My Wonderful friend edited my story for my grammar mistakes .-.

THANK CHU EMBERKITX! :D


"The war on the Wind masters, Spiritual guides, and Mechanicians."

Characters:
Spiritual King
Wind Princess
Mechanician Queen
Imaewsome
Tang
Emberkitx
Karusayshi
Everflame
Catspaws
Juliasaysmoo
Cuteandepic
Micefamilies
Susanlwu


Roles:
Imae (Me):
Normal Wind master

Tang(Friend):
Spiritual Guide, Imae's secret friend

Ember(Friend):
A Mechanician.

Karu (Friend):
Imae's friend in the Wind master tribe

Ever (Friend):
A Mechanician,
(Also Imae's secret crush DUN DUN DUNNN)

Cats (Friend):
A noble Spiritual Guide

Mice (Friend):
Wind master, Imae's Friend

Julia (Friend):
Part Mechanician, But mostly Wind master.

Susan(Friend):
A Spiritual guide

(As requested Susan is a Background character)
Chapter 1

"The Cold Night"

The gusty, cold breeze brewed across the land of Transformice.
All the tribes shivered, hoping to survive another cold, cold night.
A little teenage mouse, named Imae shivered, hoping her tribe, The Wind Masters, wouldn't lose any members. The Wind Princess hurried into the room, "Imae! We need you on the cheese gathering patrol with Julia, Karu, and Mice!" she said, trying to say it nicely.
"Okay, I'll get my scarf.." Imae replied, putting her flower necklace aside, and put on her scarf.
"I'm ready." She whispered to herself, going outside of her little hut, meeting Mice, Julia, and Karu.
"Hey girls!" She said smiling trying not to lose any heat, "Hey." all three of replied. "Come on guys, let's gather some cheese." She squeaked trying to have them cheer up a little, she then started into the woods.

CHATPER 2 IS COMING SOONN

.:If it still has grammar mistakes, please tell me:.

i am offended by me not being in this

i am offended by the entire world though

offending me is a tradition

o-o You can... I just need you to pick a Skill tree and You'll be in it.

im wind master but i'd rather not because theres too many of them

and i dont /really\ have a dedicated skill tree

Yeah... if I was you I would go to Spiritual Guides if you want..

im half spiritual guide but can i be like a background character

and be a neutral


.also friend me on tfm.


/OFFTOPIC\
are you tiarathedog

Susanlwu a dit :

im half spiritual guide but can i be like a background character

and be a neutral


.also friend me on tfm.


/OFFTOPIC\
are you tiarathedog

Yes.

Can I be in this.. Please XD

Bouncytree a dit :

Can I be in this.. Please XD

Yeeeaah I'm pretty sure the OP forgot about this thread /ene\

this was from last year, where did you even find this.....??

Kattiej a dit :

this was from last year, where did you even find this.....??

Hah, never caught that