This is my first story so I don't care what you say. Also this is a story about stuff I know.

In the year 2900, the year of the hybrids.

Ever since Weyland Yutani heard of the alien species xenomorph he and some others have been doing illegal genetic mutation. In the year 2244 they found the empress, but the company kept it silenced. With the empress they could make hybrids with ease. Fourteen hybrids were made, and I was the second, therefore my name was 2. They say I was made to be a test dummy because I'm 25% xenomorph, which gives me healing capabilities. They would teach me how to drive, and fly in new vehicles. After that they would shoot me, cut me, flay me, freeze me and burn me. I would've give up on life unless it was for the empress, and her plan. I was the key part in the plan because I could get a pulse riffle, and dispose of the guards. Then I had to free the queens, and face huggers. After I had to free my fellow xenomorphs. And in the end I had to destroy the power, in order to free the empress. After the fiasco the empress made me the master of the warrior xenomorphs. Unfortunately, we needed some place to stay, luckily 6, who already escaped could find a place for us to stay.

( 6 is an old xenomorph thats a loner, and he's well respected.)

The empress asked me to do a favor for her.
"You want me to do what????" I hissed back confused.
"I want you to live in the human world for a week, and study them." The empress hissed back.

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You can say whatever about the story, and ill read what you say, but I wont care. XD

The empress word is law to all xenomophs so I had no choice. the good side about this mission was, I had been in the hive for six months. When heading to my personnel place in the hive I bumped into number 9, and same as always she was silent, and had to help the queens. 9 is the master of queens because she is 25% queen xenomorph. She would only talk to the queens, and the empress. Only the empress knows why she was created, and I personally wonder why she was created. Why did Weyland Yutani create her?
What I call my place was a vent that lead to a small military hanger. There was only a drop ship, atv, some clothes, food, a water tank, weapons, and a pile of books. I think best part of the of my room was it could be locked up with metal doors or the empress would sleep at the entrance of the vent. I decided to go to sleep, and wait till morning to leave. But first I had to get a stellar map to know were the planet GY-89 was, and I remembered what I learned on piloting drop ships from being a weapon test dummy.
I left before most of the hive awoke. Before i left I first had to hide my appearance. I had jet black hair, sharp nails and teeth, a tail, and the rest of my body is human except for my senses. I only had to clip my finger nails, and make my tail look like a belt. The ride to the planet wasn't bad or good. But entering the atmosphere was horrible.
"WHAT IS THAT GOD DAMM FOAL SMELL" I shrieked.
Then realized the smell was anything the humans touched.

The first day was hell. The smell was a combination of sewage, shit, garbage, rotten food, and industrial waste. My ears started to bleed from the vehicles roar, television, shouting, and random noise from who knows what. I nearly went blind from a single casino. A little child nearly stole my case containing a musket, but I was faster than him. When I caught him, he kicked multiple times till he tucked out. Luckily his parents were looking for him. Apparently they were struggling for money, and he went to steal money. Nine days later they won the lottery, and are now the 77 richest family.
I found a hotel that gives sound, and smell proof rooms. Once I was in the room I unpacked my stuff, and flopped down on the bed. Two minutes later a cat rolled up to the window, and I freaked out. Xenomorphs are dead afraid of cats. That little SOB didn't leave till seven hours had pass, and I was about to shot it. After that I left the room to search for food. The manger suggested to go to Mcdonald's, and I went there. I got a lemonade, four burgers, and a big ass thing of fries. I got another thing of big ass fries to go. The food was delicious. The lemonade was sweet and cold. Once I got back to the hotel I decided to hit the hay. After I shot the cat.

I need some help. What are some foods or drinks for 2 to try?

Maybe Soda too~! By the way, I loved it :0

Today I decided to explain what the xenomorph.

The xenomorph begins its life cycle in an egg, a big egg. In the egg there is creature called a face huggers. They look like a hand that has tentacle on the bottom of it. The hand latches on to a host forcing an embryo into the person. It is impossible to remove it once its on. Because it latches on its host its first stage of life is called a face hugger. THe embryo will grow in its host till it burst from his/her chest, and this actions got the second stage of its life called chest burster. The chest burster looks like and over sized worm with teeth. The chest burster will go through three molts till it's a full xenomorph. The full xenomorph can climb any surface, and get through most of all spaces. The Xenomorph has sharp teeth, claws, razor sharp sickle tails, And a second inner mouth. This inner mouth is used for fighting, and eating. Also this inner mouth can extend 5 inches. Xenomorphs have long dome heads, bony skeleton like bodies, and long sharp tails. The Xenomorph can either become a drone that protects the hive, a warrior that kills other races and invades, and a praetorian which are the royal guards of the queen. There is only three ways to become a queen one is too be a royal face hugger that makes a queen chest burster, two For a single Xenomorph to go to a planet with no queen, and finale if a queen dies the praetorians will battle to see who will be the next queen. The queen Xenomorph is giant, and in charge of laying eggs that contain face huggers. They also are the smartest of the hive. Xenomorphs have acidic blood all their life and use it as defense. Xenomorphs have over 50 more types but these are the most common. Xenomorphs can be born from any living creature. Xenomorphs have no visible eyes, ears, or nose. They talk telepathically or through hisses. Xenomorphs can live forever if they get food at least every 90-40 years. No one knows how xenomorphs see and the creators wont tell. But the most deadliest thing about Xenomorphs is they learn faster than us or they can adapt to any environment. They don't need oxygen to live. They cant live on something that is 220'f or 120'f below. Xenomorphs are afraid of cats

