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(Fan fiction)The Markings of a Hero (WIP)
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introduction
okay......
Welcome to a story! So, basically, this is a world of mice- not the same, but extremely similar, to the world of transformice. The only difference is some walk with special powers instead of shamans- shown, by a marking they call a mark. This story is about a school. A special school, for honing the powers these special individuals have. Storm and Rain, A brother and sister, enter the school in each other’s shoes- very very literally. They look at the walls of the school, wondering what is waiting for them behind the walls....

So, for this story, I wanted pretty much everyone besides my main character, the main villain, the police officers, and the principals and some of the government people to be made... by you guys! So, please put down anyone you want to join this world, like this-

Name: (put name here)
Gender:(male, female, non binary, bisexual, or alien. Please don’t put alien, it’s too hard to put them in a dorm.)
Personality: (put personality here)
Power: the power your mouse have (e.g. weather manipulation. You should give it a name, for example, stormmaker, and tell what it does.)
Mark: the mark your mouse have, it must be related to the power your mouse haves. (E.g. a cloud for weather manipulation)
Job:(bad guy, student, teachers, government officials. I might add more jobs later when needed, but if I really need to, I’ll make them up myself. I hope I don’t have to.)
Picture: please put the picture in a spoiler. If you for some reason can’t Get a picture, it’s okay, but if you can, please do!

Please do make a mouse, even you don’t want to read the story, because I need mice to start the story. And try to submit it as soon as you can! Thanks!


characters
Storm
Name: (put name here)
Gender: male
Personality: Confident, and helps others in need. He isn’t shy, but cries sometimes when he is alone, or only with his twin sister, Rain.
Power: burning wind (he controls air, ad can heat it up enough to make things go up in flames. He can’t control the fire directly, though.) orange red.
Mark: a wind blowing a fire. A bit like the thing to the left, but with three squiggly lines, and a drawing of fire.(~M)
Job: student
picture:https://projects.fewfre.com/a801/transformice/dressroom/?c=8&h=173;FFFFFF;F07B46&s=32&p=Statique&m=19&hd=19&d=53&n=10;CCB100

Rain
Name: (put name here)
Gender: female
Personality: Shy, cries easily, but is very understanding of other people. Haves a very slow burning fuse, but explodes violently, if you get what I mean.
Power: Arctic water (she can control water, but the smaller the amount of water, the faster and more control she has over it. She can freeze water, but have very minimal control over the ice.
Mark: a cup of half frozen water. Turquoise colored.
picture: https://projects.fewfre.com/a801/transformice/dressroom/?c=24&e=49&s=32&p=Statique&m=25&d=49&n=41;CCECF7;FFF7F7;56A1FD;FFF7F7
Job: student

mythical ————— By mythical43
name: mythical43(im bad at naming or just do myth or make ur own name for my character)
gender: female
personality: negative, boring, dumb, helps everyone, shy, lonely, independent, quiet, weird, that one person no one talks to
power: shape-shifting(like turning into animals)
mark: someone turning into an animal(cant think of anything better that represents shape-shifting)
i cant do a pic so here's wut im wearing on my avatar(just do my avatar cuz y not, all default): 10 bday fur, rainbow dash hair, music note tail item, lollipop mouth item(rainbow swirl), blue and orange flowers neck item(its a bit like a lei and also the flowers are hibiscus flowers, the colors alternate, blue is 1st third and last color, rest is orange), and lastly, a rose headband head item its just one rose btw.
Job: student

prologue

prologue

“Darn it!” Watson shouted and pounded his hands on the desk.
“Another one?” Asked Sherlock.
“Yep. This time, we found a guy buried 10 feet under. Didn’t die of suffocation though.” Watson was gripping the pencil so hard it splintered into bits, falling onto the desk.
“What did he die of, then?” Pressed Colt.
“A broken neck. The floor was completely undamaged. It was as if he fell, completely through the floor and dirt.” He replied. Sherlock, who was looking through the police database, called them over.
“I found something weird. Something very weird.” Said Sherlock. Colt took a look at the victim’s information.
Nothing strange.” Said Colt.
Look at the criminal records.” Said Sherlock.
“Nothing. So?” he replied.
Sherlock showed him all the other victim’s files. “Look. Nothing. It’s like they’re hiding something.” Said Sherlock.
“Either they are targeting goody two shoes, or the government covered up information about them.” Said Watson. “Also, did anyone find anything on his mark?”
“Nope. We thought it was an undo mark, but they would have undoed the wall. It was completely destroyed on the way out. Also, 10 feet is way out of a undo mark’s range.” Replied Sherlock. They all looked at the whiteboard, which they wrote all the victims’ information.

