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The Humice: Dark Times
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Anniebuscus a dit :


Too lazy?
Okay - Topic-623630

Thanks. xD
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Dappleorange a dit :


Thanks. xD

You're welcome :3
*sorry for the first chapters being very short, it was my very very very first fanfic*
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No problem. I'm lazy anyway. cx
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Chapter 21: Haunted House

"Don't you think we need rest? We hadn't slept for 2 days, we were fighting evil and stuff.." said Meifee and yawned. Lillithia saw... Dave. "Hey, Dave.. We're pretty tired, can we sleep in your house? There aren't hotels around..."
"I don't think so.... But you can go to my colleague's house, which is next door!" He gave the keys.
"Thanks! Let's go!" cheered Foxie J. They had no idea that this house was owned by a teacher... who's dead. "Ahh. Love the smell of fresh... lavenders?" said Shard when he entered the house first. "Good for..."
"Shh! Don't say offsprings, please." Foxie hissed.
"Off... spri-"
"SHHHHH!"
"Okay.. Calm down a notch."
Suddenly, someone growled. "Foxie? Are you angry at me?" asked Shard.
"What? NO!"
"Then why are you growling?"
"It was-wasn't m-me!" stammered Foxie. The dark secret was revealed. "I heard it too...." Renisha shivered. She got pushed to a wall by a mysterious power. The same power which growled.. Noell noticed that the ceiling has.. cracks. There were more and more every moment. "I think that it's that dead teacher who's angry because we came in the house as intruders!" The invisible power pushed a vase from the shelf. It fell on Cymru's head and he fainted.
"Holy Dragostea.. We need to get rest before that spirit gets it!" Meifee raged. She was swinging her sword all over the place when suddenly... something very strange happened. The cracks dissappeared and the madness kind of stopped when a ghost humouse appeared.
"Who are you?" asked Shard, trying not to sound surprised.
"My name is Ursula, and I am related to the owner who is dead. Paula! The teacher from the Shaman School!"
"Are you her friend or something?"
"I am her friend and I died the same way she died."
"Let me guess. Killed by spirits?"
"Yes."
Renisha shivered. "What's going on anyway?"
"A spirit with pure darkness had infested this house and attacked me at first. My destiny betrayed me."
"And is the spirit still here?"
"Yes. I hope you'll help me to stop it, and I'll join you."
A few minutes later, Ursula joined the team and the spirit was stopped. "Finally, we can get some rest!" cheered Cymru.
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I LOVE THIS PART a dit :
"Ahh. Love the smell of fresh... lavenders?" said Shard when he entered the house first. "Good for..."
"Shh! Don't say offsprings, please." Foxie hissed.

This made me giggle and blush out loud
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Ejaffa a dit :


This made me giggle and blush out loud

#shox strikes back!
Now with a lavender smell! xD
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Anniebuscus a dit :


#shox strikes back!
Now with a lavender smell! xD

-inhales so much lavender-
I think I'm high on lavender now
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Ejaffa a dit :


-inhales so much lavender-
I think I'm high on lavender now

You made my day.. xD

Paula a dit :
What the fudge. I don't have an air freshener that smells like lavenders. And I don't have real lavenders.

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Paranormal activity level: #SHOX AND LAVENDERS AND STUFF
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Irl I hate lavender.

*Hides in bushes*
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Shardpixel a dit :
Irl I hate lavender.

*Hides in bushes*

......there's some lavender smell here too >:D
This is the 190th post and none from those 190 posts were moderated... \(*-*)/ *praises sentinels*
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good job.
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Frostylies a dit :
good job.
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Thanks! (\(^_^)/)
Chapter 22 might be next week, so stay tuned for a sneak peek!
EDIT: No sneak peek for now. :/
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Chapter 22: Exiled Shaman

The next day, Ursula had told her real secret of what she was. "Before the radiation wave had approached, I was a shaman. A shaman of a famous tribe called "Wondrous Knights"."
"Then what happened when Enes had became a shaman?" asked Renisha.
"By the way, Enes was my rival. After the radiation wave, our tribe was greatly affected. So I couldn't control the madness after of what happened and Enes became the shaman."
Noell decided to speak too. "What about the guards? Chio and the others?"
"Well, before Enes was the shaman, Chio and others weren't guards, they had a higher rank then. They were shaman's helpers. After they were demoted to guards, Enes ordered them to kill me. With spirits."
Shard gasped. "It's... cruel.... And when you and Enes became rivals?"
"Since we were kids. I was more intelligent than him and he was very jealous.."
Suddenly, the door started to break. It was Enes, who broke the door.
"URSULA! WHY ARE YOU HERE WITH THOSE BASTARDS?!"
Foxie J said: "First of all, you were kind to us when we came to your kingdom. So PLEASE don't call us bastards.
Second of all, why do you have to follow Ursula anyway? You ordered your guards to kill her, now you got to follow her even when she's dead?"
"Chio! Attack!" Enes gave an order to Chio.
"W-why? We were good friends..... And now you want them to stay away from Ursula?"
"I got to agree with Chio. Ursula is a nice person. She's not dangerous, even if she's a spirit who takes place in Paula's house." hissed Cymru.
"Who is Paula anyway?" asked Enes.
"She's my friend and a teacher. But she's dead now. Slain by spirits. But please, Enes..." Ursula whimpered. "....stop it. I was exiled and forgotten..."
"I know that feel." Meifee hugged Ursula. "I was an exiled warrior too."
"Don't make me use my fists, Enes. Get out." Lillithia hissed.
"You're not a queen to me. You can't tell me what to do." said Enes.
"She can. She's a part from a better tribe in which Dragostea is the shaman. She controls the Enlighted Force, but you? Who do you think you are? You don't control any forces!" Ursula was so mad, that she could take Shard's blade and slash down Enes and his all tribe. "You can't tell her and her mates and even me of what to do!"
Cymru and Meifee transformed into their valkyrie forms. "Come on, challenge us, valkyries!"
"Uh... oh.. Okay, okay, I will get out. Chio, come with me." Enes grabbed Chio's hand and pulled him. They both got away to their kingdom.
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Chapter 23: Reversed

