[Fanfiction] Fantasy.. or not? |
Macaronnie « Censeur » 1441122480000
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A new attempt of making a fanfiction.. let's go! :D (Hah sorry for the name I couldn't come up with anything else, you can suggest a better name if you want to c: ) Click the tabs for more info! Make your own character: Name: Mouse: Gender: Backstory: Personality: Age: Specie: More: I will close the character requesting when there are enough characters for now. Characters for now: Name: Lulu Mouse: Gender: Girl Backstory: Lulu was born with 1 green and 1 gray (blind) eye. She has a stone axe weapon which her dad made for her when she was 6. Lulu is half-demon, but she doesn't want anyone to know about it, so she tries to act normal. Personality: A little shy, can be sassy when irritated, likes risking her life and adventures. Age: 17 Specie: Half-demon More: Name: Adelheid Mouse: Gender: female Backstory: She was born and raised in a family of Half-Dragons. At first she was named "Day" because of her fur color, eyes, hair and her personality. But then her family got attacked by hunters when she was 10, and she defended them with courage. The did defeat the hunters and then got the name "Adelheid". the name Adelheid means in German sweet or noble, but in this case it's both. Personality: Noble, cheerful, a little short-tempered, and outgoing. Age: 16 Specie: Half-dragon More: Adelheid is very self-conscious about people knowing she is half-dragon(since the attack from the hunters), but she doesn't show it. She breathes fire and can breathe ice, depends on her mood. Gender: Male Bio: Was bitten by a vampire at a young age, but wasn't completely turned. Nobody really knows why. He still, however, craves blood just as much - if not, more - than your average vampire. Personality: Extremely flirty, otherwise quiet. He's good at analyzing situations and doesn't panic in an emergency. Age: 19 Species: Half-Vampire/Half-Mouse Other: If he stands in one place for long enough, he becomes invisible. Nobody knows of this ability but him. He also has white feathered wings that fade to a light blue at the end. These wings are usually curled near his back, but he loves flying. ] Name: Bird (Original name was Oiseau. However she translated this later to it's English word, Bird.) Mouse: Gender: Female Backstory: This is really long Bird was born into the loving paws of a young, ambitioius shaman and his bride, a lovely white french mouse named Lis Fleur. Sadly, this relationship was strictly forbidden, Therefore, Bird was born in a cave, where she grew. She was a natural artist, and used to draw pictures on the walls of her family and everything she's come to know. Every day, his dad would tell her about his duties of a shaman, how vital it was to keep the grounds of Transformice covered, how the outside air ruffled his pelt as he flew. However, as Bird's mother contracted a disease from the musty air she constantly inhaled, her father kept working. This led to many fights and concerns of Lis's and Bird's health. Eventually, they split apart, and the father left the cave. The father had only flown out of earshot of the two when he was caught. Bird still remembers the agonizing screams. From then on, they had to shrink down lower, eat less, and worry about everything, This was how Bird obtained anxiety.Over time, the father was driven to insanity as Bird's weak mother grew weaker and weaker. It was up to Bird to get whatever food she could. Later that night, a storm was brewing, Bird went out to go obtain food, a dull task indeed. As she climbed up the rocks, she heard quick screams and muffled cries. Bird dropped what she was holding and scrambled up the rocks faster, her half-starved body screaming for a break.As she reached the top, she screamed in shock. Her father was standing over her mom's body. Smiling as her eyes started to grow dull. Suddenly her body went limp, and her father turned towards her. He could see his face now in the pale moonlight, He had bloodshot pupils with slits for eyes. He had scars that had shown his pain vented onto his fur. A shiver went through her as her father suddenly stalked towards her. She had to go, now. She lanuched herself in the air, hoping instinct to take over as she spread her wings. She wimpered as she felt a stinging jolt of pain. She had almost never stretched her wings before, and she fell. Her father was taking after her, smiling as the hunt went on. As he drew nearer, his wings slicing through the air. They would be on the ground soon, and she could see the details. As she landed, she quickly swerved to avoid a sharp log jutting out of the earth. Without a single thought, she ran. She could hear her father diveboming close to the ground, he would be upon her soon. Suddenly she heard an agonizing cry. Her father, who had been going head first to the ground, had not avoided the sharp log and instead let it slide through his skin, She watched, with fear and sadness in her eyes as her dad died. Instinctivly, she ran to help, but stopped herself when she realized she was no longer friends with him. Her eyes cold with remorse, she turned her head and ran. She didn't look back. Personality: Bird is a warm-hearted and understanding extrovert. She responds to the needs and interests of those around her. Desperate to help, she is the first to volunteer for those in less fortunate situations. However, due to her severe anxiety issues, Bird is extremely cautious and can get annoying babbling about her fears. Age: 14 Species: (Other supernatural) she is an Avian mouse.However, her