[ TFM Fanfiction ] Dimming Lights - A Neon Lights Sequel |
Eeveewings « Citoyen » 1486371000000
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A dark blue sky was dappled with silver and twinkling stars. Beneath it lay a small wood house with many trees around it; snow blanketed the ground. Sign Ups & Colours Last NL, I made it to where a mouse is strictly one colour. But now, a mouse changes into different colours depending on their emotion at the moment and their lines change due to their mood and why its afflicting their colour. Red - Angry Note: They usually glow more when red Orange - Curious Note: Usually mice are this colour when seeign dead mice, wake up to the void, or see something strange. Yellow - Distressed or Embarred Note: If did something wrong or sick, mice are usually this colour Green - Content Note: Usually mice are this colour Sky blue - Giggly or Nice Note: Usually if a joke is told, mice will laugh and become this colour. Blue - Sadness Note - If depressed, they wil be a dark blue Purple - Hurt by Words or Physical Pain Note: When almost killed, the mouse will slowly turn into a lilac before reaching death. Pink - Excited, Very Happy Note: Think of a party, how do you feel? Very happy? This is the emotion you would feel. Grey - Low Emotion Note: Usually if a mouse does not care, they show this. White - Dead Mouse Notes: A dead mouse is IMPOSSIBLE IN GAME. So to see a dead mouse is like seeing a cat, scary! Terms in Lines and Blurs Blurry: Confused, Shy, Flustered or Flattered. Wiggling: Hyper, Crazy, Angry. Straight: Normal. Dusting: Sleepy, Bored Sign Up Form Characters lola Name: Lola Gender: Female Personality (This is VERY important!): Cheerful, Giggly, Nice, Smart, livingmeme Looks (If you cannot provide a picture, DM me): Family: Unknown Mother, Unknown Father, Unknown Siblings (Sister and Brother) Extra: She is unaware of how cruel the world is, making it easy to use her. bruno Name: Bruno Gender: Male Personality (This is VERY important!): If in a unknown and dangerous situation, he clams up and finds it hard to breathe, most of the time he is quiet and very sweet, but can get heated easily and debate well. (he roasts too.) He is usually very clingy to a crush, and tries to make sure no one else likes his loved one. Looks (If you cannot provide a picture, DM me): Family: Father and Mother (divorced) Extra: He is blind, but can see in the void. He finds this very weird, and hates seeing. umbra Name: Umbra Gender: Male Personality (This is VERY important!): When he is happy, he is very joyful and can cheer up even the saddest of mice,he loves to be with others,having fun with them and also likes making new friends. But when he is depressed, he cuts himself with his claws and looks like he is crying all the time Looks (If you cannot provide a picture, DM me): Family: n/a Extra: Was in the the void a loooong time ago. digi Name: Digi Gender: Female Personality (This is VERY important!): Very caring, generous, very shy, confused easily, emotional Looks (If you cannot provide a picture, DM me): Family: She does have a big brother, but they don't really hang out with eachother that much Extra: Was in the void a long time ago. justin Name: Justin Gender: Male Personality (This is VERY important!): He's protective to others at times, honestly most of the time he doesn't do anything to help. He's clumsy, pretty much a goof ball. The male mouse can also sometimes quite confusing, whenever he talks about something he can somewhat not make any sense. Don't piss off the smol bee.. Please. He's violent when he's pissed off Looks (If you cannot provide a picture, DM me): Family: N/A Extra: wind Name: Wind Gender: Female Personality (This is VERY important!): Usually rude and mean. She doesn't really like anyone- When shes angry or annoyed she'll tap her foot impatiently when shes threatened or scared she'll pull her knife out. Family: Father, ??? deceased Mother ??? deceased Sister - urm I forgot her name but ill just name her Knifu you could say she was raised by the devil :') Extra: She does have a knife she'll usually hide it but bring it out when shes annoying, threatened or angry She always tries to look out for her sister and make sure shes close by what a good big sister :^)[ knifu Name: Knifu Gender: Female Personality (This is VERY important!): Really really happy and joyful, the complete opposite of her sister She wants to be around everyone and loves to make everyone happy Family: father ??? Deceased Mother ??? Deceased Sister - Wind Extra: She'll always wanna be around her sister, well wind tries to make her stay around her nick Name: "Nick "Loki" Thistlestring. His title is from his petty, yet successful lies." Gender: "Male, yes." Personality: "Yes, he's a tricky fellow. He clamors around and steals things, but best interest is in his heart. He's also a liar, and can attempt to persuade. He does enjoy the fun things in life, yes, but a conversation and a cup of coffee is good enough for the little friend. He's a neutral player in sides, choosing whoever is the kindest or gives good pay. He loves a good game of cards." Looks (If you cannot provide a picture, DM me): "His eyes are bright yellow, and he dully sharpens his front teeth. He uses his sword as a secondary weapon, but usually uses his fists, being against killing." Family: "They died off long ago" Extra: "No, madam" Announcements Fanart @eeveewings Dernière modification le 1487219040000 |
Eeveewings « Citoyen » 1486371180000
