Hi! Welcome to my first fanfic, Error 404.


Before we begin with any chapters, here's the backstory about Error 404.

Introduction a dit :

One night, a mouse with pure black fur, broke into a testing facility for dangerous chemicals, looking around for something to steal for themselves. The mysterious mouse reached a flimsy metal walkway, held above glass containers, filled with mass-produced chemical liquids. Every step the mouse took on the walkway, a terrifying creak was echoed around the facility. The mouse wasn't paying attention to the walkway, barely holding the weight of the mouse, until suddenly, the metal walkway broke, letting the mouse free-fall into one of the containers. The container was filled with purple, glowing liquid, and the label to the container read, "Unknown substance". The mouse barely made it to the surface, struggling to swim in such a thick, paste-like liquid. As soon as the mouse was able to climb out of the liquid, strange side-effects began to occur. The mouses senses became sharper, it was able to hear every sound in the room and it could see through the walls. It fixed its mind onto a piece of broken metal and was able to levitate it, using only it's mind. Suddenly, a white mouse, with aqua blue hair, goggles on it's forehead and a bell necklace, climbed into the broken window of where the cursed mouse had broken through, spotted the other mouse, and attempted to sound the alarm, however, with the new powers the cursed mouse had recieved, the mouse created a purple object, resembling a claw, and swiped at the white mouses face, leaving a scar on her eye. The white mouse immediately fell into a pink liquid, unconscious, the pink liquid was exactly like the purple one the black mouse had fell into. However, the black mouse escaped and sick with power, now it's up to someone to stop the mysterious mouse before harm comes to Transformice.

The evil character.

Name: Terbian
Gender: Male
Age (human years): 26
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Bio: He grew up lonely with no one by his side to aid him. He always picked fights at his school and was always getting expelled, in his early teens, he became a gangster, breaking into shops, murdering mice with his bare paws and just generally being a nasty piece of work. When he heard of the science facility testing unknown substances, he had the urge to break in and sell the substances for money, fortunately for him, he fell into a mysterious purple paste, turning him into a powerful organism, the paste also stained his hair purple.
Personality: Dark and bloodthirsty, only sees good in his own plans.

There will be 7 good characters. [Character submissions are now closed]

Characters:

Name: Foxie J (Belongs to me)
Gender: Female
Age (human years): 23
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Bio: Spotted a mouse running extremely fast down a street and decided to follow them, when she witnessed someone breaking into a testing facility, she attempted to climb in and sound the alarm. However, being scratched and knocked unconscious, she fell into a pink liquid, which could possibly change her life.
Personality: Adventurous, brave, sometimes bitchy towards others

Age: 17
Gender: Female
Name: Cream (Belongs to Smalltoes)
About: Loves chickens and her chicken can fly great distances, she is usually happy but can get angry easily. She will do anything for her friends even if it kills her.
Personality (behaiviour): Happy, can be easily upset/ offended.
Extras: Chicken.


Name: Luna (Belongs to Boefie)
Gender: Girl
Age (human years): 16
Reference:


Bio:A strong indepentant woman, doesnt likes to be around people so much. But does have friends. Has special band with animals. Verry smart, but doesnt likes to help people alot.
Personality: Happy crazy, crazy but in a good way. Mostly happy, but can switch over to grumpy and mad easily.


Name: Skylar (Belongs to Birdluv)
Gender: Female
Age (human years): 16
Reference:

Bio: It was nothing but sadness after the death off her family and friends. Her life was empty, roaming the streets just as empty. She stood fearless, and did what she could, to protect her empty homeland. One day, as she defencelessly ran from blood-sucking phantoms, she tripped on a rock, but something appeared to be on it. As Skylar turned her head to look at the rock, she saw a bow, probably left behind from one of the villagers. Reluctantly, she picked it up, knowing she was taught not to steal. "Unless they are dead!" she remarked at her own words. She found it fit great in her hands, as she prepared to fight or die. Skylar didn't have much expoerence, but somehow, she made it. Now, everyone as gone, but she didn't want to leave. She would rest in a nearby forest, learning to hunt and care for herself. by 14, she was great at it. Almost becoming plump, the food was plentiful. Though she had a passion for nature, she did what she must. now, at 16, she is one of the wild.
Personality: A hardy, cocky female who likes to be left alone. She is nice to her well known friends but gets easily aggrivated. But if you know her well, she is loyal, forgiving, and protective of her things and others.She can get angry, or be in a good mood and helpful.
She also likes arts, animals, music, and literataure.