wings we're born natrually from her father's shaman wings. (SHE CANNOT FLY) More: Has trust issues and doesn't fukky open up her extroverted side until completely comfortable. Tends to act overly wild and likes to praink others. However, in pressured situations, tends to bring out her smarter side and thinks swiftly It's night, the forest is quiet, all you could hear are owls, leaves and sticks crunching, and the wind blowing by your ear. A mouse named Lulu walked in the forest. On the background you could hear a howl. It's full moon, thats the time where you could hear howling. She walks across a tree, with a text writed with a stick on it. It's difficult to read. She walks further. Just an old forest, nothing special. She suddenly hears rustling, and got scared a bit. Then she sees it was just an owl. ''Phew''. She walks towards home. Her home is a treehouse, in the biggest tree of the forest. Again, there was a howl. To be continued.. If you're submitting a character, these are the species you can choose from: Normal mice. (open) Vampires. (open) Demons. (open) Werewolves. (open) Half-Dragons. (open) Hunters (open) Other supernatural (mention it) (open) Chapter 1: Lulu was in her treehouse, being bored watching her small TV. Suddenly, she heard foot steps. She looks through the window and sees an orange-like mouse. The mouse looked like she was shaking. Lulu climbs down the ladder and walks to the mouse. ''Umm, hey..'' said Lulu. The mouse doesn't pay attention to her. ''Hey..'' she repeated. ''Oh, hi.'' the mouse answered. ''What are you doing here?'' Lulu asked. ''Uhh.. I don't really know. I'm really just searching for some useful stuff in this forest.'' ''Is that so?'' ''Yes.'' the mouse answered. ''What's your name?'' Lulu asked. ''Adelheid, yours?'' ''Lulu.'' ''Oh, nice to meet you.'' ''Yeah, you too.'' Lulu said. ''It seems you're shaking. Are you cold?'' ''Yes..'' Adelheid answered. ''Do you want to come to my treehouse?'' Lulu asked. ''Umm.. ok'' Dernière modification le 1441287420000 |
Shymouselite « Citoyen » 1441143300000
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ooh!! ooh!! i hope u dun mind if i drop off my lil cutie pie here :3c Name: Adelheid Mouse: Gender: female Backstory: She was born and raised in a family of Half-Dragons. At first she was named "Day" because of her fur color, eyes, hair and her personality. But then her family got attacked by hunters when she was 10, and she defended them with courage. The did defeat the hunters and then got the name "Adelheid". the name Adelheid means in German sweet or noble, but in this case it's both. Personality: Noble, cheerful, a little short-tempered, and outgoing. Age: 16 Specie: Half-dragon More: Adelheid is very self-conscious about people knowing she is half-dragon(since the attack from the hunters), but she doesn't show it. She breathes fire and can breathe ice, depends on her mood. i had this character for a month and i was trying to find a fanfic like this, im very happy that i found this >w< |
Macaronnie « Censeur » 1441196700000
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shymouselite a dit : Character accepted! I'm glad you're interested :) I'm starting on chapter 1 right now! |
Macaronnie « Censeur » 1441197840000
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Chapter 1: Lulu was in her treehouse, being bored watching her small TV. Suddenly, she heard foot steps. She looks through the window and sees an orange-like mouse. The mouse looked like she was shaking. Lulu climbs down the ladder and walks to the mouse. ''Umm, hey..'' said Lulu. The mouse doesn't pay attention to her. ''Hey..'' she repeated. ''Oh, hi.'' the mouse answered. ''What are you doing here?'' Lulu asked. ''Uhh.. I don't really know. I'm really just searching for some useful stuff in this forest.'' ''Is that so?'' ''Yes.'' the mouse answered. ''What's your name?'' Lulu asked. ''Adelheid, yours?'' ''Lulu.'' ''Oh, nice to meet you.'' ''Yeah, you too.'' Lulu said. ''It seems you're shaking. Are you cold?'' ''Yes..'' Adelheid answered. ''Do you want to come to my treehouse?'' Lulu asked. ''Umm.. ok'' To be continued |
Haruhitastic « Censeur » 1441207860000
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Interesting start, looking forward to more. pls line break when a different character speaks it's a mess and it took a few times to read before i got it. |
Basgetti « Consul » 1441223820000
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I saw 'vampires' hello Gender: Male Bio: Was bitten by a vampire at a young age, but wasn't completely turned. Nobody really knows why. He still, however, craves blood just as much - if not, more - than your average vampire. Personality: Extremely flirty, otherwise quiet. He's good at analyzing situations and doesn't panic in an emergency. Age: 19 Species: Half-Vampire/Half-Mouse Other: If he stands in one place for long enough, he becomes invisible. Nobody knows of this ability but him. He also has white feathered wings that fade to a light blue at the end. These wings are usually curled near his back, but he loves flying. |
Birdluv « Citoyen » 1441229640000