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Eep >__< I'm back with NLs! But... in a sequel. I felt so bad that quit the other one due to stress, but this one will be set after years of the void being found by our last mice. Anyway.... I was looking at the old one, and saw this: And snorted. Well, it's back! |
Digitalpanda « Consul » 1486380540000
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Squeals YeS |
Riiazu « Citoyen » 1486385160000
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Ok i'm am the cause of this ok Anyways, please use my character from the prequel, if you accept characters yet because i am lazy to put him here *slaps self* |
Eeveewings « Citoyen » 1486417200000
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Bublamorce a dit : On it! @bubla also i see that sintre has a different appearance than a mouse on the generator has... if u want i can draw him like i did lola.. but i would need a clearer and updated picture of him lol |
Digitalpanda « Consul » 1486417860000
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Should I just push Digi in here again And probs with another character too |
Eeveewings « Citoyen » 1486418940000
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Digitalpanda a dit : ooOOOo yES!!!! |
Digitalpanda « Consul » 1486423680000
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Alrighty! Name: Digi Gender: Female Personality (This is VERY important!): Very caring, generous, very shy, confused easily, emotional Looks (If you cannot provide a picture, DM me): Family: She does have a big brother, but they don't really hang out with eachother that much Extra: Name: Justin Gender: Male Personality (This is VERY important!): He's protective to others at times, honestly most of the time he doesn't do anything to help. He's clumsy, pretty much a goof ball. The male mouse can also sometimes quite confusing, whenever he talks about something he can somewhat not make any sense. Don't piss off the smol bee.. Please. He's violent when he's pissed off Looks (If you cannot provide a picture, DM me): Family: N/A Extra: |
Eeveewings « Citoyen » 1486432980000
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Added! I'm very excited, especially since most of these mice are familiar, which I can have them sneak in stories of the void when I didn't write! But I do want like... 2 more mice lol. |
Riiazu « Citoyen » 1486493280000
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Well, Sintre has been renamed to Umbra. because idk And he has a 'god form' in which he's stronger and has black broken wings and each feather on the wings has a yellow tip. His blood is also the same shade, which is mustard yellow Other than that he's basically the same Also ref is changed! Normal ref Those things on his eyes are glasses, yes. He also has body and face paint. 'God form' thing ref He has drawn scars on the left shoulder of the jacket, but the back of the jacket and his t-shirt is torn up, because of his wings (and i'd be happy if you made it so the wings grow eventually) I hope you can accept this. Otherwise his personality 'n' stuff was left unchanged,so yeah! |
Eeveewings « Citoyen » 1486527720000
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Bublamorce a dit : I'm probably going to just keep his normal ref/form... to prevent him looking op against the other characters. |
Eeveewings « Citoyen » 1486705140000
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I decided to quickly write a chapter, but i'm sorry it only included three mice. Here is my reasoning (I would be pleased if you read the chapter first.) Also, sorry if it's too short, I'l write longer chapters if it isn't enough! E: I JUST NOTICED WHEN I PASTED THE CHAPTER IT DIDN'T TAKE ALL OF IT.... ITS UPDATED NOW! I chose Umbra since he was one of the mice who came into NL early. Digi because she came into NL early too. Lola as she is the main protagonist (Like Cat.) I will introduce any other characters soon, or next branch. Branch 1 “No,” a mouse gasped, they were a thin line of grey, that blurred with several different colours, resulting in a brown outline against the dark, black void. Why am I here…? The mouse thought, Me, Umbra… Out of everyone? Their grey soon pulsing into a bright orange, the lines blurring into almost nothing. “I wonder if anyone else is here?” Umbra spoke, cringing as the shiny floors of the dark void reflected with orange, and strangely a shiny line of white light, though no visible light was shown. As Umbra got up, he began to stiffly walk, he was exhausted, The cold frost clung to his orange lines. He knew this wasn’t a dream. As he continued to walk, he thought deeply, questions beaming in his brain. Each clink from his feet’s claws. Looking up from his feet, he noticed another beam of orange light, he felt colder as his invisible blood ran cold, who was this? Did he dare to call out to them? Grinding his teeth, he would rather be with a stranger than be in a cold, alone void, squeaking, he called out, “Hello!?” The blurry mouse soon cleared out as it shifted to a soft pink. “Hello?” They echoed back. Umbra studied the voice, it seemed vaguely familiar, before it hit him, Digi! Desperately, he ran, noticing his lines turning pink as well. Digi was getting closer, and before he knew it, he almost ran her over. “Digi!” His lines wiggling effortless. “It’s me, Umbra!” “Umbra?” Digi repeated, “I… I’m so glad you’re here, I thought… It was just me, I couldn’t live through that