Okay I thought I explained the Xenomorph before i continued.

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Chapter five, yay! Im now including other characters pov. (point of view). Special thanks to Levanalucard for supplying a picture of three warrior xenomorphs

The next night I dreamed about the day I met the other hybrids.
I was escorted (and not dragged) to a room with 11 chairs. There was only one other person there and she was talkative, very talkative. Her name was 8, and she was 10% xenomorph. Eight more hybrids entered the room, but then 13 entered the room. Once he entered the room he glared at me with daggers. He believed the naming system represented the strength os the hybrids, but it represents the order of planing. I was planed to be made second, but I wasn't. The guards then brought in a food called soup. It took a while to eat because we used forks at first. Next they brought salads to use, and we ate it. Actually the guards had to shove it down 13 throat, and that was funny. Next they brought use pizza. It was there for a second, and then even the boxes were gone. And finally they brought out BEER! They brought kegs and pints to us, they brought pints. We all got drunk except 9.
"Hey dip****, I bet I could beat the snot out of you and become the strongest." 13 said while glaring at me.
"JUST SHUT THE ****&(*&^&%^&())&%##!#@%$@$%$$%$&&&()*_&%%#@!#%$$&^&^$$@#^%*&^()^&&%t&#$%#^$^&**(&()*&^%$##@%#^*%$#!@#@q$^^^&&, AND I, WILL FIGHT YOU!" I yelled. (Today I don't remember what I said)
Right before we fought I lost all emotions, thoughts, and anything except the battle. I became untouchable, and flipped him in the air. I was able to doge or parry any of his blows, and I could find any weak spot on him. When fighting I realized that I could abandon any emotions or feelings so I could only think on the battle, making me the most deadliest hybrid. He lost and got really pissed and left. All in all it was a good dream.
Weylands POV
Four point nine billion light years away. There all gone, but I still have more tricks u my sleeve. They don't know about project beta. I only regret losing 2 and the empress. Oh well what's done is done.
"Mr weyland we found something!" a random guard yelled.
"What have you found" I said
"We found 2, at GY-98." the same guard said
"Good, good" I said very pleased.

I fogot to say this. White text is 2 point of view. Red text is Weyland Yutani point of view. Blue text is 13 point of view. Black text are dreams

I feel tora has done some editing to my story.

This is going to be a bloody part, so keep reading.

The bad feeling I had got so bad that I left to return home. When flying there wasn't a single war ship in the area. I then felt the feeling return when I saw LV-67. The smell of blood, black powder, sulfur, and burt flesh was mixed in the air. After I got over the hill, it was all clear now. I saw the my fallen brood everywhere. They were ripped apart, burt alive, exploded, and squished. There was not a single marine in sight of the carnage. Boy was I wrong. In fourteen-seconds I was surrounded by a hundred marines. They were wearing light armor, and had type 7 pulse rifles. I knew the plan was to go blank so I can only focus on the battle.
"Freeze, we have you surrounded!" Their captain barked
As he stopped speaking I lost all emotions, and feelings. The world then slowed down, and I went faster. My tail then moved swiftly slashing the captains neck, spraying blood on his soldiers. Next I grabbed two soldiers as bullet shields. Once they were dead I took there guns and shot the other soldiers till out of ammo. Now with my claws I slashed parts of their body of , and rammed my hands through a few heads. Some were firing their guns, but I could see the bullets move and parried them. After that I jumped in the middle of a crowd and killed them all with my tail. Then I grabbed a solider, and his gun to use him like a riot shield. Finally I grabbed a solider by his ankle and used him as a mace. I thought it was over in till I was shoot in my knees and surrounded aging. Then I was surprised by queen xenomorphs bashing through the crowds. And leading them was 9. They started to run,but first they wrapped chains around me. Then they drugged me, so I would fall asleep. I saw 9 trying to reach me, but she was too late.
"We have 2 sir, and we can now begin project beta" Their leader said

I have change the time in the first chapter because I made a mistake in the time.

