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Hi! Welcome to my the sequel of my first fanfic, Error 404.
Read the first one to know what's going on: Topic-717893
Credit to Sirusthemice for the banner
http://i.imgur.com/iKBAMaf.png

For people who haven't read this, here's the last chapter of the first one:

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Chapter 15
An unforgettable loss

Shard and Foxie were kissing for a long time, but Foxie broke apart by the echo of a hellish noise. She stood up and swivelled around to listen.
Foxie realised the severity of the situation, "Shard, you must leave, NOW!", at this, she readied herself to fight the upcoming chaos. Shard didn't want to leave.
She looked back at Shard and realised he wasn't going anywhere, "Fine, the least you can do is help me fight...", she turned back and felt the danger slowly approaching.
Without warning, Foxie leapt out of the way, Terbian had blasted through the roof of the building, "Let's end this, once and for all!", he shouted.
"With pleasure...", Foxie grinned. Terbian grew angry, he blasted purple fireballs at Foxie, but missing her every time, she proved too fast for him. He growled bitterly.
He floated down and attempted to punch Foxie, but to his surprise, she had caught his fist with ease, "Nice try", she muttered, before using her own fists to deal powerful punches.
Terbian stumbled, then stared at Shard, Shard caught his stare and turned away, embarrassed that he wasn't doing anything to help Foxie.
Terbian turned away from Shard to face Foxie, but she had disappeared, she was flying above him, making as little noise as she could.
He looked up and saw Foxie, but before she could move, Terbian had grabbed her leg and slammed her to the floor, at this time, Shard was furious.
Shard ran up to Terbian, seperated him from Foxie, then punched him, Terbian stood up, his face ridden with blood, "You little...", Terbian turned back at Foxie.
Foxie's eyes were narrowed, they were fixed on Terbian. He walked up to Foxie and grabbed her, he held her in such a position, she couldn't free herself.
She started biting Terbians paws, which made him drop her, she landed on the ground and picked herself back up. Terbian grew furious now, "Why don't you just DIE?!"
He opened bat wings from his back, Foxie's eyes widened, "Wow, looks like you grew a pair too...", she opened hers, to Terbians surprise.
Terbian shot off into the sky, followed by Foxie, he consistently shot purple fireballs at her, Foxie retaliated with her own pink beams that she shot out of her paws.
At last, they came to a stand-off, Terbian let out a huge beam of power, coloured purple. It headed straight for Foxie, but she let out a huge beam of her own power to hold back Terbian.
Shard watched above, biting his fingers nervously, he had no wings of his own and sank down, feeling helpless. Terbian and Foxie were powering through eachother.
Foxie was trying to hold Terbian back as much as possible, but she started to feel like she was running out of energy. She let her guard down and Terbians beam, hit Foxie.
She fell unconscious, Shard screamed, "FOXIE!!!", the rest of the group were walking underneath the building when Foxie smashed, still unconscious, into the ground.
They all screamed, Cherry ran up to Foxie, "S-She... she's dead!", she cried, checking her pulse and double checking it over and over. Luna and Cream looked up and saw Shard looking over the edge of the building. Tears were streaming down his face. Skylar and Abrielle hugged each other, crying for the loss of their friend. Luna, Cream and Cherry soon joined them.
At Foxie's funeral, it was quiet, no words were said, she was only buried. Shard stared at her gravestone, then walked away, his head low.
The grave glowed a slight haze of pink, but no one was ever there to see...

New characters will be added shortly

Terbians Team

Name: Terbian
Gender: Male
Age (human years): 26
Reference:
http://i.imgur.com/OpGKTFN.png
Bio: He grew up lonely with no one by his side to aid him. He always picked fights at his school and was always getting expelled, in his early teens, he became a gangster, breaking into shops, murdering mice with his bare paws and just generally being a nasty piece of work. When he heard of the science facility testing unknown substances, he had the urge to break in and sell the substances for money, fortunately for him, he fell into a mysterious purple paste, turning him into a powerful organism, the paste also stained his hair purple.
Personality: Dark and bloodthirsty, only sees good in his own plans.

