a little Tfm related and it's like they are speaking in the chatroom... I dont want this fanfic to get locked because it is not Tfm related =( it is in the fanfic rules. Sorry if i offended you decision. =(

Actually, you don't have to make it exactly like its a chatroom. I know you have most likely already learned this, but i'm just making sure.

Hmm...Alright.