[Fanfiction] ❁ Your True Nature ❁

❁ Your True Nature ❁

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"Everyone wears masks that hides their true nature."

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Hello everyone.
I'm Starrelite, and you obviously don't know me.
I am a writer, and I only take writing as a hobby.
This is my first story in the Atelier801 Forums, and I'm excited to write this fanfic.

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In case you want to have a conversation in private, drop me a PM or email me at:

starreliteofficial@gmail.com

❁ Prologue ❁

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Star was looking out of her house window, trying to find the school bus. She was turning her head left and right, looking here and there, anxiously waiting for the yellow vehicle. When she saw a glimpse of a tire similar to the school bus tires, she accidentally bumped her head into the glass window, hoping that it was the school bus. The reason for this is because she wakes up too early and always waits for the bus instead of the stereotypical student who wakes up late and has to catch up to it.

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"I'm here!" said Star as she hopped into the school bus. All the mice looked at her confusingly, as nobody was this excited to go to school. She found a vacant seat next to a boy, and sat there like an innocent little bunny. The school bus violently stopped and almost had everymice' face on the back of the seats in front of them. Star got off the bus and while walking in the main hallway, she stumbled face first into her own locker.

❁ Characters ❁

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Do you want your character to join in the fun?
Fill this form out.

Name:

Age:

Gender:

True Nature:

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The "True Nature" must be something negative.
For example, True Nature: A cyberbully.

Character Slots: 3/12

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Star's form will be kept as a secret.

❁ Freedom Wall ❁

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I'm satisfied :^) -Csoneforyou

I'm loving this already :o -Ayumiouo

Spencer keeps popping up everywhere -Starrelite

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ooo good luck on the story! Gonna apply owo

Accepted.
I might write the chapter tomorrow, it's late here ;^;

❁ Intro ❁
❁ Chapter One ❁

❁ Intro ❁

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Were on Chapter One, aren't we?
There's not much thrill in this chapter, but oh boy there's a clue to the plot.
If you found it, it means your good at finding or I just make things too obvious, any of the two.

❁ Chapter One ❁

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"Are you okay?" a mouse asked Star. "Y-yes, it just hurts a little on the nose." Star replied. She looked at the mouse and saw him wearing a faded blue beanie with a smile plastered on his face. Star recognized this mouse. He was the guy that was seated beside her in the bus. "So, your Star, aren't you?" the mouse asked. "Why, yes! How about you?" Star exclaimed, eager to know who her new friend is gonna be. "I'm Spencer. Nice to meet you." Spencer said and walked over to his classroom. Star shrugged and went to her own class.

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After the first and second period, lunch break started. Star went over to the cafeteria to wait for Spencer. "Hey." a mouse went over to Star. "Spencer! Why did you take so long..?" she asked. "Eh. My classmates write as slow as turtles." Spencer said and glared at his classmates, who were sitting by a table. He then sat with Star and took out his lunch. When he was about to take a bite of that delicious cheeseburger....

SPLASH!!!

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"You little b*tch! Can't you see where you're going?!" a female mouse shouted. "I-I'm sorry! Please forgive me!" the other mouse begged as she kneeled to the ground and cried. Star and Spencer watched as the angry mouse was soaking wet in water, while the other one picked up the water bottle and wiped the floor with her handkerchief. After doing so, the angry mouse slapped and kicked the poor mouse who didn't deserve it. The angry mouse ran to the bathroom.

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"Spencer, what happened there?" Star asked. Spencer didn't reply and ran to help the mouse up. "G-get away from me!" the mouse said and ran to somewhere else. Spencer went back to Star. "Why did she kick her? That's rude!" Star scoffed. "Star, you vulnerable mouse." Spencer rolled his eyes. "Eh? Vulnerable? Why is that?" she asked. "Heh. You see, everyone in this school has their true nature. You may see everyone here as nice, but remember. There's a killer in each of us." He whispered. Star widened her eyes. "So, what's your true nature? I bet it's bad." Spencer asked and walked off to class. Star was left puzzled.

squeals
2good ;v;

❁ Update ❁

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Hey guys.
I've made a section called the ❁ Freedom Wall ❁.
Here, everyone's opinion and criticism can be shared!
Hate is okay, praise is okay, even little remarks are okay.

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I will write the next two chapters or just one tomorrow.
Although, I'm only available for the weekend or if there's suspension or a public holiday.

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Accepted.
I actually have an idea for a chapter right now, though I'm still drafting it, meh.

E: Btw guys.
After we get 5 or more characters..
Were.. gonna ship some of them.
Yes I know, some of you may go crazy or question me, but it's high school.
And opinions on ships are also included on the freedom wall.
Though, were not including sexual interaction between the shipped characters because it's against the Atelier801 forum rules.

E (2): You guys will decide the ships.
If a ship gets loads of support.. I'm.. gonna have to make it happen.

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❁ Intro ❁
❁ Chapter Two ❁

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Huh... very few people are reading this fanfiction.
I-it's okay I guess... at least I'm happy with my work..
I don't need that much fans because I don't get so much.
Am I doing something wrong, though...?
Please, do tell me. Your free to pour your buckets of critique, I'm fine soaking wet in them.
I'd appreciate hate, too. This can help me improve what's terribly wrong.

❁ Chapter Two ❁

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It was dismissal time. Star was still thinking about what Spencer said. She walked down the street, clutching her backpack as the sun began to set. There were very few mice going around and about as it was getting dark. She saw the school bus, and it stopped right at the front of a house. Then, she saw Moon hop out of the bus and unlock his house gates. Star remembered that he promised her that he will give her back the library book by Tuesday. It was Monday, and Moon rushed inside the house. Star became suspicious of him. Leaving the gate open, she decided to come in.

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Star peeked inside as the door was also left open. "Incautious, isn't he?" she thought and rolled her eyes. Inside the house, she saw Moon running here and there, going up and down the stairs, and throwing around various things. "No.. where is it?!" Moon kept on shouting as he kept on throwing stuff around to find the library book. Star observed the inside and saw the book inside the toilet. She got pissed off and was desperate to barge in and shout at him.

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Star just contained her anger and decided to leave. Before going out of the gate, she saw Spencer. Again. "How come do you keep popping out everywhere..?" asked Star. "Moon called me. It's something private." he replied. "Private? Ahaha. I'm guessing he wants you to help him find the 'missing' library book." she replied. "H-how did you know?" Spencer asked, shocked. "Incautious tin can of a mouse didn't lock his gate and door, so I peeked in and saw him 'finding' the library book when I saw it casually swimming in the toilet!" Star shouted. Almost everyone 10 feet near them heard it, including Moon.

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thinking about joining :o

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I'm satisfied :^)

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So
Either I need more characters or ships.
I'd need any of those to start chapter three ;^;

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good luck on the story;)

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"ships"

yess

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Welp.
A friend of mine told me that if Spencer and Star was shipped, the ship name would be hard to think of.
I never thought about that, I was busy thinking of how Moon will explain the library book in the toilet to Star.

Also...
Ayi'd leik samhe sheiep fenerth Ah! Uh, nevermind!

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I'd like to make a form >:P

But I'm thinking a phycopath isn't completely secret.

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starrelite a dit :
Welp.
A friend of mine told me that if Spencer and Star was shipped, the ship name would be hard to think of.
I never thought about that, I was busy thinking of how Moon will explain the library book in the toilet to Star.

Also...
Ayi'd leik samhe sheiep fenerth Ah! Uh, nevermind!

Stacer? lol

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I'm loving this already :o

Here's my character:

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Character accepted.
I'd probably write the next chapter within 2 days.

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Good luck on the next chapter!

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