again-” Her voice was cracking with emotion, her lines now a deep blue. “Don’t cry... Before you know it, we’ll be out, i’m as confused as you are,” he got up and helped her up. “What if there are more? More mice?” Digi sniffed, ignoring her stuffy nose from her warm and tear welled face, she wiped her eyes dry. “Then… We have to find them,” He looked around. “Have you heard anyone?” He shifted his gaze to her again. “I feel like I heard someone, but not you, it was a female,” Digi replied. “A higher voice, but it sounded mature., and confused,” she explained, her paw twitching nervously. Both of the mice were a orangey-yellow, they continued to walk until they heard echoing, Digi jumped. “That’s her!” She looked around. “That’s the voice, is she saying... Help? I wonder if,” she stopped herself. “Say something… I, I can’t, my throat is dryer than sawdust,” She pleaded, Umbra nodded before yelling multiple times, “hold on!” Finally the mouse saw the casting voice’s bright yellow lines violently wiggling. “I’m not alone!” The mouse wailed, Digi was nodding in response to the mouse. The yellow mouse head was swaying, almost as if she had fallen in the void and hit her head hard. “What’s your name?” Umbra quickly said, glancing at Digi. “I’m… Lola, yeah, Lola,” The mouse seemed to be going crazy, thin lines giving away her large eyes and ruffled hair and fur. “I’m Umbra,” Umbra’s gaze casted to Digi. “And this is Digi, we both used to be here a long time ago,” He watched as Lola tried to stand up, her ears perked as she listened. “What happened?” Lola asked, finally making it up with Digi’s aid. “Well, a group of mice were brought here, little did we know a few killers were here. But in-game, you cannot be killed, but you can here. So the killers tried to kill us,” Umbra paused. “The dead mice here are silhouettes of white mice. And they fade over time, i’ve heard it was very painful when you fade, you feel the pain of how you died over and over again.” Lola nodded. “So… what happened towards the end of this journey?” She was wide eyed, her fur still ruffled. “Me and and the other mice found out who these killers where through a mouse named Copycat, or Cat,” He seemed to flinch. “She almost died.” Digi continued for Umbra, “she was being used by the killers, a pawn. But after finding out they were the killers, we killed them instead. It was very horrible, and it hurts to think about it, even. We killed them a second time, and they faded.” Lola was a mix of colours, “that sounds awful,” she commented. “Perhaps… Another killer is on the loose here?” Umbra shook his head. “No, a mouse would learn from this, It was all over the news, and each surviving mouse came together and told the story.” Lola nodded. “Well, I don’t think that three mice will take down this journey if that happened, I can only imagine what is coming is worse,” She turned to Digi and Umbra. “There has to be more, I… I feel it.” Dernière modification le 1486790940000 |
Riiazu « Citoyen » 1486715940000
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umbra x digi is the best thing-I mean.. amazing chapter! |
Digitalpanda « Consul » 1486736160000
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has been reading this many times before going to sleep and when waking up good shit |
Eeveewings « Citoyen » 1486766040000
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Bublamorce a dit : LMAO IKR I WAS WRITING THIS AND WAS LIKE "damn this would be a good ship" Digitalpanda a dit : did u wake up in the void after?!?!!? |
Riiazu « Citoyen » 1486838580000
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*screeches* WHERE ARE THE NEON LIGHTS I FORGOT HOW IT ALL WAS Sorry for this, but what have you done with the old story? Have you erased it from this world? |
Eeveewings « Citoyen » 1486854660000
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Bublamorce a dit : It's in the archives now... Once i'm able to get back to my laptop (or if I edit this) I can get the link to you. E: http://atelier801.com/topic?f=6&t=824799&p=12#m237 Sorry, i'm on my phone atm. Dernière modification le 1486854840000 |
Windstarzz « Citoyen » 1486925880000
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heyo!! I'm back hah Name: Wind Gender: Female Personality (This is VERY important!): Usually rude and mean. She doesn't really like anyone- When shes angry or annoyed she'll tap her foot impatiently when shes threatened or scared she'll pull her knife out. Family: Father, ??? deceased Mother ??? deceased Sister - urm I forgot her name but ill just name her Cloud you could say she was raised by the devil :') Extra: She does have a knife she'll usually hide it but bring it out when shes annoying, threatened or angry She always tries to look out for her sister and make sure shes close by what a good big sister :^) her sister!! Name: Cloud Gender: Female Personality (This is VERY important!): Really really happy and joyful, the complete opposite of her sister She wants to be around everyone and loves to make everyone happy Family: father ??? Deceased Mother ??? Deceased Sister - Wind Extra: She'll always wanna be around her sister, well wind tries to make her stay around her Dernière modification le 1486926540000 |
Eeveewings « Citoyen » 1486944060000
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oh ya wind is back omg i know how to introduce her yasssss |
Windstarzz « Citoyen » 1486946700000
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Eeveewings a dit : yessss |