Lucysicy a dit :

i made my first pixel art gif, its pretty bad..

What i'd suggest is to duplicate the second frame (the one where he pauses and starts to look the other way, place that after the final frame, and that will make a somewhat smooth loop (although you need more animation).
The tail is a bit too thick and I can't really tell what he's wearing or why there are holes in his legs. But for your first gif, it's okay at best.
Adding more frames would make the animation smoother, and adding more fps would make it faster and pause less. I recommend 24fps.

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i made my first pixel art gif, its pretty bad..

What i'd suggest is to duplicate the second frame (the one where he pauses and starts to look the other way, place that after the final frame, and that will make a somewhat smooth loop (although you need more animation).
The tail is a bit too thick and I can't really tell what he's wearing or why there are holes in his legs. But for your first gif, it's okay at best.
Adding more frames would make the animation smoother, and adding more fps would make it faster and pause less. I recommend 24fps.

thanks, i really needed some tips

Im gonna try to share art instead of a animation x3




Edit: This is a new style.. I can show you the old style if you want :3

Imaswagger12 a dit :

Im gonna try to share art instead of a animation x3




Edit: This is a new style.. I can show you the old style if you want :3

nice art, i suggest you to play around with styles what u like the most and is the most easiest for you (just like i did v3v)

So, do I need to be part of the tribe to say stuff in here without getting my posts moderated? If so I'll just go, I just wanted to see if I could offer some advice here.

okie thx ^_^

Purpledimond a dit :

So, do I need to be part of the tribe to say stuff in here without getting my posts moderated? If so I'll just go, I just wanted to see if I could offer some advice here.

You can give some tips to the tribe, we'll be happy to.
Thats the actual reason why its open to every1, not like i dont know how to lock threads just for the tribe.

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So, do I need to be part of the tribe to say stuff in here without getting my posts moderated? If so I'll just go, I just wanted to see if I could offer some advice here.

You can give some tips to the tribe, we'll be happy to.
Thats the actual reason why its open to every1, not like i dont know how to lock threads just for the tribe.

ah, okay, thanks. I assume that also means I can critique and post my own pictures? (not that im going to that often because they're ugly)

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Purpledimond a dit :VoirMasquer

So, do I need to be part of the tribe to say stuff in here without getting my posts moderated? If so I'll just go, I just wanted to see if I could offer some advice here.

You can give some tips to the tribe, we'll be happy to.
Thats the actual reason why its open to every1, not like i dont know how to lock threads just for the tribe.

ah, okay, thanks. I assume that also means I can critique and post my own pictures? (not that im going to that often because they're ugly)

yes

I tried



I hope you like it x3

Imaswagger12 a dit :

I tried



I hope you like it x3

thats amazing, ty.

Imaswagger12 a dit :

I tried



I hope you like it x3

The image honestly hurt my eyes when I saw it (it was late at night). The background is much too colorful and plain giving it an unrealistic feature.
Try to not use the tools. They won't help you improve, and this was a mistake I've been making for years. The hair is too long and thin, you should add some thickness to it. Adding a galaxy texture to the skin will not help your coloring improve. The head is too large for most of the body, so I'd suggest going on google, searching up anthro mouse bases and use a desired mouse base as your reference. You can then copy the anatomy, but don't trace or actually use the base. That will never help you improve. The airbrush has been used in the background (which I just noticed) and it makes it have an unrealistic feel. You should try blending and mixing colors to a more realistic rate. If you need any further tips on this piece or others, shoot me a PM.

EDIT: You should of noticed the mouse was missing the ears.

Imaswagger12 a dit :

Im gonna try to share art instead of a animation x3




Edit: This is a new style.. I can show you the old style if you want :3

Don't use the tools. This will never help you improve. The beanie drifts off the hair a little bit so it doesn't look like it's directly under the hair. I recommend moving the beanie down a bit with the lasso tool and dragging it a reasonable distance down the hair and erasing the unwanted lines that were left on it. Don't use textures, this will never help your coloring improve and it doesn't match up with the other coloring. I noticed you tried some shading, good job on that, but you should make it a little darker. Try making dark streaks from where the hair is upward and build your way down lighter and lighter and blur it up, it will look more detailed and realistic. The mouth is also a little too low and too small. Try making it a reasonable height and size. You can also look up some human anatomy bases on google, but do not actually use the base. Use it as a reference and copy what the base looks like, so you can get a good look on the hands and such. If you need any further tips on this piece or others, shoot me a pm.

Lucysicy a dit :

the lineart is done on paper with a black pen so its super sketchy

First of all, the anatomy is off. You should try looking at some bases for references as the hands are too pointed. Even though it looks sketchy, if you want the full look and have it look a little less lazy, you should try erasing those lines. The bandanna is shaped like a carrot in my opinion and you should make it somewhat thicker. It is too small. You should make some messy hair behind the earmuffs to make it more detailed. You should add some more features on the mouse like giving it a proper nose and mouth, also adding more features like whiskers and animal eyebrows, as it doesn't look much like a mouse. The eyes are fine, but make them a little more narrow and fill in the whites of the eye with the color white. The rose (I guess it was intended to be) doesn't look like a rose. Try looking up some rose lineart on google and attempt to copy it to make a rose.
If you need any further advice on this piece, shoot me a PM.