Frozone
Death: burning


Dynamite
Death: drowning
Notes: there was no water in his lungs, and there was no water on the floor, or anywhere in the room, even though the police arrived in 5 minutes.



knife
Death: poison
Note: there was no poison in his blood stream, stomach, and no injection wounds. Seems to have died of cyanide poisoning.


They didn’t know it, but they were thinking the same things.
“Strange, very strange.”


Chapter one: school time
”that’s a big wall.” Said Storm.
“Yep.” Agreed Rain. The wall they were talking about was at least 15 feet in height, and that whatever was inside the house was the size of a town. They both looked at the letter of introduction from the government. ”We have a large campus.” Rain read aloud.
“That’s not big, that’s huge.” Replied Storm. Suddenly, the gate they were standing by opened, and a tall mouse came out. He had red hair, and was smoking a pipe.
“Do you have letters?” Asked the mouse. Storm and Rain both handed him the letters. The mouse read the letters, and said, “Come on in.”
They went into the academy, and walked down the road. The siblings finally arrived at a group of buildings. They went into the largest one, and went into a room. Storm looked out the window, and couldn’t believe what he saw. There was what looked like a small town in the distance, and there was multiple forests. There was also what looked like the dorms, and- wait a second.... “what is that?!” He shouted. The tall mouse came running over, and said, “quick, come with me!” And ran out of the room, with Storm and Rain following after him.
“Help! Half of dorm C is on fire!” A mouse shouted. There was chaos everywhere. People were screaming, running around, and generally going crazy. Rain took one look at the fountain and started moving water onto the fire. Storm, on the other hand, can’t think of what to do. Blowing the fire would make it worse, and he didn’t want that. Unless...
he quickly moved some air in a circle, making a miniature tornado. It spun the fire fast enough to extinguish it. The tall mouse took a look at their work and said, “let’s go back, okay?”
On the way back, he said his name was Bob- Bob Heat. “I really disliked my name after I found about it. I got teased relentlessly at school.” “What was it?” Asked Storm. Rain was eating chocolate, and can’t answer. “Flame forge. I can make things out of heat energy.” Rain finished her bar of chocolate, and said, “Bob the Builder?” Bob cringed. “Please don’t.” After a bit, they arrived at the buildings, and they went back into the building. After a few minutes, they heard a knock at the door. Bob opened the door and let the mouse in. The mouse had pink cream fur, a orange headband, rainbow hair, and a music note tail item. She was eating a lollipop, Which she took out of her mouth. “This is Mythical, and she will be your guide around the school.” Said Bob.

Also, can someone help me with tabs? I can’t figure out how to do it.

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[#idk how to tabs either][/#]
[#]maybe this is how[/#]
ima base a character off of myself
[spoiler]name: mythical43(im bad at naming or just do myth or make ur own name for my character)
gender: female
personality: negative, boring, dumb, helps everyone, shy, lonely, independent, quiet, weird, that one person no one talks to
power: shape-shifting(like turning into animals)
mark: someone turning into an animal(cant think of anything better that represents shape-shifting)
i cant do a pic so here's wut im wearing on my avatar(just do my avatar cuz y not, all default): 10 bday fur, rainbow dash hair, music note tail item, lollipop mouth item(rainbow swirl), blue and orange flowers neck item(its a bit like a lei and also the flowers are hibiscus flowers, the colors alternate, blue is 1st third and last color, rest is orange), and lastly, a rose headband head item its just one rose btw.
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Okay... thank you Mystical43 for writing this (for some reason I thought no one would reply). Mainly I’m doing this to hone my writing skills for ela next year, but also for me to actually write a story. Also, what job is your character? (Student, teacher, evil government worker, good government worker, bad guy, etc) once again, thank you!
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student and ur welcome :3
btw if ur unsure of my character's appearance, then try to make my outfit in tfm dressroom then show me the outfit ill tell u if it right

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https://projects.fewfre.com/a801/transformice/dressroom/?h=68&e=57&s=1&p=Statique&m=13&t=20&n=27
this? i have no idea what's the 10th bday fur, sorry.
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its close but the rose is a headband(the rose is on the headband) and the 10 bday fur sor of looks like pink cream with a few stars in it. its right above the kitsune fur at the bottom
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https://transformice.fandom.com/wiki/Shop/Fur#154
https://transformice.fandom.com/wiki/Shop/Ears#13
Is it these two?
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yep!
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