Name: Cherry (Belongs to Iwuvcheesed)
Gender: Female
Age (human years): 19
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Bio: 10 years ago when she was nine years old, Cherry was a normal girl who doesn't stand out from the crowd, her parents were very kind, her home was the only place she felt safe, even though her family was poor. She only had a couple of friends, but they would talk over her when she would stand at the back and stay silent, but one day she was taken away from her parents by strangers who saw her in the allyway. She was going to get disintergated in acid, but when they dropped her in, they didn't notice they dropped something into the pool of acid, when her head dropped in, there was a huge explosion, she didn't die, but she had grown wings on her head, and her teeth turned to fangs. She was able to fly with her wings, but after that, she was a loner and her friends turned away from her, she ran away from everyone and stayed in the forest with only the animals to keep her company, she quickly had a bond with them and was able to understand them.
Personality: Despite her fearsome apperance, she is very sweet, but she is very shy near people she hasn't met before. At times she can be rude and sassy, but she is still very adventurous and can jump into things without
thinking.


Name: Shard (Belongs to Shardpixel)
Gender: Male
Age (human years): 27
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Bio: Shard grew up poor and his parents died mysteriously at a young age. His twisted view at the world finally snappeed into place afterward, and he stayed in his home for the rest of his life up until now to avoid the outside world.
Personality: Brave, makes selfless (and stupid) plans for others, not afraid to bring gore into an argument, (semi)romantic, pesky, and definitely can be a softy >w<


Name: Abrielle (Belongs to Supastarx)
Gender: Female
Age (human years): 18
Reference:

Bio: Abrielle grew up having a lot, meaning her experience is very narrow leaving her to be new to the world as it is. At only 14 she discovered what it was like not being popular and all of that when a lowly house fire destroyed her house and killed her parents. She now lives with her aunt and has begun to appreciate the little things more.
Personality: Prissy, Bossy, Girly, Outspoken, hates anything that ends up in mess, sassy, drama-queen but under that Abrielle can be very sweet, nice, and adventurous even if she won't admit it.

hi ill join brb
Name: Alexis
Gender: female
Age (human years): 22
Reference:

Bio:Alexis was born with a rare condition called - maddnorexia. Since age 1 she is always evil and mad at everyone. Her mother dead when she was born , and her father almost killed her while being drunk. Alexis couldn't survive and she ran to a haunted house where she lives. Her target - killing people
Personality: Bossy , mad , evil , brave , evil laughing (the one - MUAHAHHAHHAHAHA >:DDDDDDDD)

Age: 17
Gender: Female
Name: Cream
About: Loves chickens and her chicken can fly great distances, she is usually happy but can get angry easily. She will do anything for her friends even if it kills her.
Personality (behaiviour): Happy, can be easily upset/ offended.
Extras: Chicken.




(I copied this from my fanfic, hope you don't mind.)

where is your reference

I just went to get it.

Austejuxs a dit :

where is your reference

Oh, you might want to change your character if you want to be in this because we already have an evil character, I'm looking for heroic or good mice.

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seriousluy
i wrote like 10 times my charac is evil

Austejuxs a dit :

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seriousluy
i wrote like 10 times my charac is evil

You should respect the author and her choices

Name: Luna
Gender: Girl
Age (human years): 16
Reference:

Bio:A strong indepentant woman, doesnt likes to be around people so much. But does have friends. Has special band with animals. Verry smart, but doesnt likes to help people alot.
Personality: Happy crazy, crazy but in a good way. Mostly happy, but can switch over to grumpy and mad easily.

OMG brb getting it!!

I wanna be in dis lemme get my ref and all~
Name: Skylar
Gender: Female
Age (human years): 16
Reference:

Bio: It was nothing but sadness after the death off her family and friends. Her life was empty, roaming the streets just as empty. She stood fearless, and did what she could, to protect her empty homeland. One day, as she defencelessly ran from blood-sucking phantoms, she tripped on a rock, but something appeared to be on it. As Skylar turned her head to look at the rock, she saw a bow, probably left behind from one of the villagers. Reluctantly, she picked it up, knowing she was taught not to steal. "Unless they are dead!" she remarked at her own words. She found it fit great in her hands, as she prepared to fight or die. Skylar didn't have much expoerence, but somehow, she made it. Now, everyone as gone, but she didn't want to leave. She would rest in a nearby forest, learning to hunt and care for herself. by 14, she was great at it. Almost becoming plump, the food was plentiful. Though she had a passion for nature, she did what she must. now, at 16, she is one of the wild.
Personality: A hardy, cocky female who likes to be left alone. She is nice to her well known friends but gets easily aggrivated. But if you know her well, she is loyal, forgiving, and protective of her things and others.She can get angry, or be in a good mood and helpful.
She also likes arts, animals, music, and literataure.