Name: Churel
Gender: female
Age (human years): err. 24. well at least appears 24. probably way older since she's a vampire
Reference:
http://i.imgur.com/SQVYkSB.png
Bio: A usual childhood, though, her town got attacked, unknown by what. Churel only had two guns to defend herself with, and she did. Later caught in the forest and turned into a vampire, and she doesn't remember how. Loves the taste of blood and is quite skilled with her dual guns. Laughs hysterically at any comment she finds stupid or ridicilous.
Good or bad?: bad

Name: Galax
Gender: Male
Age (human years): 21
Reference:
http://i.imgur.com/lATPKlX.png
Bio: He grew up in a large house but lost his parents at the age of 11, he is now working for Terbian, but not knowingly. Terbian used his powers to possess Galax and the eye around his neck is linked with Terbians mind so that he can see what Galax is doing at free will. Galax met Terbian when he was little and they were both good friends. Terbian uses Galax to spy on other people for him, mainly the group who were with Foxie. Galax can't help being a spy but no-one can trust him when they know he's there.
Good or bad?: Good, but Terbian is making him act bad.

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Foxies Team:


Name: Foxie J (Belongs to me)
Gender: Female
Age (human years): 23
Reference:
http://i.imgur.com/ZG8b2VW.png
Bio: Spotted a mouse running extremely fast down a street and decided to follow them, when she witnessed someone breaking into a testing facility, she attempted to climb in and sound the alarm. However, being scratched and knocked unconscious, she fell into a pink liquid, which could possibly change her life.
Personality: Adventurous, brave, sometimes bitchy towards others

Age: 17
Gender: Female
Name: Cream (Belongs to Smalltoes)
About: Loves chickens and her chicken can fly great distances, she is usually happy but can get angry easily. She will do anything for her friends even if it kills her.
Personality (behaiviour): Happy, can be easily upset/ offended.
Extras: Chicken.

http://i.imgur.com/WUvKEAh.png
Name: Luna (Belongs to Boefie)
Gender: Girl
Age (human years): 16
Reference:

http://i.imgur.com/7IUQxII.png
Bio:A strong indepentant woman, doesnt likes to be around people so much. But does have friends. Has special band with animals. Verry smart, but doesnt likes to help people alot.
Personality: Happy crazy, crazy but in a good way. Mostly happy, but can switch over to grumpy and mad easily.

Name: Skylar (Belongs to Birdluv)
Gender: Female
Age (human years): 16
Reference:
http://i.imgur.com/ZPudE7s.png
Bio: It was nothing but sadness after the death off her family and friends. Her life was empty, roaming the streets just as empty. She stood fearless, and did what she could, to protect her empty homeland. One day, as she defencelessly ran from blood-sucking phantoms, she tripped on a rock, but something appeared to be on it. As Skylar turned her head to look at the rock, she saw a bow, probably left behind from one of the villagers. Reluctantly, she picked it up, knowing she was taught not to steal. "Unless they are dead!" she remarked at her own words. She found it fit great in her hands, as she prepared to fight or die. Skylar didn't have much expoerence, but somehow, she made it. Now, everyone as gone, but she didn't want to leave. She would rest in a nearby forest, learning to hunt and care for herself. by 14, she was great at it. Almost becoming plump, the food was plentiful. Though she had a passion for nature, she did what she must. now, at 16, she is one of the wild.
Personality: A hardy, cocky female who likes to be left alone. She is nice to her well known friends but gets easily aggrivated. But if you know her well, she is loyal, forgiving, and protective of her things and others.She can get angry, or be in a good mood and helpful.
She also likes arts, animals, music, and literataure.


Name: Cherry (Belongs to Iwuvcheesed)
Gender: Female
Age (human years): 19
Reference:
http://i.imgur.com/JqvSJSB.png
Bio: 10 years ago when she was nine years old, Cherry was a normal girl who doesn't stand out from the crowd, her parents were very kind, her home was the only place she felt safe, even though her family was poor. She only had a couple of friends, but they would talk over her when she would stand at the back and stay silent, but one day she was taken away from her parents by strangers who saw her in the allyway. She was going to get disintergated in acid, but when they dropped her in, they didn't notice they dropped something into the pool of acid, when her head dropped in, there was a huge explosion, she didn't die, but she had grown wings on her head, and her teeth turned to fangs. She was able to fly with her wings, but after that, she was a loner and her friends turned away from her, she ran away from everyone and stayed in the forest with only the animals to keep her company, she quickly had a bond with them and was able to understand them.
Personality: Despite her fearsome apperance, she is very sweet, but she is very shy near people she hasn't met before. At times she can be rude and sassy, but she is still very adventurous and can jump into things without
thinking.