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the lineart is done on paper with a black pen so its super sketchy

First of all, the anatomy is off. You should try looking at some bases for references as the hands are too pointed. Even though it looks sketchy, if you want the full look and have it look a little less lazy, you should try erasing those lines. The bandanna is shaped like a carrot in my opinion and you should make it somewhat thicker. It is too small. You should make some messy hair behind the earmuffs to make it more detailed. You should add some more features on the mouse like giving it a proper nose and mouth, also adding more features like whiskers and animal eyebrows, as it doesn't look much like a mouse. The eyes are fine, but make them a little more narrow and fill in the whites of the eye with the color white. The rose (I guess it was intended to be) doesn't look like a rose. Try looking up some rose lineart on google and attempt to copy it to make a rose.
If you need any further advice on this piece, shoot me a PM.

the flower doesnt always need to be a rose ya know, i was actually going for something else, and also i dont need to use bases to improve actually, never liked em actually.

Hmm, I've not had many people evaluate my art, let me try..

Purpledimond a dit :

Hmm, I've not had many people evaluate my art, let me try..

SpoilerThis is my most recent drawing from Draw the Mouse Above You Game.

SpoilerThis is the tabby cat from Bouboum, it's one of my first tries on texture so forgive me if it looks rough.

uh excuse the crappy backlegs

i like the second drawing, i like the fur texture

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the lineart is done on paper with a black pen so its super sketchy

First of all, the anatomy is off. You should try looking at some bases for references as the hands are too pointed. Even though it looks sketchy, if you want the full look and have it look a little less lazy, you should try erasing those lines. The bandanna is shaped like a carrot in my opinion and you should make it somewhat thicker. It is too small. You should make some messy hair behind the earmuffs to make it more detailed. You should add some more features on the mouse like giving it a proper nose and mouth, also adding more features like whiskers and animal eyebrows, as it doesn't look much like a mouse. The eyes are fine, but make them a little more narrow and fill in the whites of the eye with the color white. The rose (I guess it was intended to be) doesn't look like a rose. Try looking up some rose lineart on google and attempt to copy it to make a rose.
If you need any further advice on this piece, shoot me a PM.

the flower doesnt always need to be a rose ya know, i was actually going for something else, and also i dont need to use bases to improve actually, never liked em actually.

First of all, that was an assumption. I didn't know what the flower was but I assumed it was a rose because it was one of the few common in game store items that is a flower.
Bases give you a sight of the anatomy, don't trace over them, just use them as references dummy

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Lucysicy a dit :VoirMasquer

Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep a dit :VoirMasquer

Lucysicy a dit :VoirMasquer

the lineart is done on paper with a black pen so its super sketchy

First of all, the anatomy is off. You should try looking at some bases for references as the hands are too pointed. Even though it looks sketchy, if you want the full look and have it look a little less lazy, you should try erasing those lines. The bandanna is shaped like a carrot in my opinion and you should make it somewhat thicker. It is too small. You should make some messy hair behind the earmuffs to make it more detailed. You should add some more features on the mouse like giving it a proper nose and mouth, also adding more features like whiskers and animal eyebrows, as it doesn't look much like a mouse. The eyes are fine, but make them a little more narrow and fill in the whites of the eye with the color white. The rose (I guess it was intended to be) doesn't look like a rose. Try looking up some rose lineart on google and attempt to copy it to make a rose.
If you need any further advice on this piece, shoot me a PM.

the flower doesnt always need to be a rose ya know, i was actually going for something else, and also i dont need to use bases to improve actually, never liked em actually.

First of all, that was an assumption. I didn't know what the flower was but I assumed it was a rose because it was one of the few common in game store items that is a flower.
Bases give you a sight of the anatomy, don't trace over them, just use them as references dummy

i use refs, im practicing.. u cant just brain wash it in, im practicing dummy

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Lucysicy a dit :VoirMasquer

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Lucysicy a dit :VoirMasquer

the lineart is done on paper with a black pen so its super sketchy

First of all, the anatomy is off. You should try looking at some bases for references as the hands are too pointed. Even though it looks sketchy, if you want the full look and have it look a little less lazy, you should try erasing those lines. The bandanna is shaped like a carrot in my opinion and you should make it somewhat thicker. It is too small. You should make some messy hair behind the earmuffs to make it more detailed. You should add some more features on the mouse like giving it a proper nose and mouth, also adding more features like whiskers and animal eyebrows, as it doesn't look much like a mouse. The eyes are fine, but make them a little more narrow and fill in the whites of the eye with the color white. The rose (I guess it was intended to be) doesn't look like a rose. Try looking up some rose lineart on google and attempt to copy it to make a rose.
If you need any further advice on this piece, shoot me a PM.

the flower doesnt always need to be a rose ya know, i was actually going for something else, and also i dont need to use bases to improve actually, never liked em actually.

First of all, that was an assumption. I didn't know what the flower was but I assumed it was a rose because it was one of the few common in game store items that is a flower.
Bases give you a sight of the anatomy, don't trace over them, just use them as references dummy

Well, you said you didn't like bases, so I assumed you didn't use them to practice your anatomy. Not my fault you didn't give enough information and was not descriptive enough.