Not everyone will make it in btw!
If there's too many people entering, I'll have to select the characters based on their bio and other things.
Gtg and sleep nao ;n;

Edited first post :)

Ah, goodnight :'D

Name:Snowy
Gender:Female
Age (human years):-
Reference:

Bio:LOVES art,to paint and draw. and is really easy to get mad or sad but is a cheerful mouse.
Personality:Snowy has a secret... she wants to go into her own path one day and start her own desing shop.

Name: Pip
Gender: Female
Age (human years): 14
Reference:

Bio: Her family left her when she was very young. (atleat thats what she thinks.) She always thinks about what happend at that time. Now shes all alone. She loves nature and sometimes she thinks she can talk to animals. When people try to talk to her, she advoids them by putting her headphones on
Personality: Shes very sassy, lazy, and adventurous. ^w^

i'm not sure if the character slots are full but if not:

Name: Cherry
Gender: Female
Age (human years): 19
Reference:


Bio: 10 years ago when she was nine years old, Cherry was a normal girl who doesn't stand out from the crowd, her parents were very kind, her home was the only place she felt safe, even though her family was poor. She only had a couple of friends, but they would talk over her when she would stand at the back and stay silent, but one day she was taken away from her parents by strangers who saw her in the allyway. She was going to get disintergated in acid, but when they dropped her in, they didn't notice they dropped something into the pool of acid, when her head dropped in, there was a huge explosion, she didn't die, but she had grown wings on her head, and her teeth turned to fangs. She was able to fly with her wings, but after that, she was a loner and her friends turned away from her, she ran away from everyone and stayed in the forest with only the animals to keep her company, she quickly had a bond with them and was able to understand them.
Personality: Despite her fearsome apperance, she is very sweet, but she is very shy near people she hasn't met before. At times she can be rude and sassy, but she is still very adventurous and can jump into things without thinking.

Nice intro by the way, cant wait to read more :)

FOXIE OMFG YESS..

Lemme fill out a form I'll edit this post.

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Name: Shard
Gender: Male
Age (human years): 27 (IGNORE THIS PART e3e)
Reference:

Bio: Shard grew up poor and his parents died mysteriously at a young age. His twisted view at the world finally snappeed into place afterward, and he stayed in his home for the rest of his life up until now to avoid the outside world.
Personality: Brave, makes selfless (and stupid) plans for others, not afraid to bring gore into an argument, (semi)romantic, pesky, and definitely can be a softy >w<

(GUESS WHAT I BET WILL APPEAR IN THIS FANFIC.)

Name: Conwolf
Gender: Female
Age: 15
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Bio: She grew up with a normal life until 13 when she was taken to an orphanage because her parents started to be drunkards and messed up. She ran away from the orphanage later and lives at her cousin's house as of now.

Personality: Conwolf is a very tsundere girl. Meaning she acts very cold and "cool" at first but as you get to know her, she opens up and beomes friendly. She can be a bit stubborn at times but does come out to protect others in need. She loves nature and SECRETLY loves drawing and being with people and friends. She absolutely hates bugs, heights and darkness. She loves her scarf and cat hat XD.

Name: Abrielle
Gender: Female
Age (human years): 18
Reference:

Bio: Abrielle grew up having a lot, meaning her experience is very narrow leaving her to be new to the world as it is. At only 14 she discovered what it was like not being popular and all of that when a lowly house fire destroyed her house and killed her parents. She now lives with her aunt and has begun to appreciate the little things more.
Personality: Prissy, Bossy, Girly, Outspoken, hates anything that ends up in mess, sassy, drama-queen but under that Abrielle can be very sweet, nice, and adventurous even if she won't admit it.

Name: Lucy
Gender: Female
Age (human years): 17
Reference:

Bio: She grew up with a poor life, to she was 9 she never leaved her house. She never saw somebody else than her parents. But one day, she walked outsite the door, and it was ok. But she still trust the outside world not completely. She like to be in nature with grass etc but not forests and jungles. She still have a lightgrey cat plushie that she still loves.
Personality: She like to play with friends, but can by really shy and afraid. Shes friendly to everybody. (Not to enemies)

I've selected the characters and I'll update the OP in a sec

E: Edited the OP, sorry if you didn't make it in ;n;