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I use this because it shows her wings :') Name: Bird (Original name was Oiseau. However she translated this later to it's English word, Bird.) Mouse: Gender: Female Backstory: This is really long Bird was born into the loving paws of a young, ambitioius shaman and his bride, a lovely white french mouse named Lis Fleur. Sadly, this relationship was strictly forbidden, Therefore, Bird was born in a cave, where she grew. She was a natural artist, and used to draw pictures on the walls of her family and everything she's come to know. Every day, his dad would tell her about his duties of a shaman, how vital it was to keep the grounds of Transformice covered, how the outside air ruffled his pelt as he flew. However, as Bird's mother contracted a disease from the musty air she constantly inhaled, her father kept working. This led to many fights and concerns of Lis's and Bird's health. Eventually, they split apart, and the father left the cave. The father had only flown out of earshot of the two when he was caught. Bird still remembers the agonizing screams. From then on, they had to shrink down lower, eat less, and worry about everything, This was how Bird obtained anxiety.Over time, the father was driven to insanity as Bird's weak mother grew weaker and weaker. It was up to Bird to get whatever food she could. Later that night, a storm was brewing, Bird went out to go obtain food, a dull task indeed. As she climbed up the rocks, she heard quick screams and muffled cries. Bird dropped what she was holding and scrambled up the rocks faster, her half-starved body screaming for a break.As she reached the top, she screamed in shock. Her father was standing over her mom's body. Smiling as her eyes started to grow dull. Suddenly her body went limp, and her father turned towards her. He could see his face now in the pale moonlight, He had bloodshot pupils with slits for eyes. He had scars that had shown his pain vented onto his fur. A shiver went through her as her father suddenly stalked towards her. She had to go, now. She lanuched herself in the air, hoping instinct to take over as she spread her wings. She wimpered as she felt a stinging jolt of pain. She had almost never stretched her wings before, and she fell. Her father was taking after her, smiling as the hunt went on. As he drew nearer, his wings slicing through the air. They would be on the ground soon, and she could see the details. As she landed, she quickly swerved to avoid a sharp log jutting out of the earth. Without a single thought, she ran. She could hear her father diveboming close to the ground, he would be upon her soon. Suddenly she heard an agonizing cry. Her father, who had been going head first to the ground, had not avoided the sharp log and instead let it slide through his skin, She watched, with fear and sadness in her eyes as her dad died. Instinctivly, she ran to help, but stopped herself when she realized she was no longer friends with him. Her eyes cold with remorse, she turned her head and ran. She didn't look back. Personality: Bird is a warm-hearted and understanding extrovert. She responds to the needs and interests of those around her. Desperate to help, she is the first to volunteer for those in less fortunate situations. However, due to her severe anxiety issues, Bird is extremely cautious and can get annoying babbling about her fears. Age: 14 Species: (Other supernatural) she is an Avian mouse.However, her wings we're born natrually from her father's shaman wings. (SHE CANNOT FLY) More: Has trust issues and doesn't fukky open up her extroverted side until completely comfortable. Tends to act overly wild and likes to praink others. However, in pressured situations, tends to bring out her smarter side and thinks swiftly. |
Macaronnie « Censeur » 1441286940000
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All characters accepted! Haruhitastic a dit : Thanks! :) And I understand, for me it's difficult to understand who's speaking too with fanfics, but I thought it would be weird if I'd say: (name) said. at every lane :P Do you mean that it should be like this?: ''Hello!'' ''Umm.. hey :)'' ''How are you?'' or something else? If you meant something else you can tell me XD Sorry, im new with fanfics :P |
Macaronnie « Censeur » 1441287240000
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(Oops I accidently double posted -.-) Basgetti a dit : Oh, and whats his name? (If it needs to be still a secret, thats okay) Dernière modification le 1441287300000 |
Basgetti « Consul » 1441297560000
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Mandymuis a dit : No secret, I just forgot. ...Oops. His name is Julian Venomi |
Queenlordess « Citoyen » 1442062080000
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Name: Ysabella Aguilera Mouse: Gender: Female Backstory: Ella was one of the most popular girls at school. She was pretty, smart, adored by all boys but sometimes, or should I say ALWAYS mean. Her secret though, is her being a Demon. She always carries her pinkish-red backpack to cover her wings. She gets self-conscious about people trying to make her remove her backpack or whatever can be covering her wings. She tends to be cocky at times and betrays her friends to get free stuff like cheese and whatnot. Only her filthy rich parents know about her half demon life which she got from her father. He was one of the richest demons. Her mother was a normal mouse, although very sarcastic and snobby. Personality: Sarcastic, mean, sensitive, easily angered and judgemental. Age: 17 Specie: Demon More: Ella, being sarcastic tends to roll her eyes and act like a boss. She acts innocent infront of the teacher, which is out of her character. Its because of that time when she killed a student in private and almost got expelled. She never told that to anyone, to keep up her reputation as popular. PS: Lawl. :P Dernière modification le 1442577360000 |
Wangan « Censeur » 1513212960000
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