Name: Shard (Belongs to Shardpixel)
Gender: Male
Age (human years): 27
Reference:
http://i.imgur.com/Bmkkmwx.png
Bio: Shard grew up poor and his parents died mysteriously at a young age. His twisted view at the world finally snappeed into place afterward, and he stayed in his home for the rest of his life up until now to avoid the outside world.
Personality: Brave, makes selfless (and stupid) plans for others, not afraid to bring gore into an argument, (semi)romantic, pesky, and definitely can be a softy >w<


Name: Abrielle (Belongs to Supastarx)
Gender: Female
Age (human years): 18
Reference:
http://i.imgur.com/FfxQwLy.png
Bio: Abrielle grew up having a lot, meaning her experience is very narrow leaving her to be new to the world as it is. At only 14 she discovered what it was like not being popular and all of that when a lowly house fire destroyed her house and killed her parents. She now lives with her aunt and has begun to appreciate the little things more.
Personality: Prissy, Bossy, Girly, Outspoken, hates anything that ends up in mess, sassy, drama-queen but under that Abrielle can be very sweet, nice, and adventurous even if she won't admit it.

Name: Hope
Gender: Female
Age (human years): 15
Reference:
http://i.imgur.com/akXY3dp.png
Bio: After her parents gave birth to Hope, they disappeared one day. She was an orphan, but soon got adopted by a female mouse. She was used as a 'gift' for the mouse's sister and husband. She was treated horribly, so she ran away. Afterwards, she decides to live on her own, looking for anything to keep her alive. She thinks she can do everything, but often fails at things in life. Hope is optimistic and determined however, and doesn't stop trying on surviving. Hope can be often the most helpless out of the group, not very bright, or having much strength.
Good or bad?: Good


Name: Luna S (Starstrong) aka. Starzie
Gender: Female
Age (human years): 14
Reference:
http://i.imgur.com/kSZ59B0.png
Bio: When she was only 5 years old, she admired the stars and galaxies that were in the night sky above her.
She loves to stargaze and experiment on chemicals, puzzles, mysteries, and riddles. Her father was a scientist, her mother was too. Sadly, they died from a unknown accident 3 years later... After that, she started living on her own, staying strong in her own way and teaching herself how to survive in ife lessons.
She is a very strong mouse and a pro at being a hiding ninja.
She hides better in the night, due to her hair color that matches the night. Also great at escaping from harm & to protect her friends. She has a strong and stern voice when it comes to her enemies or whenever she gets annoyed, which happens rarely since she has a friendly and loveable character.
Good or bad?: Good (Only if she gets on her dark side...)

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Name: Meifee
Gender: Female
Age (human years): 22
Reference:
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Bio: Meifee was an outcast in her family. The only mouse who liked Mei was her brother. When she was 17, she escaped from her home with her brother and took her unique sword with her in case there are phantoms or even her sworn rival Terbian. After the escape, Meifee was nicknamed "The Godly Swordsman". Rumours wander that Meifee might knock down her rivals with a single blow.
Good or bad?: Good
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Name: Churel
Gender: female
Age (human years): err. 24. well at least appears 24. probably way older since she's a vampire
Reference:
http://i.imgur.com/EiJp5P7.png
Bio: A usual childhood, though, her town got attacked, unknown by what. Churel only had two guns to defend herself with, and she did. Later caught in the forest and turned into a vampire, and she doesn't remember how. Loves the taste of blood and is quite skilled with her dual guns. Laughs hysterically at any comment she finds stupid or ridicilous.
Good or bad?: bad
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Wish me luck young fellows... I really have to get in my favourite fanfic .

Name: Link
Gender: Female
Age (human years): 20
Reference:


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Bio:
The most imature out of the group , she loves joking around and making everybody happy.Really brave and adventurous, but under all that Golden hair , hides madness. Sneaked into the experiment facility and got caught and transformed into a test subject . The paste didn't have the same effects as for Foxie and Turbian . She starts to turn into a monster if she doesn't take her pills that kills the chemicals in the paste. Has some hidden powers known by very little .

Good or bad?: Mostly good .

She sometimes stares at Turbian's eyes ... thinking about something.. We don't know about what...
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EE next book! cant wait! >:D
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Name: Hope

Gender: Female

Age (human years): 15

Reference:
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Bio: After her parents gave birth to Hope, they disappeared one day. She was an orphan, but soon got adopted by a female mouse. She was used as a 'gift' for the mouse's sister and husband. She was treated horribly, so she ran away. Afterwards, she decides to live on her own, looking for anything to keep her alive. She thinks she can do everything, but often fails at things in life. Hope is optimistic and determined however, and doesn't stop trying on surviving. Hope can be often the most helpless out of the group, not very bright, or having much strength.