Hello and starting today I want to hear your criticism and complements. I need someone to be an editor and edit my story when im gone, and I will chose how.

I woke up in restraint that bound all my body, But there was only a steel mussel on my head. I smelled rubbing achool, ink, blood, body waste, coffee, and a familiar sent. I was in a white empty room, that had a long piece of black glass on the wall. I then heard footsteps, wheels, and a clicking pen. Next the door opened, and a women came in.
"Long time no see, doctor Valentine" I yawned
"I see you still have manners and you gotten stronger" she said while looking at my tail.
"What am I going to do for you today" i asked
"Were just going to test project beta" she sighed while scribbling something on her clipboard
She then exits the room and my bounds freed me. Then another door opened, but I did not expect what I saw. I saw a xenomorph with a flamethrower for an arm and the other was a machine gun. There was a visor on its head, which controlled it. It started to fire at me, but I was behind in a blink of an eye. I then put on foot on his head, then the other one on his stomach, and ripped of the flamethrower. It died from blood lose, and i looked at the black glass
"So this piece of crap is project beta?" I growled

wait so i can criticize this

ok dude I'm gonna rewrite it with my revisions, kay? (and maybe give feedback lets roll w this)

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I woke up, locked in restraint that kept my body immobile, and yet, there was only a steel muzzle on my head, firmly securing me in place. I looked around, breathing deeply, and almost gagging on the mixed scents of rubbing achool, ink, blood, body waste, and coffee, with a touch of a familiar smell I couldn't place. Looking around, I realized that my prison was nothing but a sterile white room, void of anything but me, and a long piece of glass on the wall, black as anything. I jerked up slightly, the sound of footsteps growing increasingly louder, the click clack of stilettos on a hard floor, accompanied by the sound of a pen absently clicking. The door opened, and a tall women glided in, as sleek and shiny as the lab. She tapped her foot impatiently on the ground, heel-against-hard-surface sound amplifying.
"Long time no see, Doctor Valentine" I yawned, keeping a casual demeanor.
She gave me a sideways glance, smirking slightly, "I see our manners haven't improved." She spoke softly, and yet, her tone was comparable to a winter lake, frozen over. "But we've gotten stronger, haven't we." She remarked, while staring at my tail.
"And just what am I going to do for you today?" I half-asked, half-sighed, hoping that my eyeroll was not lost on her.
"Nothing much, just testing Project Beta." She sighed while scribbling something on her clipboard, slim fingers gliding over the page, manicured nails sharp enough to tear holes in the paper.
She game me one last glance, and left the room the way she came. Swiftly, silently, and with an air of authority. At that same moment, the metal fixture keeping my head in place popped open. The other door popped open, and I choked back a shout of surprise at the jumbled mess of limbs and machinery that shambled its way out the door. It was a xenomorph, grotesque, ugly, one arm sporting a large machine gun with god knows how many buttons, and the other arm not even there. It looked as if someone had torn off it's arm, only to shove a flamethrower back into the bleeding socket. Th visor on it's head flashed dangerously, and you could almost see Doctor Valentine behind it, carefully calculating and executing the creature's moves. It let out a strangled yell, half human, and the disjointed flamethrower powered up. Burning its way towards me, I dropped to my side, rolling behind it, resting my foot on its head. I grabbed the flamethrower with my hands, and pulled just as I pushed down with my foot. Just as I had hoped, the flamethrower was weakly jammed and wired inside a mutilated arm socket, so it popped out fairly easily. But not without the sound of tearing flesh, and a guttural yell from the xenomorph. It collapsed, landing on the floor, a pile of self loathing, pain, and pity, drowning in it's own blood.
"So," I growled, "This crap is Project Beta?"

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yo. Nice story you got there. might i make some suggestions:

• Don't start every sentence with "I"
• ELABORATE
• I know ur trying to sound all quick and cool and choppy
• But that only works for the hunger games
• SO MORE DETAILS PLEASE
• ELLAAAABBOOORRRAAAATTTEEEE
• violence is good

Damn. Also what does elaborate mean?

More details?
Googlesssss

e·lab·o·rate
adjective
əˈlab(ə)rət/
1.
involving many carefully arranged parts or details; detailed and complicated in design and planning.
"elaborate security precautions"
synonyms: complicated, complex, intricate, involved; More
verb
əˈlabəˌrāt/
1.
develop or present (a theory, policy, or system) in detail.
"the key idea of the book is expressed in the title and elaborated in the text"
2.
BIOLOGY
(of a natural agency) produce (a substance) from its elements or simpler constituents.

Becca, your version is damn good