After leaving the house, Lillithia saw a feather falling from the sky. It was glowing with a light and a radiant glow. Shard wanted to take the feather. He thought: "Is it a sign? A sign of saints?" When Shard touched the feather, there was a ghostly explosion which didn't do any harm physically, but....
Shard was reversed! "Who are you? What are you looking at?" he asked evilly.
"It's us, Shard.. W-what happened to you?" squealed Foxie J. She saw a blood red and a demonic glow in his eyes. Ghostly flames of darkness were in his hands.
"I was the one who sucked out the feelings of Enes the king. His soul is wandering wild... IN HELL!" Shard's voice echoed as it sounded creepy. "You're my next victims." Shard laughed evilly and pointed his blade at everyone.
"You bastard.. You traitor... Even though Enes was my rival, you shouldn't have to drain his feelings and energy." Ursula hissed.
"I can do anything. Darkosteu had given me pure power of evil..." said Shard.
His horns were replaced by a mask. A mask that looked like one of those which the dark warriors of Hell wore.
Hailey growled. "How about you should eat grass, bastard?!"
"Ha ha! Grass? It's no match from my Darksaber Force!"
"Then how about... light?" Lillithia had an evil grin on her face. "How about that?"
"Light..."
Meifee called someone. "Sola!" It was Sola, one of the guardians of Dragostea.
"Well.... isn't that one of those sly..."
"No."
"Nevermind." Sola scoffed and pulled out a sword. She slashed down Shard.
Soon he finally remembered of what happened to him and what was the reason of sole dark possession...
"Shard.. Finally you're okay. Never knew the light as the element of Sola would be equally strong as our love..." Foxie hugged Shard.

To envision stuff better, here's reversed Shard:

http://i.imgur.com/P32oxAR.png
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Anniebuscus a dit :
Chapter 23: Reversed

After leaving the house, Lillithia saw a feather falling from the sky. It was glowing with a light and a radiant glow. Shard wanted to take the feather. He thought: "Is it a sign? A sign of saints?" When Shard touched the feather, there was a ghostly explosion which didn't do any harm physically, but....
Shard was reversed! "Who are you? What are you looking at?" he asked evilly.
"It's us, Shard.. W-what happened to you?" squealed Foxie J. She saw a blood red and a demonic glow in his eyes. Ghostly flames of darkness were in his hands.
"I was the one who sucked out the feelings of Enes the king. His soul is wandering wild... IN HELL!" Shard's voice echoed as it sounded creepy. "You're my next victims." Shard laughed evilly and pointed his blade at everyone.
"You bastard.. You traitor... Even though Enes was my rival, you shouldn't have to drain his feelings and energy." Ursula hissed.
"I can do anything. Darkosteu had given me pure power of evil..." said Shard.
His horns were replaced by a mask. A mask that looked like one of those which the dark warriors of Hell wore.
Hailey growled. "How about you should eat grass, bastard?!"
"Ha ha! Grass? It's no match from my Darksaber Force!"

WORK IN PROGRESS

To envision stuff better, here's reversed Shard:

Badass Shardeh.

Even if it's not actually Shardeh.

Shard gets possessed a lot.

Wellthen.

(ThatpictureremindsmeofSlate)
Ejaffa
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Shardpixel a dit :


Badass Shardeh.

Even if it's not actually Shardeh.

Shard gets possessed a lot.

Wellthen.

(ThatpictureremindsmeofSlate)

Oh yeah it does actually.
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Anyways, chapter 23 is ready.
*can't decide what to write in the next chapter*
God dammit.
God.
Dammit.
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PROTAGONIST DEaTH
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Galaxycake a dit :
PROTAGONIST DEaTH

I told you before - protagonist death will be in the last chapters...
Since I'll have 50 chapters in total, I am almost halfway there...
So I don't think it's the right time for protagonist death...
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The death shall come, this is your 200th page warning
(LOL)
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