Good or bad?: Good
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Hope im not late.. Name: Maddy

Gender: Female

Age (human years): 13

Reference:
http://i.imgur.com/CRRAdP5.png
Bio: This girl was born to be with animals, she just loved animals so much. so she grew to become a a secher that looks for animals or new animals.
She got along with lots of friends!
But she likes to hit people really hard when people get on her nervus. But she trys to get along with people that she never met, so she does not be mean all the time. Evan she is always pretective about people, she does not let anybody get hurt at all, evan she pretects herself and animals!

Good or Bad?: Good, only if you get on her nervus shes bad.

(I hope i did this right = my first time doing this.)
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Name: Luna S (Starstrong)

Gender: Female

Age (human years): 14

Reference:
http://i.imgur.com/Skgfuo0.png
Bio: When she was only 5 years old, she admired the stars and galaxies that were in the night sky above her.
She loves to stargaze and experiment on chemicals, puzzles, mysteries, and riddles. Her father was a scientist, her mother was too. Sadly, they died from a unknown accident 3 years later... After that, she started living on her own, staying strong in her own way and teaching herself how to survive in life lessons.
She is a very strong mouse and a pro at being a hiding ninja.
She hides better in the night, due to her hair color that matches the night. Also great at escaping from harm & to protect her friends. She has a strong and stern voice when it comes to her enemies or whenever she gets annoyed, which happens rarely since she has a friendly and loveable character.

Good or bad?: Good (Only if she gets on her dark side...)
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I've been reading this from the start but I didn't say anything. :o

I'd like to enter an evil character!

Name: Galax
Gender: Male
Age (human years): 21
Reference:
http://i.imgur.com/vWUsYiX.png
Bio: He grew up in a large house but lost his parents at the age of 11, he is now working for Terbian, but not knowingly. Terbian used his powers to possess Galax and the eye around his neck is linked with Terbians mind so that he can see what Galax is doing at free will. Galax met Terbian when he was little and they were both good friends. Terbian uses Galax to spy on other people for him, mainly the group who were with Foxie. Galax can't help being a spy but no-one can trust him when they know he's there.
Good or bad?: Good, but Terbian is making him act bad.
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Ok! I've selected the characters and they'll be added to the OP shortly
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Ejaffa a dit :
Ok! I've selected the characters and they'll be added to the OP shortly

Oooh, I wonder who was chosen.

I can't wait for chapter 1!
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The following characters have been added:

Hope
Churel
Luna S (might have to change it as someone else in the fanfic is called Luna)
Galax

Chapter 1 will be written tomorrow as I'm busy tonight.
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Ejaffa a dit :
The following characters have been added:

Hope
Churel
Luna S (might have to change it as someone else in the fanfic is called Luna)
Galax

Chapter 1 will be written tomorrow as I'm busy tonight.

* refreshes the page every 10 seconds to see who passes * * Dies a little bit inside * * smiles because she's not that much of a b*tch* I really like the new characters :3 this is gonna be eeeeepic <3
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Ejaffa a dit :
The following characters have been added:

Hope
Churel
Luna S (might have to change it as someone else in the fanfic is called Luna)
Galax

Chapter 1 will be written tomorrow as I'm busy tonight.

THANK CHU SO MUCH! :D
This is probley my second time adding one of my made-up characters in a fanfiction!

P.s, I love your fanfictions :3
Also, I forgot to put my character's nickname: Starzie
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Ejaffa a dit :
The following characters have been added:

Hope
Churel
Luna S (might have to change it as someone else in the fanfic is called Luna)
Galax

Chapter 1 will be written tomorrow as I'm busy tonight.

this is going to be SWEET.
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Sirusthemice a dit :


this is going to be SWEET.

Ikr :o
I'm so excited! I read the first book and I was like: I gotta make a character man..
This series is so intense...Annndd I just realized I was the youngest one in the fanfiction o-o
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THANK CHU SO MUCH! :D
This is probley my second time adding one of my made-up characters in a fanfiction!

P.s, I love your fanfictions :3
Also, I forgot to put my character's nickname: Starzie

Should I change Luna to Starzie to avoid confusion then
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Sure, I just didn't know there was a other luna..
Which is crazy to me because I've been reading the other book <.<
So yeah, you can change her name to Starzie :D

<.< Sorry bout' that.
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Charmwing a dit :
Sure, I just didn't know there was a other luna..
Which is crazy to me because I've been reading the other book &lt;.&lt;
So yeah, you can change her name to Starzie :D

&lt;.&lt; Sorry bout' that.

That's totally fine, everyone makes mistakes ;)

Gonna go write the 1st chapter
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Ejaffa a dit :



Gonna go write the 1st chapter

*Dun da da dundundun dun dun dun dun dun DUN! DA DA DAUM! DA DA DAAA!*
(Has anyone heard that kind of music XD?)

:D
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